Great story. Cast pics are great. I don't know why but I can totally see Channing Tatum as Nick Young.
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2015 02:07 pm
Melanie take control of the situation, your momma is a hot mess. Really, she didn't see Daniel standing there? Rude much?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2015 06:30 pm
Oh my goodness.....poor Daniel.....this is just so funny.
Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2015 05:34 am
sorry for the triplicate, had some trouble with computer and it decided to repeat the comment
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2015 04:28 am
Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over. I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2015 04:28 am
Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over. I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2015 04:27 am
Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over. I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2015 04:27 am
love your story, I truly can relate to Daniel
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 08 2015 03:45 am
"summertime fine" I love it.
Reviewer: jlly16 Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2015 07:24 pm
That went well. Yeah, Daniel, you the man.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2015 08:07 am
Oh poor Daniel, at least he did make small talk with Meela. Who is the person that raised their voice at the couple? Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response:
Daniel still has some things to learn and so does Meela. You will find out more about Meela's past and who the mystery person is.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2015 02:43 pm
Cute story. I wish Daniel had a job though. Update soon!!
Author's Response:
Yes! He needs a job. He's going to make some changes very soon in his life.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2015 02:28 pm
Poor Daniel. He just needs to be himself.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2015 11:16 am
LD, In answer to your question, I can see all of the cast except for Daniel.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I put up a not in the cast chapter about that. I don't know why his pic is not showing.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 07:14 pm
Calling a woman shawty and miss are definitely deal breakers.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 03:49 pm
Poor Daniel, even Jun Lee has more swag than he does. I think that Timmy has more swag as well. Thanks for a great update. I am enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 02:49 am
Good cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 02:42 am
I guess I have a dirty mind too, LOL...poor Daniel. He can't seem to catch a break. LOL Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 02:41 am
LOL, you are off to a great start. I love grandma. I am still LOL. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Thanks I needed a good laugh..oh my goodness, poor Daniel.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 02:36 am
Jun "Luther" Lee... smdh a mess.
Oh Daniel. That barbershop had me rolling.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Quick question can you see the cast?
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 01:51 am
What does Daniel look like? I can't see it!
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 01:47 am
What does Daniel look like? I can't see it!
Author's Response:
can you see the rest of the cast? Honestly I don't know why you can't see Daniel. The only thing I know to tell you is to google James Marden.
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 01:43 am
Very good. Keep up the humor. So funny. Update soon plz.
Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 12:07 am
This is funny. You write well.
Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]Date: January 25 2015 12:00 am
What does he look like?
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: January 24 2015 06:20 pm