This story is amazing!😀
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2020 10:51 pm
A sweet and sad love story.
I'm not clear on why Beau kissed that girl. I know he said it was a dare but there is no explanation as to who issued the dare and why he would think to go through that.
Author's Response:
I'm plan on writing the story from beau's point of view
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 06 2015 12:49 am
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Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: February 28 2015 09:41 am
This just brought me to tears. I was not imagining that end. Heck, I loved Beau Ryan myself. I'm bawling. Wonderful short story.
Wonderful, touching story.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 05:33 am
I loved this story. I didn't get the poem at first but love how that played out.
Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2015 05:30 am
This was an absolutely beautiful story!! It would be interesting to know what Beau's perspective was. Great work!!
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2015 01:05 am
As I started reading, I wasn't sure I would like this, but
in the middle of the story I was glad I started, and
at the end, I cried.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 05:30 pm
WOW is all I can say. What a story.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 04:29 pm
Wow! That was amazing! You're pretty dang awesome.
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 03:31 pm
This was too beautiful. It took me through every emotion and I hated for it to end.
Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 06:20 am
Awww great story and the ending was sad but I loved it.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 04:53 am
Oh God I can't stop crying. Absolutely beautiful!
Reviewer: Song K Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 03:44 am
I loved this didn't want it to end.
Reviewer: Alibear Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 03:20 am
Okay, I know that people loose the love of their lives everyday but I reallly hate it when it happens in a story!! This was phenomenal! ! I loved the flow of the story, the growth of the characters and how you built the story around a poem of sorts. Amazing!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 01:30 am
Beautiful love story...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2015 12:54 am