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Title: Chapter 9

I love the update.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 02:16 am
Title: Chapter 9

Noooooo, Don't leave me hanging ! What is it ? Pleeeeease .

 

 Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 9

After effects very interesting.  I wonder what she found when she moved the covers down.

So she has experience with being bruised before and apparently they are not to pleasant memories.

I wonder where Steve got off to.  He hit and ran huh or maybe he is downstairs in her living room and kitchen or after he sobbered up he did leave.  I can say safely that it is not his weekend to have the kids.  LOL!

Nice update...more please.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 8

It is not the sex that is creepy. It is the fact that this man is a complete stranger, and not just in a club or something, but found out where she lives or followed her and is now in her house. It is a sexy story, but the stalker part is terrifying.

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 01:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I've liked this story since the first chapter.  I like your female character in terms of her insecurities, her self-placating practices and her inner dialogue.  Steve sounds aesthetically pleasing and his character is definitely aggressive. 

I though your sex scenes were sexy.  Some days you want tender and some days you want high aggression. 

I'm looking forward to what happens next as Steve's character unspools a bit more perhaps.

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 8

What he giving it to her ass

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 03:57 am
Title: Chapter 8

I didn't think it was creepy lol you just have to have a taste for reluctance/daddy doms/ bdsm and your all good

 Reviewer: KayMay Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 8

The verdict is still out on Steve I am still waiting for the other shoe to fall so to speak.

Can't wait to see what more you have in store for Jodi and Steve like Jodi said it's just the weekend and doesn't look as though she is going to get any sleep anytime soon.

Thank you for sharing.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 08:07 am
Title: Chapter 7

Steve is a bit bossy isn't he.  Jodi on the fence on if she wants him there are to go home huh?

She about to take a snooze on his ass though that is if he lets her.

Thank you for the update off to read the next one.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 07:07 am
Title: Chapter 7

STEVE MAYBE FINE BUT I DON'T KNOW 7F I LIKE HIM ANYMORE. ALPHA MALE IS ONE THING BUT STEVE IS ALPHA ASSHOLE!  With being said I would mind a man that fine putting lotion on my body.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

Just...wow.  It took me a minute to get  into the story, but now that I am...I can't wait for thenext chapter.  Thanks so much for the new story!

 Reviewer: Seraphwalker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 18 2014 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 6

He found her house(Which he seems EXTREMELY to familiar with it). Stops by during the wee hours of the morning. Works her nerve while getting her hot & bothered. Then he let's her know "what that mouth do" from the jump. You've done it, you've got my full attention.

 Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 07:13 pm
Title: Chapter 6

This is so weird that it wasn't sexy to me. But I still like it . Jodi should be scared because Steve is an odd one but then again so is she.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 04:39 am
Title: Chapter 6

That was so HOT, I need some ICE to cool me off.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 6

...well! This makes me want to drink. Now where is that vodka?

Keep going. Keep going.

 Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2014 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 6

Woooooooooow !!!! That's all just woooooooow ! Now I need a cold shower & a breathing treatment .

 Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Damn, that was hot!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Woo! Steve is a little psycho and Jodi definitely lonely, but I like that they are not "normal"

 Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 01:53 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I'm very happy you decided to put this story here. Because we will be waiting a week for an update and that is if they decide to published it. You have my attention, what and who is he? why is he so into with her? 😏

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 12:08 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Well damn Steve you a bit creepy but you apparently can put a sista out with your cunnilingus skills.

He seems way to farmiliar with her home has he been watching her for a long time and decided to finally make a move? Again creepy almost supernatural creepy if you ask me but time shall tell.  I wonder how much he had to drink of an alcoholic beverage or was that his liqued courage to talk to Jodi?

Girl is gone she has been without for 10yrs damn I know what it is to be lonely but that is out there for real well if Steve has his way he is about to take care of that quick like and a hurry.

Thank you for the update...loved the chapter can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 11:06 am
Title: Chapter 6

Damn is all I have to say lol

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2014 07:37 am
Title: Chapter 1

The creepy is killing the sexy for me... Unless this is a dream...

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Is Steve a stalker? You know it's always the sexy ones hehehe.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 5

He foumd out wherr she lived, but how? That's creepy!! More pleasw!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 05:43 am
Title: Chapter 5

Okay a bit creepy I keep waiting for the pop-up surprise that they know each other and this is just a role play of theirs.

She has let a man that she has seen before in a local grocery store met him the night that he just happens to pop-up @ her residence @ 12 midnight no doubt.  She lets him in again not knowing him at 12 something at night.  She only asks herself how he knows where she lives and there seems to be no warning bells going off in her head because she is so lonely.  He could be a predator that has just been watching her and waiting because he can smell the desperation just warfing off of her. REALLY!

I understand that being lonely can be mind debilitating sometimes but really I need my girl to think about what's going on. 

Your question: Would you do this if you were lonely?  My answer: I would have to say HELL NO presently but loneliness makes you do some crazy things and she is 45yrs old two years older then me.  No kids and doesn't look like a prospect of a piece of man that is if you don't include Steve who comes to her home @ 12 something in the morning to get a piece of ass and we all know that is what he is there for.

Great update.  Keep it coming I am interested to see what Jodi will do next.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 04:59 am


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