I want Rory to hit Scar with a ridge hand to her throat! That ho makes my teeth itch and trigger finger twitch! How long as Rory rented a room from Kyra and why ? I am not fan of Kyra and if Turk is cheating on her I say that is just deserts. After all Turk was on a date with Rory when she stole him. Rory didn't have feelincs for Turk like that but it was still wrong.
Author's Response:
LMAO! LOL. I love your comments so hard!!! You're great. Yes, so much drama. It will only continue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:30 pm
How could you leave the chapter right there? Cliffhancers. Are evil! Whar the hell is Dark Affinity? What is Vic besides fine as hell? Wolf shifter? Why does not realize that Scar wants him like a pitt bull wants a pork chop sandwich? This was good but please update soon as you are killing me.
Author's Response:
I know. I know! But there's more up now and all is revealed :D
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:15 pm
okay i understand that she is different. Nothing wrong with that. As for the monkey hey that is a given. I an weary of guys that ask.girls that are not their types out on dates. He clearly is not her type but she has her reasons.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:07 pm
Okay I was hooked before but now i am hooked line and sunk.
Author's Response:
haha! Yeah!!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 02:52 pm
A change never hurts. So far i like it.
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 02:51 pm
I really like Rory & Vic. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I love them too :)
Reviewer: Apple Signed
[Report This]Date: August 24 2013 01:38 pm
That was good!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Reviewer: ace Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 05:55 am
I LOVE THIS! You have to keep going please update. This is one of my new favorites.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! :D
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 05:40 am
Scarlett is cray cray and needs to have her teeth knocked out!! I know that violence isn't the answer but sometimes it just makes you feel better. Have I mentioned that I have Kyra? Why did she turn off Rory's lights? Kyra and Scarlett each make my teeth itch. Vic is strange in a stakler type way but I like him anyway.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I won't lie. I hate Scarlett :P Kyra turned off the power because she didn't immediately see Rory paid her electric. I must have not added that. Sorry! And Vic can stalk me all day! :D
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:27 am
Vic is very persistent, but why? Who is the dude that was watching her? I really don't like Kyra, she annoys me . That giggle that she emits when she is with Turk it makes me to slap the taste out of her mouth!!
Author's Response:
Haha! I love your comments :-)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2013 03:22 am
Love love love!!! Keep it comin'!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Diamond Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 11:53 pm
I reaaaally like this story so far. It's becoming quite addicting and holds my interest. A couple things bug me about Rory though. I get that she's been through a lot, even though her background is fuzzy, but her attitude is a bit much. I think if Vic would've said or done something a bit more then it wouldve justified her reaction. Right now I don't really empathize with her even though I really want to. She's growing on me though, it's nice to see her opening up a little bit. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
-p2p-
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the feedback!!! Glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: partial2passion Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 09:40 pm
Interesting story...I really don't get Rory thinking Vic is a jerk. He definitely didn't come off that way for me. I can't wait to see what happens in the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I've amended the summary. I think it reads a little better now. I think he more infuriates her than anything, lol
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 04:47 pm
More! I'm so intrigued.
Author's Response:
Eep! Thanks! I plan on getting more up today :)
Reviewer: OrangesatHome Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 06:03 am
Wow Kyra is not a good friend she just usrupred Rory's date with Turk. Turk has just put himself on my list he may be fine that was bogus. How will it take for Kyra to realize that Rory is gone? Was that Vic, Turk or Kyra calling Rory after she left? This is good, more please!!
Author's Response:
Yes, unfortunately Rory got stuck with Vic, lol. We'll see who was calling her soon... ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 04:23 am
I love Rory and Kyra they and Turk has my heart already!!
Author's Response:
Yeah! I'm so glad :D
Author's Response:
Yeah! I'm so glad :D
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 04:09 am
Good looking cast!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 01:59 am
Woop Woop! Blue hair, chocolate skin, and wands for fingers? Rory is a woman after my own heart.
Author's Response:
Eep! My first review :D Thanks for stopping by. Rory is rather interesting... for sure!
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 12:41 am
I love the men in this story!! Hella fine!!
Author's Response:
I must admit I spend far too much time drooling over their pics, lol
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2013 12:33 am