Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

it  would be great if you could update! the relationship is avolving with passion, love and understanding! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I'm soo sorry I haven't updated. Been having some problems. I'm working on it right now. I promise to update soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Please, please, please update soon. I've read "Making it Hard for Me", and I fell in love with Chase then. I'm loving his story, and him and Maya together. I can't wait to see how their story progresses. I think they're so cute together.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much dgreen1980!!  I haven't forgotten about them. I'm working on one of my other stories for this week and then back to Chase's story. I apologize that it's taking so long. I'm trying to get back into my writing routine but life keeps giving other stuff to do first. I appreciate your review, thank you and will crossing my fingers get an update for you in 2 weeks.

Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 09:48 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Damn, where do I find me a Chase?! Whoo.

Author's Response:

Girrll, Get in line. LOl!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

love me some chase!



Author's Response:

YES GIRL!! Me Too!!  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 08:33 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Sooooo happy to see this update.  I love seeing Maya break out of her shell.  That's what the love of a good man will do for you!!!



Author's Response:

It sure will LadyeT!! I'm soo glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 03:44 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Chase...lol! He's such a guy's guy! To be very blunt, he's freak nasty; he loves tits, ass, and pussy! He gropes, feels and slaps the ass of his woman. Look at him! But because he can see beyond the obvious and truly wants to get to the heart of the matter, and he's totally sweet and caring about it, he has the power to make this slighty caveman behavior sexy as hell! He's making Maya feel loved, sexy, utterly beautiful and the tiniest bit slutty. Totally woman. His woman. Gives me chills.  Annnd....he made her breakfast! Can't beat that with a stick!! My god! Who is this creature....LMAO!

I'm loving Chase and his caveman ways!

Fabulous!!



Author's Response:

Flickchick, You fucking nailed it!!!!!  That's exactly what I was trying to portray, soooo glad it came through. I absolutely LOVE this review. I don't know how many times I re-read it but THANK YOU! It made my day.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Chase and Maya are so cute together.  The update was really good..   



Author's Response:

They are good together. I really enjoy writing them. Thank you for reading and for te review. It makes writing worth it when ya'll appreciate it.

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Great update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Maya is growing by leaps and bounds.  Maya is opening up and sharing her story her way.  Are you going to have Maya practice shooting ? I don't want her to having any problems shooting Domingo! !



Author's Response:

pmgayles!!!! I've been wondering where you were. I haven't seen any " Happy Hump Day" or " Good morning" in the shout box. Chase is helping Maya open up and she is absolutely willing.  I never thought about her shooting or her experience with guns. Maybe? Thanks for the idea. As always, I appreciate you reading and reviewing my story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

Great update & Great Job! So happy Maya and Chase finally got together, I can't wait for more from those two. 

 

Please post soon, this chapter was well worth the wait :D



Author's Response:

Me too. I'm looking forward to writing more of them together. Thanks for still reading and the review.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

I love this story. Fantastic job.cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Awwww... Thank you for the encouragement. Hopefully I can have the next chapter up by next week. Thank you for reading and reviewing  :-)

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 03:19 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

I fucking love Chase!! More please!!



Author's Response:

Hi Khamalani!  He is a sexy MF"er.  Next week hopefully I'll update. Thank you for reading my stuff and reviewing it. Much love.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

I need a drink that was so hotttttttt!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOl!  And that was just oral. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:18 am

Title: Chapter 5- December Part 4

well, that's picture perfect :)

 

and i have been checking for your updates everyday :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for checking for updates, it makes feel so fancy. :-)    Thank you for following this story, I thought it was perfecct for Chase and Maya too. I appreciate the kind review.

Reviewer: Tannistha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 08:05 am



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