Quinn & Marconi's partner dynamic cracks me up! Both are a mess!
This story reminds me of Criminal Minds, The Closer and the first Bad Boys. . .all of which were spectacularly scripted and thus FANatically enjoyed by me- Veiled Threat has joined the ranks of my favored crime dramas!
I love analyzing the suspects and surmising who could possibly be the killer and although Casey is creepy...why does Byron run me the wrong way?
Fantastic job!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much..I often wonder if I'm moving in the right direction with this story. Your encouragement keeps me writing :-)
[Report This]Date: September 29 2013 05:56 pm
Quinn makes my teeth itch and my left eye twitch! Mallory needs to be fired she'll be the who lets a killer in because he's cute and dressed nice. I am going to have to reread the begining I felt like I am missing something. For instance, who is the dude watching her? Please don't take as long to update.
Author's Response:
Are itchy teeth a good thing? I hope things aren't confusing...Nikki is being watched by the killer. Who that is though, I'm not quite ready to reveal ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2013 04:05 pm