Reviews For Losing Control
Title: Chapter 2

Is there a human beneath that hard exterior? I hope Iris can handle this. She SEEMS like a nice girl. I hope she has the fortitude to deal with Ms Zuma. I've met one Zuma in my life and you NEVER let 'em see you sweat, that's like chum in the water to someone like her.

I don't normally go there, but I hope there's some good ole Karma coming her way.

Looking forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2015 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Zuma, it'seems not Iris's fault that she was forced on you. Be nice to her,  she's a sister!!  Her last name indicates that she isn't African American  in the sense that I am?  I want to know what Zuma is hiding from? Why is she so mean to people?   I am not crazy about Zuma, I hope that I grow to like before the end of this story?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2015 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I'm loving this! ! Update soon please! 



Author's Response:

Thank you Jesse for the read and review! You're going to love what happens next...

Reviewer: Jesse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

Zuma is a straight up BITCH!!!! you don't have to treat people badly to get your come-up. Malcomb was just mad because the tables were turned on him, they can dish it, but they can't take it. All those people Zuma hurt on her way going up, will be the same people she will see on her way going down. I like this story.



Author's Response:

Jacqua, you know my characters already! I love and appreciate your review. I can't wait to hear what you think about happens next...

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 02:26 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh Malcolm, you're just a human dildo.

That Zuma is one big ole ray of sunshine.

Zuma, it's not about being palsy with your subordinates, it's about being human and treating others as if they were as well.

She really likes total control. Can't wait to see what the intern has in store for her.



Author's Response:

Thank you BellaChica for your read and review! Wait until you see how she treats the intern the first time she meets her. It's a set up for some good ole revenge... 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued, what did Zuma do that she had to leave North Carolina with her tail tucked between her legs?  More please!



Author's Response:

Pmgayles, you know there's a juicy story behind the North Carolina escape... Keep reading to find out.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 11:02 pm



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