Title: When a Monster Becomes a Man

Lol haha. He's dead and I'm going to enjoy breakfast.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2015 12:02 am

Title: When a Monster Becomes a Man

“And why do you need me?”

“Because you make me feel beautiful. You make me feel valid,” she smiled. “Like I am worth a damn.”

“And why do I need you?”

“You think of yourself as an animal and I’m here to help you feel human again,”


Truer words, girl, truer words.


Why is it that even though Bastian cracked Simon's head like a watermelon, I'm feeling sad for Bas?  There is so pain in him. Even though he won't acknowledge it.

Willow, please don't wish any of your family dead in Bastian's presence. He's like your own personal genie. :)

Although. some folks need killing. Those that are too evil to live.



Author's Response:

There is a lot of pain in Sebastian. He is a very, very, very troubled character. His past is so screwed up that he resorts to the most primal responses when it comes to protecting himself or the only person he cares about. Simon shouldn't have died by any means. Beat down, definitely. However compared to the first posting of the story, he will not get off without severe consequences.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 03:28 am

Title: When a Monster Becomes a Man

I like Sebastian though he was wrong to kill Simon...still I wonder what will happen to Willow as she gets caught in his web...

Author's Response:

Oh, yes. I think Sebastian doing what he did to Simon was very, very wrong from a moral standpoint. That is one of the reasons why I wrote a chapter in Simon's point of view for everyone to get a better understanding of how he thinks and the role he played in that twisted game. I think Sebastian doing what he did proved more to himself that he cared about Willow so much that he'd do anything to keep her happy even kill for her happiness.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 08:02 pm

Title: When a Monster Becomes a Man

I realky want her to slap bith her morher ad siater, them two bitches work y mast nerve!

Author's Response:

LMAO! Do I need to hold you back?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 07:07 pm

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