I can't stand Nava, why would you stick your neck for addict? This is a time for survival of the fittest and addict ain't for nothing but death. I want Nava to apologize to Lauren because if it wasn't for Lauren she would have died. Nava you are so stupid!! I feel like I missed something, what is going on between Nava and Jack? I am going to re-read the last two chapters. Great story!!
Author's Response:
I agree Nava is being naïve and very headstrong but this story is all about learning from your mistakes so nava will learn her lesson in a very shocking way. In this new world that they living in a mistake can mean the difference between life or death so the mistakes that she make will sometimes end in tragedy.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: November 26 2014 01:27 pm
Nava is a f#$"$#g idiot and not because she stood up for Ginger but because she treated her friend like that. Then had the nerve to try to make herself more important than a child. So far she is right down there with Connor on the likability scale. Asking Ginger the junkie to show everyone her injury wasn't really too much to ask. It also didn't warrant why Java did to Lauren.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your feedback, Nava is as difficult to write as she is to read. However I didn't want to just make her from one minute a sobbing mess to A survival legend. NAva is a complex person to write she wants to learn how to survive but like a child as soon as she learns one thing she wants to immediately put it into effect. She's now learning how to speak up and take a stand but she's naïve as to when to speak and when not to. In a way she was selfish by wanting Lauren to think of her before a child but that comes from her being so used to Laura having her back that as soon as Laura doesn't have her back she feels almost abandoned and that's why her reaction was so strong. Nava still has a lot to learn and the lessons will not be easy or kind but harsh and devastating.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2014 04:12 am
Jack told the truth--harshly, but still the truth, still Nava is getting stronger. I love the way you are developing your characters and I can lose myself in the plot, imagining myself in the warehouse with them. Don't know about Conner...he is going to be fierce, if he ever catches Nava alone--I suggest she get a weapon for herself.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2014 05:50 am
Interesting update! Hope she draws some strength through Jack's words.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2014 06:52 am
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2014 06:50 am
Connor is creepy!! What is wrong with Nava, how could she push that little boy away he is adorbs? Love the cast!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2014 01:25 am
Good so far
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2014 09:08 pm
I hope that she was listening to Jack.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2014 05:46 pm
Nava is in a bad way. I hope she begins to see that she is survivor and fight. I think if Lauran dies Nava will to. This is good. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2014 04:02 pm
Nava is in a bad way. I hope she begins to see that she is survivor and fight. I think if Lauran dies Nava will to. This is good. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and yes Nava will begin to adapt to this new world. However there will be major struggles and tragedies. I really want this story to really show the dark sides of an apocalypse and not just a bunch of fluffy crap. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2014 04:02 pm
Nava annoys me, she is a deadweight that will cause Lauren to get killed. But I do appreciate that you wrote Nava as being tall. I like Connor already, I beleive that I will be team Connor!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you. I'm so used to writing very dominant and st one women I decided to step out of my comfort zone and write about a woman who doesn't start out strong. It annoyed me so much writing her but I want people to see how she adapts and becomes strong. Of course Jack will be a big part of her development. Again thank you for your feedback.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2014 02:28 pm
Nice beginning please update soon I love zombie stories
Author's Response:
Thank you for your feedback
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 23 2014 08:02 pm