Aww I'm glad everything worked out. They got married and got the bastards who did all those evil things. They only good thing that came out of their deeds was Kora and Veles meeting.
I'm sad its over though.. great story
Thank you so much for reading, i'm glad you liked it !! Don't be sad, i have more to come!!!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2015 03:22 am
Really enjoyed this story great ending. Can't wait for the next story
Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback!! i can't wait to get started on the next storyReviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 06:03 am
Yay! I would purchase this story. Rohar needs a lady now. Thank you for this up lifting story.
That's who i'm starting with next!! i'm jumping right into him!! So glad you liked it!!! Thank you so much~~Reviewer: Curvy farmer Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 12:32 am
So glad you finished your story. I hate when I get really into reading something and the author goes m.i.a. and you never hear from them again. This is one story that was so good... I actually didn't mind the grammatical errors. Don't worry, the more you read and the more you write, your technique will improve. Also, an editor would be helpful as well. But really I just love stories like this with magic, mythical creatures, and adventure. Barbaric... but beautiful. So thank you. Hope to read more from you in the future.
AWWWWW thank you much!! I appreciate your feed back and i'm humbled,truly!! I'm working on my errors and i know i have a long way to go but I write because i love it, and because of you guys who love the stories!! You truly keep me going!! I will continue to write and won't leave you hanging!! Thank you so so muchReviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2015 02:18 am
Damn, all this to get the dragon's riches. That is just crazy. Well people have done worse for much less. I hope that her family is okay. I want Veles to get his revenge to the fullest degree. Awww they told each other they love them! Yay!!!!
Last chapter coming soon!! bare with me lol i'm so happy you like the story!!!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 02:53 pm
That is great! I can't believe he did that for her. Yay!! I was wondering what would happen when she dies but its pretty cool that she doesn't age like normal humans now. So does he die eventually? What other things does she have from mating with him??
Oh no!!! Poachers. Aren't those the people that tortured Veles? I hope they are able to save the town and none of them get hurt.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 02:37 pm
Veles, take out the trash!! It's on lije Donkey Kong now!! More please?
LOL!! more is to come!! i believe the next one may be the last chapter! Thank you so much for reading, you don't now how happy I am that you like it!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 12:52 pm
Lol Okay, okay I see we're not beating around the bush and Veles is set to eat some chocolate (All the puns in the world intended for that one). I have no choice, but to see how he gets. Peace and love in writings ~Ms_Kri
LOL!! Thank you for reading!!Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 01:33 am
Wow, I'm really loving how your descriptions truly transports me right in the story's setting and love how you built up the anticipation. And fantasy stories are a real goody because that's another level of imagination authors have to entail and I can tell this story will be a favorite of mines. So, I will devour this story tonight and can't wait for more. Peace and love in writings ~Ms_Kri
awwww thank you so much!! can't believe i'm just now seeing this, shame on me!! I really appreciate your feedback!!! means so much!!!Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 01:26 am
Had she been there she may have died as well. I winder if any of her family members perished? They think she's dead right, so if Veles takes her they will think that she's a ghist or a witch? Veles is hottie!! Looking forward to the next update!
Thank you so much for reading, i'm so happy your liking the story so far!! More to come!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 12:04 pm
one thing: you kinda fudged Veles' transition from wanting her to be a slave, to accepting her as a mate. I reread, and his confession to Kleo seems like it came out of nowhere. Plus, he never says to Kora, sorry, I was wrong, you are my mate.
So it is still nagging at me, does Veles collect all the sacrifice-girls? Or do the dragon warriors rotate? What happened to the other girls? Was Lauren a sacrifice-girl? Or how did Kleo woo her?
Can't wait for more. It tears at me though, to advise you to take time to reread/edit.
You are no bother, i appreciate and love your feed back because it really helps me in the long run.. With Veles he's getting there if that makes sense, he was mentally and physically tortured and i plan to expand on that, so he's kind of working on that as well expressioning himself. He does mention that he has never brought another woman to his lair even though he's been with many woman, after his ordeal being captured it really kind shows him in a different light, but i'm working on revealing as much as i can so it can all come together full circle!!! but i will take the time and reread and edit!! Thank you so much!!Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 08:21 am
Why does the format of the story so eratic where it makes it difficult to read? Can you fix it?
I have a green thumb in this and it's somehow getting worse then better. which frustrates me to no end!! I'm hoping the next chapter will however show better, i'm doing my best so please bare with me.. thanks for the feed backReviewer: A Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 04:44 am
I like the story but i'm just curious are we going to get character pics soon??
That's the thing finding the right ones!!! I posted a pic of kora I believe in ch 3.... finding Veles is harder than I thought..but I will find him!!! Thank you for reading!!!Reviewer: missreader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 12:36 pm
Who livess in the castle? Okay, you have me doing my happy dance this morning as Veles has finally admitted and accepted the love that he feels for Kora. Awesome sauce! ! He gave her ride on his back!!!
Yah!!!! I'm so thrilled you liked it!!! Thank you for sticking it out, I'm so happy you like the story!!! More to come promise!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 12:08 pm
That is horrible. That's why he has all of those scars and things. I wonder if he will open up to her and tell her everthing. I wonder where he is going to take her. I think what they do is amazing. To protect those people and provide for those in their village is pretty cool. So she is willing to accept him. Will she once she sees him in dragon form.. Does she become a dragon once they mate or whatever. Are their kids going to be dragons too
Update soon!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 01:47 am
She is kinda bold.... I don't know if I would talk to a dragon like that. LOl. He didn't waste any time getting inside of her. I like that he took her to the water to heal her though, that was really sweet. Can he read her mind or something? Hell I want him to answer the questions too. LOlReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 01:23 am