I think Denise is a wimp. She isn't strong. She is reacting just as Isaac feared she would. I know she's youg, but she has a me-me-me attitude. Why would he do that to her. He had a life before her, even if she didn't. I get that her mother prostituting caused her to react badly. But she of all people should see that prostitutes are people too.
Author's Response:
True Issac did have a life before her but the past was catching up to him.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 10:37 am
I feel 4 both of them Denise has her demons he has his & both are a little insecure of them. I'm glad he finally told her now she has to process. The going to the grave yard was closure she needed kinda like him telling her about him being an escort made her think of her mom & all she went through & face a harsh reality. He needs this time too to finalize things & get things in order. Both of them still love each other just need time to clear their heads, after which they need to sit down & talk now that all the secrets are revealed, maybe get Jason in on it. Plus it's that thing called pay back for Sam & her sis.
can't wait 4 the what's coming next update
[Report This]Date: November 09 2013 07:48 am
Denise hss been through so much she needs a break. Issac is going to have to beg and not go back to the life even if she doesn't forgive him right away.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 05:36 am
Issac is nothing like her mother, Issac truly loves and would never put his hands on her. Did she ever tell Issac that her mother was ho and that she had unprotected sex and died from an AIDS related illness. As a side people never die from HIV, when they have HIV they are asymtomatic. Dead usually occurs once the disease transitions from HIV to AIDS. It is normally from an related disease. Denise don't let those ho's win by breaking up Issac. When is Issac going to quit being a male ho? Issac I hate to break it you but once you had sex with one of those women you become a ho!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reminding me about the illness just changed that. Thank you
As for Denise she knows that he would not physically hurt her but the type of work he does reminded her of her mother.
As for Issac quitting I get more into him next chapter.
Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 12:12 am
Sooo, Trish and Sam are sister's....and they share the same man? That's just nasty! What are they....sister's wives or something? That's just plain ole NASTY! People with money do some strange sh#@! Now that Isaac has told the truth, he needs to tell her everything, from the beginning! Denise, has a right to be mad, but she needs to have her rant/rave session and then move on. They need to be on 1 accord because those tricks are coming at him with both barrels blazing, and the only way their relationship will make it through this storm, they will have to have a United front!
Also, I believe that quote is from the movie titled The Notebook.
Author's Response:
Yes Trish and Sam are sisters. No nothing like sister's wives since Sam is the only one married between them.
Yay yes the quote is from The Notebook brownie points
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 09:34 am
Oh he didn't have to tell her. The tape wasn't recent.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 06:26 am
I love when there are wacky women in the story...
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 04:07 am
really, really good job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 04:06 am
love the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 04:06 am
Denise should check those hoes & Issac should grovel with diamonds.
Author's Response:
Yes Issac Will grovel
Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 10:57 pm
I'm liking it. Maybe do an entire chapter in each person's voice instead of just a paragraph. I'd love to get deep inside of what each of them are thinking.
I'm looking forward to reading more!
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Author's Response:
Thank you. I am goiing to get inside of ther heads for the following chapters .
Keep reading thank you for your feedback.
Reviewer: Annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 10:39 pm
Wow loved it.Sam fickle self is so spoiled & selfish hope this back fires on her did she forget she's married & I'm sure the escort service has a way of protecting their workers seeing as so many high paying customers. Wow he didnt hesitate just told her the truth & then blurted out what his real job was. great way to tell her by the way. Now he has to explain the when why how of everything sure Denise will understand not like he's been hiding her & he did quit plus when they met Sam he introduced her as his girlfriend so he has that going 4 him but can't wait to see how You spin this next update please.
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Author's Response:
Issac does acknowledge Denise but she really put her faith in him. Yes he has a lot of explaining to do. Thank you so much reading keep enjoying.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 10:34 pm
I am trying to figure why these woman who supposedly have everything want to force this man to continue to see them. They were paying for sex, they were having an affair with Issac neither were they in relationships with Issac. So what is their major malfunction?
Issac you had ample opportunity to tell Denise about your occupation. You had to realize that you time was running out and one of those nutso ho's would ruin your joy. Denise seems more pissed than hurt right now, but I know that the hurt will come.
How could you end the chapter right there? I am dying to read her respone to, "I am a male escort." SO good!!
Author's Response:
Trish and Sam have everything but it's not enough for them but I will get into that later. As for Issac he had so many opportunites yes.
I had to do it lol. Thank you so much I love your reviews.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 10:24 pm
She is going to feel stupid when she finds out about him. He is breaking trust, he should just tell her and let the chips fall. I see bad things ahead.
Reviewer: schism724 Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 08:23 pm
Well I think she should go with her gut she knows he's a good guy & now the one she's in love with that's why she gave him her VCard now it's up to him to trust in their love & that she'll understand b/c he's thinking on quitting anyways.
He's already told her the secret of his past with his family now he got to tell her this but he better not wait to long b/c that Sam is crazy jealous & that would be ammo in her hand & he really don't want or need that.
Update soon
[Report This]Date: November 07 2013 04:40 pm
She is going to kill him. She gave up her virginity and when she finds out the truth it's going to be on like dinky kong.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2013 04:00 am
I feel bad because his spetm donor was monumental asshole, but yhe sympathy eill fome to an end the k onger hw withholds the truth about his job. One of those women could ruin his relationship with Denise. I am actually surprised that she trust Isaac this quickly especially with how she grew up. Isaac don't let your guard down those ho's bear watching.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2013 11:57 pm
I told you one of his tricks was going to throw a monkey wrench in his plan! He better come clean and quick, because this Samantha chick is going to worse than a bad case of jock itch!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 05:12 am
Sam is crazy and possessive over a man that you pay for sex. That ho is trouble with a capital T. What is wrong with these women, is Issac's dick that good that makes a woman loose her mind? I could see Sam making Denise disappear if Issac doesn't continue sexing that ho up. Issac man up and tell the Denise before she finds from someone else.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 04:44 am
Hell to the Yeah! He needs to come clean before Trish or another one of them tricks, ruin his good thing! Because I have a feeling his life is about to take a crazy turn!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 03:54 am
These women are desperate. I hope Denise finds out the truth soon.
Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 01:26 am
Actually these women are ridiculous, you pay for him to escort you and have sex with you and you think you are almighty. The whole business is just that business and no emotion, why are you getting that involved. There are others. Anyway, I actually can understand Isaac's reticence to tell Denise especially after her full disclosure. I would be concerned if she would be able to handle it, despite the face she shows today. Then when he has tried to be honest before he was called names and laughed at. He is in love and that would crush him if she didn't understand and left or returned to cutting herself because of him. I'm not perfect but I would probably ride and die shaggy's theme " It wasn't me."
Author's Response:
Girl no you didn't bring Shaggy into this. Yeah his situation is a rough.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 12:24 am
Yesss! I feel he needs to feel somewhat guilty shit! I mean he is going to school so its not like he wont be able to get a job and I believe Denise is understanding she is so kindhearted why wouldnt she try to atleast understand him and where he is coming from ahhh I'm excited for the next chapter
Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 07:02 pm
It's time for Issac to come clean about his lifestyle. Denise deserves to know fully what she is getting involved with. I don't trust Trish, I can see her hiring a P.I. to find out about Issac's relationship. Trish is trick and bears watching. Issac you can't that ho! Kick being a ho to the curb. You have made your money now let it go.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 03:49 pm