Ohh she has been through a lot. I hope she doesn't regress when she finds out. Isaac needs to start talking and walk away from that life because I don't trust his previous client not to sabotage him so she can get him back.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed
[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 02:25 pm
Oh I like these two but she is going to be so hurt when she finds out about his job. Why can't he get a different job and is he sleeping with these women?
Author's Response:
He makes a lot of money escorting so he got sucked in. He does sleep with the women but for the moment that has stopped since Denise is in the picture.
Thanks for reading I love your work
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 02:07 pm
Now that Denise has come clean, Isaac should also before thetwo of them run into one of his "clients" on the street and his cover is blown.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 12:55 pm
Good start. Glad to have you here on the Chamber. It's a great place to work on our craft.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I am such a fangirl of your work.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 12:37 pm
MAY I HAVE SOME MORE, PLEASE?
I am sad to know he got into the business, because of his cheating ass dad, but I am glad to know he put a whoop-asswhoop-ass on his daddy for cheating on his momma. That alone deserves a 10!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 04:50 am
Wow, he better tell her soon! She deserves to know the truth, so if she decides to stay it will be her choice and not a lie.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2013 04:40 am
To the end....with a wedding, babies, a house, Isaac with a real job! And love, love, love!!!!! Of course, they will have to move away because of his past......but they will work it out!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 11:31 pm
To the end....with a wedding, babies, a house, Isaac with a real job! And love, love, love!!!!! Of course, they will have to move away because of his past......but they will work it out!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 11:31 pm
His dad is quite the asshole!! I am so glad that he beat him until he was unconscious. How his brother Evan be so accepting of their fathers treatment of thier mother? I am just so disgusted by men who treat their sick wives to the Eward's therapy. YOu know cheat on their sick spouse with a younger ho and have a child with said ho.
Author's Response:
Issac's dad has some serious problems and men like that are horrible.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 05:10 am
My hope is that Issac quits now that he is in an relationship with Denise. If not Denise will hear a message from of his clients and then it would be real ugly. Does he use condoms when he's sexing up his clients?
Author's Response:
Yes safe sex always. We will get more into his work.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 05:02 am
I am enjoying the read and I like the flow in the last chapter, it moved like a movie.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Keep enjoying
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 04:56 am
Issac laid it all out and got his woman.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2013 04:53 am
Very sweet story.Love the characters.Waiting for more.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 09:37 am
Very sweet story.Love the characters.Waiting for more.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 09:37 am
I really like this, keep going
Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 06:06 am
Me likey! More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Yess more lol
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 02:35 am
I like the story but it seems like you are writing in third person for some reason. I had a hard time reading without stopping.. But good story. I like the characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedabck. I am just getting a feeling for different styles so the next chapters will change. Keep reading and thanks.
Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2013 02:09 am
I'm liking this! More please!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 10:38 pm
Me likey, that guy is gorgeous! !! Oh, I am also like Amber Riley. They are off to go start and I am lookinflg to to reading how you move their relationship forward. Pacing in a story is very important so don't drag it out but don't have them havibg sex in the next chapter either. Thank you for sharing your talent it is much appreciated.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I appreciate your feedback. Definitely pacing but things will heat up naturally.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 10:35 pm
More please. Very sweet.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly. Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2013 10:29 pm