What wonderful story between to lost souls.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 05:20 pm
I love this story. I feel so sorry for Lance and hope that he can come to terms with what happened to his family.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 12:41 pm
Loving this story.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 08:00 am
Can't Wait! Poor Lance!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 05:32 am
Poor Lance, so his wife suffered from depression, did she kill her son then herself? That was extremely selfish if she did. Why did his friends desert him when he needed their support? They weren't real friends then were they? Don't harden heart, you need Lance and Lance needs you.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 02:34 am
Hmmmm....I love this story, but I'm gonna guess...she killed herself and the kid. Just throwing that out there. Not intentionally, like she needed to go out and get something was under the influence and not paying attention and maybe they had a car wreck...okay I'm goinna stop my imagination is running away with me. Can't wait until the next update!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2013 02:17 am
EXCELLENT!!!! I love this story. Nina is such a sweet soul. Yes, I think she should back off with Lance. What she is doing is incredibly nice, BUT Lance has to do something for himself and even though he has issues, his hasty dismisal of her was not necessary. You can gently get rid of someone without being rude. I can understand his hesitance and maybe even shame, but being rude to her was unnecessary. He's right, she does not know him, but he knows those meals she has been bringing everyday. Again, I am sure he would tell anyone, 'I didn't ask her for anything, she didn't have to bring me meals,' and this is true, but he still took the meals. So, Nina leaving Lance alone for now is what is best, I think. If I had beem through what she had, Lance would not have to tell me twice either. I would not get set-up again for unnecessary pain just because I could not leave well enough alone.
Now in Lance's defense I do not think he would do that to Nina, but Nina does not know this because like he said she does not know him and vice versa. I would be grateful for him helping me and I am sure Nina is, but I would back off of Lance. She is a kind soul, but those are usually the ones who get taken advantage of the most and again, I do not think Lance would knowingly hurt Nina, but she does not know this so leaving him be is what is best for right now. Let Lance make the next move, the ball is literally in his court. He has to want better for himself. His family is gone and that has to be a horrible feeling, but they would not want him living like this. He has to want better and if he doesn't I hope Nina leaves him alone for good, because she does not need someone who will bring her down and who is feeling sorry for themselves. Like I said, he has had a bad past so know one really knows what they will do and how they will cope, one can only hope and pray, if they can, that it is not like so many other people who end up homeless and worse. More please!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 04:16 pm
thanks for the update, but i would love to know what happen to lance before he became homeless.
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 01:40 am
Awwwwwww that was so sweet what lance did for her. I like this story so far ;)
Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 01:06 pm
i LOVE THIS STORY. Obviously he was embarrassed by her seeing him in his situation. Both of them are hurting people and I can't wait for something to happen that will throw those two together again.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 01:04 pm
Ok. Yeah. I like where you're going! Nina peeping Lance, hehehe.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:19 pm
Lance is yummy.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 07:48 am
Fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 07:10 am
Both Nina and Lance are holding into the past like it's their lifeline to them surviving. One doesn't believe he deserves to live. While the other one is trying hard not to make the same mistakes again and in the process she has stopped living as well. These two came I to each other's lives for a reason. And even though Nina doesn't want to get hurt or taken advantage of she can't help but to care about Lance. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 07:04 am
lol, is right. she's a peeper. That creased me up. Is Lance getting all pissy because he's got some feelings for Nina? And after her episode with that Jared person, she has a right to be skittish.
Loved this chapter. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 06:43 am
No you are AWESOME! Nina is sweet and gaurding her heart- I do not blame her! Lance has some issus to deal with as well hey please keep it up you are a force to be reckon with!!!
Reviewer: pattyb Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 05:49 am
She ain't finished trying to help Lance. they have spooked each other with how much they care. Lance is fine specimen!!! I can't wait to learn more about Lance. Nina and Lance can be the balm for each others hurts.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 05:40 am
please continue! you are starting off just as good as your last story! who are you? Why have you kept this talent from us? LOL you are good I love your last story and this one looks just as promising! please continue!!
Reviewer: pattyb Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 01:52 am
What happened to his family? Who broke her heart? More please, more of them together.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 08:53 pm
I like the story but I'm a bit confused. They'd never met prior to Nina's Good Samaritan offerings, right? Some of the wording in different places lend to misinterpretation of their acknowledgment to one another, at least for me it does.
Author's Response:
They never were introduced to each other until her attack. No names or anything like that just her lending him a hand prior to that. So no they don't know each other.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 08:33 pm
Beautiful cast
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 08:25 pm
mooooore!!!!!!!!!!!! wuuuuuuuuuuut!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 07:41 am
on the next chapter i would love for you to get into detail about what happen to lance. he sounds like a sweet guy, i wonder what happen to his wife and kid who killed them.
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 04:33 am
Interesting turn of events, I glad that Lance tried to support Nina in a way that would t crowd her. It's truly a shame that Lance doesn't think more of himself because of his family being dead and him still alive. The question remains why is he punishing himself in which he is not really living but is alive. Looking forward to learning more about the demons that haunt him. And what secrets does Nina have. Another great chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 02:20 am
How did his family die? Was his driving drunk ? That waitress worked my last nerve!!! I love Lance!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 02:09 am