You are such a talented writer, and I appreciate that you are always able to tackle difficult subjects. Thanks also for weaving Jackson into this story, as she has to have some semblance of hope. I personally know that I won't be able to continue with this particular one, but I do look forward to your others and I hope Aliyah has as much of a positive resolution as she realistically can given her circumstances and repeated trauma. All the best!
Reviewer: chrinae Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2016 01:06 pm
Thank you for the update! Maybe it's just me, but it may be best to revise the warning label of your story.
Reviewer: Ch. Four Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 30 2016 04:20 pm
Don't trust Wilson. Jack killed his mother's abusive husband, how does that make him a sociopath? How did they come to this diagnosis? The police deemed the death of ahole self defense, so why is Jack in a psychiatric facility? His damn momma said that she was in the process is divorcing said asshole but still lived in the same house where her daughters were in danger. Really? Don't like that woman.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: September 14 2016 10:52 am
MP I'm loving this new story. I think I like Jackson already. I got my side-eye on Wilson, something is just not right with that one. And last but not least is Aaliyah ( what a beautiful name ) I miss her ( the singer ). What have Al been going through to have her harm herself? I can't wait for the answers. Thanks MP!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2016 04:09 pm
I have to agree with Jackson... I don't like this Wilson character around Al. I feel like he's some sick fuck having sex with her while she's knocked out. I feel bad for her. And Jackson, why label him as a sociopath becuase he was protecting his family from his step father? I don't think that's crazy at all. I think that Jackson and Al are going to get each other through this.
Update soon.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2016 05:08 am
I feel like Jack is kind of an anti hero. He's not a bad guy but I can tell he's not all that concerned about doing good either. It is clear that he knows right from wrong and has a moral compass. I'm sure he had a good reason for killing his step father he sounds like he had it coming.Melanie sounded like a dead weight. I want to see more tension between Wilson and Jack I can tell he doesen't like him.
Al she seemed misunderstood and it doesn't help that she's a black woman since most black people turn a blind eye to mental illness. Al may choose to go by that name instead of Aaliyah as a coping mechanism; obviously something traumatic happened to her when she still willingly went by her birth name.
I'm lovin this
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 13 2016 03:16 am
Wilson is sex offender waiting to happen.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2016 01:02 am
This story seems so interesting. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: I like Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 13 2016 01:00 am
Hey, fellow Piscesian love this story so far,actually I love all your story but I really wish you could finish them😟. 😘But It's really me being selfish, because I really enjoy your writing and I know you can't update daily
Reviewer: maggie27 Signed [Report This]Date: September 12 2016 08:04 pm
This is off to a tremendous start! Keep up the amazing work.
Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 12 2016 07:40 pm