Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: Friendship Torn

I'm liking this story....I'd never read the original. You know I'm waiting for something to happen with the cop and her friend to really set Storm off.  I know this will be fantastic keep it up!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2015 03:21 am

Title: Friendship Torn

Storm is patient and loving. Sally is so guarded, but she's getting better. Can't wait to find out all the secrets and what's really going on. Good update!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 02:45 am

Title: Friendship Torn

This story is going way too slow, and it probably feels that way because the chapters are so short. But there is also not enough action, the plot is unfolding way too slowly.

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 09:42 pm

Title: Friendship Torn

Sally is working my nerve, this back and forth business is annoying as hell!!    Storm is the real deal and he loves Sally.   Let go and tell him your secrets.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 06:45 am

Title: Friendship Torn

I am interested in this story but we are still in the dark about who Sally really is...what she is hiding is still a mystery...why does the cop want her except he's a perverted douche...Ronda has been in trouble and Sally bails her out...what trouble and how does it involve Katie...and now the trouble is enough that Storm and his friend want to investigate...this story hasn't given us enough background on flashbacks, no potential interactions that she tries to hide from Storm...from who is she would help to have more information at some point to really pull the story together...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 05:55 am

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