Areena posing as a maid was a good plan. She's free, but what now? Does she have money or a place to stay? How will she survive now that she's on her own. Is she safe? Her father is a douche canoe. He probably has enemies who would love a go at Areena. Can't wait to see what happens.
These are all good questions and will be answered soon :)Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 06:27 pm
Areena's father is definitely suspect. Why would he want his daughter to marry such a vile person. And the focus on the Duke's money? Hmm. She better run like the wind. You're off to a great start.
Thank you for reading! :)Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2014 06:10 pm
Fantastic start. Her plan wasn't very clever, why would she want go back to her house when she was a prisoner there and be forced to marry the devil?
Haha, yea, I guess it wasn't, but she really doesn't have much choice in the matter - and she can't just abandon her responsibilities. Thank you for reviewing! :)Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 04:17 pm
Oooooooh! This looks good!
Thanks for reviewing :)Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 02:58 pm