Congrats to the happy couple, and knowing Dom, his daughter isn't going to be allowed to date until she's 40 Lol.
Oh and Mike is a riot, I hope he gets his own story
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2015 01:43 am
It's a little bambina!!! Dom will be wrapped around his daughters finger. I love this couple, I need a Dominic in my life. Yay, their getting married!!! Awesome sauce!!
Author's Response:
Yup, he's going to be putty in her hands.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2015 07:52 pm
I love this chapter!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2015 01:53 am
Great chapter, I'm loving Message more and more she's a Riot.
So glad they found the house of their dreams, and got far away from Crazy Eric, hope we never see him again(crossing fingers)
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 12:19 am
So sweet how Dom keeps saying they're having a girl. But what if it turns out one of each. Lol ,I'm just saying that would be cool. So glad they found their dream home.
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 08:22 pm
Awesome sauce! ! Dom is so sure that they're having a girl. So cute!! Nessa is going to be their nanny, although I think the Lia will change her mind about going back to work quickly. As an actress she could take the baby to the set. Dom will be hot mess when this baby is born.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 03:16 pm
I'm loving this story. Now I'm Pins and needles waiting for Crazy McStalkerpants to jump out the bushes.
Author's Response:
One more appearance from him and he'll be gone for good.
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 02:34 pm
Wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2015 01:29 pm
My gosh! That totally sucks that Dom's family—minus Nessa—couldn't even put their love for him & his happiness over their own bigotry! And then his father had the audacity to feel ambushed & humilated as if he was the victim. I'm glad that Dom chose Lia; I knew he would. But it still sucks, not so much because he lost his family as a result but because his whole perception of them had been obliterated. I'm sure when you're forced to see that your parents & brother weren't who you thought they were, that's kind of a harsh reality to accept.
On a brighter note, Lia's pregnant!! Wonder when she found out & I can't wait to see how Dominic will react.
Such a great chapter! Love the way you've incorporated drama into this story without taking it over the top. I greatly appreciate when authours keep a sense of realism, even in fiction, & you do it so effortlessly. You're such an amazing writer, Jaye Sims! :)
p.s. I totally envy your ability to pump out these chapters so quickly!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Ma'am! I really admire you're work so you leaving reviews gives me all the feels. I'm glad that you appreciate my writing style, I sometimes wonder if the drama is too low key, but I write what I like to read. I don't think I would know how to write over the top drama anyway.
As far as getting the chapters out so quickly, I am currently sans employment so aside from looking for work I don't have much else to do, lol. It's sort of a blessing in disguise because I write more now than I ever have.
Anywhoo...thank you for reading. Lia and Dom are my babies and I love writing about them.
Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 04:41 pm
The nerve of William to come at him like that. Embarrass them; were they at the same place or somewhere different bebecause it was tge other way around. They couldnt even fake being cordial. Threatning Dom to not see him or have anything to do with him if he dont break his ties with Lia then adding on more by do it fir ya ma. Hiw low can you go. Pitiful. Glad they are leaving & going back. Sad because they miss out. On knowing a wonderful person like Lia plus loose a daughter to in the processs & a soon to come grand child. Yay finally she tells him shes preggers a light shines in the midst of his family bigotry.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that pissed me off, too and I WROTE the dang thing, LOL.
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 07:01 am
So glad he chose Lia!!! Tears of joy!!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 02:57 am
Great chapter. As for Dom's so-called parents, they need Prayer, it's like they only live you if you do what They want, I bet Donal didn't even want to marry Irene. Speaking of Irene, I wonder if she's always had the Hots for Dominic.
I knew Kia was pregnant, Dom is going Love being a Dad.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 01:39 am
I'd hoped it wouldn't come to this. That's sucks!
And what about the Irene thing? I honestly think she helped to aggravate the situation to the point it got to in that restaurant.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 12:59 am
When did she find out that she was pregnant? You didn't mention her taking a preganacy or going to the doctor to get a pregnancy test. His parents and and brother are assholes who should never be allowed on American soil again. That heifer Irene is hateful and I would like to see her eaten by the Lock Ness monster. Her reaction was just over the top, Rene is shady. She's what I call a low pro ho with trick tendencies!
Author's Response:
There will be a flashback that will go over when she found out she was pregnant.
LOL! Yeah, Ol' Reeny was doing the most.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2015 12:30 am
I love it but it is sad that people still hold onto their prejudices.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 11:32 pm
Excellent chapter. I love the Mariani's, what a great family. Lia and Dom are a great couple. Kudos to you Jaye for writing a funny, moving story. Anxiously awaiting your update.
A
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading Arabelle!
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 03:56 pm
Great update!
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 07:22 am
keep getting better & better. Sad how they acted couldnt even fake it. Irene is a piece of work so is Doms brother who tried to check Nessa after putting her foul stuckup butt in her place. Like who acts like that. Why even bother coming.Poor Dom they just dont care eveen after seeing how happy he was & him paying for everything for them to be in the states. I dont know what they had up their sleaaves probly to tty to try to talk him out of being with her face to face. I dont know. This is a fantastic story really enjoying it.
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 06:27 am
Ok, I love Nessa! The parents...not so much.
And who does Irene think she is kidding? The stink of jealousy is coming off her in waves! She wants Dom. Probably always have. Probably married Donal to get next to him even. Her reaction is way too personal for just the sister-in-law. And by personal, I mean intimate. She's acting like a jilted girlfriend. Ughhh!!
Nice!!
Author's Response:
There may be history there...stay tuned.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 05:01 am
Nessa seems to be the only relative of Dominic that has any sense, and Donal needs a spine, how could he marry that cold fish Irene, I bet he hasn't gotten Laid since he said I do to her.
Gulia is the best, loved how she had Dom's parents picking up their face off the floor.
Really enjoying this story, hurry with more.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 02:35 am
His family is crazy, Nessa is the best!! Love LIA's family they are real and love indiscriminately! The Dom's family can learn a lot from the Lia and her family. Poor Dom! ! I really hate his parents, brother and his vile wife Irene.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 02:10 am
Wow, what a great chapter
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 18 2015 01:36 am
I hope Dominic doesn't crack under pressure. Does Irene want him?
Author's Response:
Stay tuned :-)
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2015 11:32 pm
It would be a long week, bc I would be quiet and cool with his family--extra nice to his sister, but the rest would be walking a tight rope.
In other words, she shouldn't go out of her way to win over people that will probably always look down on her. It's not like they hid how they felt about her. Please let her Italian family show their azz!
What happen to the punch in the face--the police should have taken pics and she should have had a bruise or worst.
Author's Response:
Pictures were taken of her bruises, I didn't describe everything that happened when the crime scene was processed because I didn't want to get bogged down in those details.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2015 06:42 pm
Hell week indeed!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2015 11:42 am