Wow her mum is truly terrible. Just wow. I really hope Maggie ditches the bad news her parents haven't done a single nice thing yet...Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 19 2015 04:00 pm
Her wolf knows Maddox is her fated mate she kinda knows. What is her mom doing & what does she mean if her soul mate don't win she has to mate anyways like reallyReviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 11:18 pm
Oh my her heat,moon,period, is on Alexi is reacting to it & she's trying to learn more about him get to know him better but the attraction is not there. Glad Maddox was there to take her to the healer,calming her wolf down. She feels the mating pull. But doesn't know what it is just shes more comfortable with him. I think he knows but is just letting the process go on thats why he doesnt like the others guys around. I think her mom is seeing who her mate is. But I wonder when everyone else will her & Maddox included.Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 04:55 pm
Oh wow.... I'm glad that Maddox was there to help her. I'm starting to not like Alexi. Ass. The healer should have told her that Maddox brought her there not Alexi. I guess because she hasn't had a period all of that is built up so it hit her hard.
Everyone has their purpose lol Thank you for your review!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 03:26 am
Just hooked up to this story.
Ok, for me, all of her family, but especially her mother, is getting on my last nerve! Why speak in riddles? Just tell the girl what she needs to know! I felt Lena's frustration with that. And then to put her in her lap and hum a tune when she expresses her anger?? Really? And what is her father all about? Is he doing this for more power, or is this some form of protection for her and him? And I'm still not sure her girlfriends are much help to her in any practical way.
Maddox, yeah I think he's her soul/true mate.
And with how she's watched from the time she gets up until the time she goes to bed, how did Alexi manage to start pulling her clothes off and those two almost start a brawl?
Alexi, not sure about him yet. He seems harmless enough, but that seems kind of creepy on him. Not sure.
This will be an interesting story....
Maggie, mother is only trying to do what she thinks is for the best so she has a hard time trying to completely understand what is going on. And for Maggie duty comes before everything, right? and thank you for your review.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 03:02 am
I like Alexi and Maddox. I think it will be those two in the end. At least I hope so, I think she can't go wrong either way. It will ultimately come to who is her true soul mate but I definitely think it's one of them.
Not sure if you know, but you are posting the same chapter twice in each post. I'm not sure if that's intentional or not.
Interesting, thank you for your review. And no, I did not know that each chapter was posting more than once. I will try to fix that.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 02:58 am
That is sad. Everyone else has a choice but her. That is jacked up, to think that all these Weres are here only to mate with you because of your dad. Because of who Ezra is, I would wonder if they all would be there if he wasn't powerful like that. I hope she finds him in all of this.
It's the life that she was born into so there isn't really anything she can do about that, And who is to say that this challenge before her isn't what she needs to find herself.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 02:32 am
I find it intriguing. They are competing for her hand as a mate. What if a punk wins by cheating somehow? I think that Maddox is going to be the mate that is destined for her. It's just a matter of him winning now. LOl.
Her parents have already led her to believe her entire purpose is to be used to form alliances because of how they have raised her to be a future luna and the way they have kept her from forming bonds with people in her pack. And who is to say that someone isn't going to cheat? And if Maddox is her true mate then love will find a way, right?Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 02:19 am
Alexi, is a creep and is being really disgusting. I don't know if its because Sweetness is in heat that he is acting like that. But its not sexy at all. Maddox seems to care for her and even though she is in heat, he is being very respectful. I think Maddox is her real mate. But when it comes to Alexis, in this chapter he showed how disgusting he is, with no self control whatsoever.Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 12:26 am
This story has great potential. I think that you may need a beta-reader, though.
Thank, I think so too, I tend to not be so good with the grammatical part such as sentence structure because of the type of things that I usually am required to write are not really of this nature.Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 07:36 pm
Alexi is a creep not to mention dull and weird..Maddox is far nicer, exciting and genuinely cares about her..doesn't she know Maddox is the one who took her to the healer...hope her mom tells her...like to see him become her mate..update soon!!!
Alexi just has he ways about him. And the Madam Luna has her own motives lolReviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 06:59 pm
I read this over again and I really think that Maddox is her real mate he is very up front with his intentions & it seems her wolf is in sync with him whenever she's around him & having another unmated wolf touch her bothers him but hes in control of himself. Unlike everyone else her moon hasn't come well I think it's here now because of her being in contact with her mate he triggered it. Dag doesn't stand a chance he's got his priorities wrong Alexi is sweet & handsome but I think she only feels like he's her friend or brother but Maddox does something to her body & speaks to her wolf unlike any of the others which sets him far apart from them. Update Can't wait to read read more
Thank you! I think you just might be on the right track but does Maggie know that?Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 05:39 pm
Team Maddox!!! I seriously think they're mates. I think she'll realise soon! I also LOVEE alexi but just not for her. Does she have any ebony beautiful cousins? One that could match him? Hahaha as you can see I love interracial 😍😍 but seriously Maddox is amazeballssss with his bold statements and hot and bothered looks. Maybe he already knows that they're mates ? That's why he's so calm? Like he is sooooo calm. He's just always watching her which is so hot, her wolf reacts well to him ;)
loved it ! New fan! Defffssssss can't wait for more xx
I definitely can write a squeal for Alexi because he does deserve love too, lol. And she does have a lot of family I think that I can definitely introduce some of them in this story if I remember. And about Maddox just wait and see.Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 01:29 pm
Ok what's with her stomach wonder what that's all about. Maddox seems unbothered by all that's going on like he knows something everyone else will soon find out.
Lol, he is an Alpha after all. Maybe, the Moon Goddess has blessed him with some sort of wisdom. As for Maggie, she will soon umderstand what is happening.Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 12:46 am
Really enjoying your story so far, ChristinaElizabeth! Definitely looking forward to reading more! :)
Thank you! I am glad to hear that you are enjoying itReviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 05:34 am
Poor Lena she doubts herself glad she has her friend Paddy,sister & sister-in-law with her can't wait til the composition begins what it intales ,& how it's won & what she does once there is a winner.
Thats what family and friends are for. And this competition is not as simple as it sounds...i think your going to like this next chapter.Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 07:06 pm