Please finish this story!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 14 2014 05:14 pm
Wow...Very good update.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 05:36 pm
I don't think that Nikoli has thought this thing out clearly. How long is him defeating his enemies going to take and the longer it takes the longer Caroline will have to be in the basement where it is tramatic for her and may even turn her mind. Then what will he do then when his humanity as he calls her has lost her own.
Great update hope to see more soon.
Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 01:59 pm
Wow I can't believe he did that to her
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 06:36 pm
Nikoli is coo coo for coca puffs!! Is he trying to break Carolina? Putting her in the basement where it's dark and knowing that she is afraid is torture. He is treating her as a terrorist would and that is evil and morally bankrupt. Yet he claims to love her, I am not convinced of his love. ON top of that he is continuing to lie to Seyurn about his mate Suyun. So stupid!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2013 07:39 am