Are you going to finish the story? Cannot wait for the next update. :)
Reviewer: Somsom Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 03 2018 04:18 am
Great read and I hope you finish the story.
Reviewer: Comqlicated Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 28 2017 03:09 pm
I think this is a greate read, I look forward to more! This is not merly about rape. So many women are in meaningless, emotionless relationsips because they fear being alone.
Reviewer: Melinda K. Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2017 06:18 am
Love the story!!! It has me at the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. Apparently it' not everyone's cup of tea but I love how it is unfolding. Please don't change the characters!!!
Reviewer: avid reader Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 04 2013 10:45 pm
update QUICK because I'm hooked
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 12:12 am
Oh my how I enjoyed reading this can't wait for the updates I have a feeling that he might not have known that she was still a virgin,but that goes without saying.i really do enjoy it don't take too long we wants more :)
Author's Response:
you are possible, maybe...definately right actually, and I will try and explain in the next chapter when she interacts with Liam. You will get to see a hint of who he really is, don't know if that will change your opinions about him though. I am glad you are enjoying yourself, that makes me very happy. Hope I won't disappont!!!
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2013 01:49 am
I can't help but eagerly read your updates. I just can't get over how he viciously raped her and now she is attracted to him. How did they meet? How does Liam make his living? How is the brother doing and will Liam meet him?
Author's Response:
First of all, thanks for reading and reviewing.
wow, so many questions? Well she was attracted to him from the very first time she saw him. I will write about the first time she met him as I go along, just remember this is in her POV, the first time she sees him might not be the first time he sees her. What does Liam do? How is the brother doing? Will Liam meet him? Sorry lady, spoilers!!!!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2013 06:08 pm
I'm intrigued and can't wait to read more as this story unfolds.
Reviewer: katie Signed
[Report This]Date: October 27 2013 04:29 pm
Will she be strong enough to resist him this time? Or at least call him on the rape?
Author's Response:
You will find out on the next chapter, keep a look out :)
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 27 2013 09:32 am
I ask myself how much can she give of herself even for her brother's life? This stranger dangles her brother's life over her head in order for her to do his bidding. What was his motivation in the first place? To have a virgin? To use someone's love for the only family member they have in order to control them and use them? Maybe he feels that since he 'bought' her that she is nothing more than property. Her tears, her shaking body, her saying 'no' meant nothing to him because the purchase had been made. Now he's summoned her to dinner like it's some sort of date and when she resists, he dangles her brother's life before her eyes once more in order to get her to comply.
How does a character like this get redeemed? Maybe there is no redemption for him. Certainly I can't see any type of meaningful relationship forming between them but perhaps that's not your goal anyway.
It pains me to see her suffering like this and I fear that she's not going to mentally be able to continue this 'deal' and end up with some sort of nervous breakdown behind it.
It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Hi...
wow, you write a lot and I am so so so so plus infinity so please that my story is generating this much interest from you, especially from you, I visited your page and I see you have written a lot of stories and I just finished reading one stereotypically yours, which I loved. I pulled an all night and have yet to review but I will be getting right on that soon. Point being I am so happy someone of your caliber with so much talent likes what I've written so far and hope not to dissappoint.
Thanks so much and please keep reviewing.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2013 12:33 pm
I don't understand why and how people are lost. The story just begun and its settling into its plot or climax. I'd wish y'all would be patient and enjoy the ride!..Anyway to the author, NICE. I love your style of writing. Hurry back with more!!!
Author's Response:
well thank you for saying so, and thanks for the review
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 09 2013 08:52 am
Very good! Patiently waiting for an update!!
Author's Response:
As you wish :)
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 10:49 pm
The pace was good. The prose were fluid and visual. I thought it was good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for saying so, the first chapter was meant to grab your attention so I am glad you are interested.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 05:18 am
Please continue!!!!
Author's Response:
As you wish :)
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2013 04:09 am
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2013 05:24 am
Great story! please continue. I'm anxious to see where you take this. Don't take too liong to update, pretty please:)
Reviewer: Sherry Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 04 2013 09:21 pm
Well, I for one would like to know what's going on. So my vote is, more please (-;
Author's Response:
Well your vote counts, so as you wish ;)
Reviewer: Maroongal Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2013 06:42 pm
more please...i can actually envision this. can't wait for a backstory, so no one shot, okay? promise me no one shot!!!! i need more.
Author's Response:
Just call me genie because I am making your wishes come true ;)
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2013 05:29 am
What kind of man is this that would use her brother's health crisis to get some sex? Don't like that asshole at all!
Author's Response: Not a very good man, and yes since you guessed it, he is an asshole thanks for reviewing Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: September 04 2013 01:05 am
UMMM, YEAH...OWWWEEEE!!
ZanPotter? Ma'am, Sir, Ma'am?
Ummm...don't do me like this and let this be a darn one-shot. My SPIRIT won't be able to handle that. I NEED for this one right here to grow and blossom into the MAGNIFICENT BEAST it was destined to become. Just keep writing and all of us will eat it up.
PLEASE NO ONE-SHOT OK?
Author's Response: LOL wow, thanks for the passion and I am ma'am for future reference Reviewer: Elizablu Signed
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 11:10 pm
oh my godness!! what is happening? who are these people? i saw a glimpse there..whoever this "man" is, he wants this woman. i need more lady! awesome opening chapter!! cannot wait for the updates!
Author's Response: Thanks for loving this chapter and you might be right about this 'man', but you will find out that nothing is easier about him so read and enjoy Reviewer: Aleta Signed
[Report This]Date: September 03 2013 10:56 pm
this interesting so far....i love the detailed descriptions
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :)
Reviewer: xsweetdellzx Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 05:50 pm
Great start can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 02:13 pm
Uh, dude, you can't stop there! MORE!
Author's Response:
As you wish :)
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 01:41 pm
I enjoyed reading it.So please continue.
Author's Response:
you got it dude ;)
Reviewer: blucat Signed [Report This]Date: September 03 2013 01:00 pm