Reviews For COLORLESS
Title: Chapter 11

Cami's parents were evil as hell!!  I take she foind why sheqaa abandoned those two racistnimrod when she found them? That is just wrong!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow thanks for giving us that little bit of back ground info on Camille. her birth parents are a piece of work denying her just because she's darker than everyone. Thank god she got adopted by wonderful people who raised her in love in a loving atmosphere with two older siblings that adore her. Now I'm wondering is she going to have interaction with her birth family and if so how it's gonna go.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 11:24 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Poor Camille.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow! So much, on one page.

Reviewer: Blk_Papps Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 09:05 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Yikes. 

great backstory...

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 11

poor Camille 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 11

What kind of parents walks out on their baby like that?  I have a feeling that they are going to need Camille before she needs them.  Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Awww poor Camille ! 

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 10

What the hell? why am I actually looking forward to the next chapter? This story goes against everything. Woman with dark skinned complex (check), reformed racist (check), town against them (check), baby (check). This is insane.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 10

Love it!! The tension, way the story is unfolding and pace are all great!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I love this story it keeps getting sweeter and sweeter.

Reviewer: KVgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great update!!!!!!! Ohhhh the feels! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 06:51 pm

Title: Chapter 10

So good! That Ms. Elaine was rude and nosy. Ugh

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 02:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Camille and Hiram may need to leave their small town. There just not ready for them.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter.  I know trouble is coming on both sides and I hope tht Hiram and Camille can weather the storm!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 11:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

Just a fantastically written story.

Can't wait for the next update.

 

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 09:41 am

Title: Chapter 10

Great update! I love the family outing with Hiram and Camille, but those Henderson Sisters' are something else. I can't believe they call themselves women of God, they obviously know nothing about being forgiving and loving their fellow men. SMH! 

 

Please post again soon, I can't wait for more. Please keep Hiram and Camille's moment going *wink* :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 10

This story is well written keep up the good work 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 07:30 am

Title: Chapter 10

Those Henderson sisters need to be stoned.



Author's Response:

Yeah I was just showing how prejudice and rascism is on two sides not just from the Klan.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 10

People in the church kill me!! They are so judgmental and claim they are doing it in the name of the Lord. Smh. They are going to have to move if they want to be happy.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 05:17 am

Title: Prologue

I am so obsessed with this story I can't get enough I check daily to see if there is an update! Please continue to post for my sanity!!!!!!

Reviewer: brookedoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 9

Love it! I kept seeing you post updates and couldn't help but give the story a shot. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2014 02:00 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I like how you're incorporating other members of Hiram' s family into the story.  It's sad they are so racist and hateful and teaching the little kids this stuff too...it's sad. Hopefully some of these people will change, but I guess we'll see.  Live the relationship that's growing between Hiram, Camille and the baby...so sweet.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2014 03:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ahhh! I can't stand Debbie! And oh, no The Klan. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2014 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 9

I hope those Klan don't try to hurt that innocent baby!  Hiram is going to kiss some serious butt if Debbie and the rest try to interfere with his life.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 05:52 pm



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