Had to read it again. love these two!!
Thank you, Michmom2!! And I apologize for taking so long to update on both of the stories. I am finally getting back intot he swing of things though, and once agan at work on the chapters. I'm hoping to update soon, so be on the lookout!
Thank you so much for your continuing support!!!Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 02:01 am
Great chapter. I love how Jenada is such a great big sister to her brother in his condition. She could have left him there with no help,whatsoever but I love how caring and loving your characters are so far! Can't wait to read the other chapters😀Reviewer: Universauhl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 02:35 am
This story is sooooo awesome!! I love your writing style and everything is just perfect!!!Reviewer: Universauhl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2015 02:20 am
THIS STORY IS AWESOME. Its detailed to perfection and has a very interesting concept. Can't wait to read more!Reviewer: Universauhl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 24 2015 07:48 am
Love this story so much im reading it again. Dane does sound hot and sexy. If you find pics you think are similar to the characters please post them!!! This is a great story. Ok back to reading!! ;)
Thanks, Michmom2!! Another reader, who goes by the screen name of ASTRAL SKIES, mentioned that they saw Dane as Daniel Henney:
When I was writing the story, though, I imagined him as a cross between James Duval:
and Ezra Mliller:
Yes, I know that Ezra Isn't Eurasian and actually has a Jewish background, but in my opinion he could totally pass for Eurasian. But, ever since Astral Skies mentioned Daniel Henney, I have to say that Daniel Henney would be absolutely Perfect to play the part of Dane if Velvet Roses were to ever get made into a movie. Hey, I can dream right?! Hahaha.
Anyways, thanks for the comment, and I'm so glad you fund Dane hot and sexy, because I did my best to portray him that way. :DReviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2015 09:46 pm
Great story! I was a bit saddened that her father would treat her like that. I understand that's his best friend, but that's your daughter and then Luna. Don't even get me started on Luna. Since the begging when Dane and jeneda were first dating she was acting like a whinny jealous brat. I think Ethan is a better friend. But overall I still loved the story. I swear the whole time Dane was in jail I was like please don't make him someone's bitch.
Thank you, Sandy Brown Eyes! Glad to hear you enjoyed the story. :) I will be posting the sequel later today, so if you're interested, check back.
Lol about you thinking, "please don't make Dane somebody's bitch."
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I apppreciate it!!Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2015 08:21 am
Wow, her parents just jacked up both Riley and her life by moving him. Obviously he is very close to his sister, the only person who has visited him consistently and you are moving him across the country. How is she suppose to be able to see him b/c of her mother's guilt. Really, I'm not finding myself fond of either of her parents. I would visit my brother and leave my mother alone with her 2nd husband. Dad isn't arguing on her behalf or Riley's behalf of how this would impact him. Just because he has brain damage doesn't mean he doesn't have feelings. I feel sad for them.
Yes, it was a bad decision of her parents, considering they are really close. And yes, neither parent is really all that likeable lol. But that was puposeful becaue I was hoping to show that Jeneda and Riley were really all that each could truly depend on.
Exactly, just because a person has brain damage does not mean they are ignorant to what is happening around them. They know, and can still pick up on things. I'm glad you feel a connection to both Riley and Jeneda.
Thank you for the feedback, lajack1. I appreciate it! :)Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 11:51 pm