Hope that you update soon!
I'm actually just realizing that for some reason, most of the stories that immediately hook me in end up being abandoned by the first few chapters. I really hope that isn't the case here, because geez it's disappointing when it happens, especially if it happens frequently with the stories that you actually like the most. I'm starting to think that I'm a jinx lol So PLLLEEEEAAAASSSE update soon!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 08:36 pm
Please update, this story is intriguing to say the least and the characters have already got me hooked!Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2017 05:00 pm
Damn! That's cold blooded. I can't believe Remy's brother would sell her out like that. I hope Remy can keep her head on straight and figure how to get out of the mess she's in.Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2017 02:40 am
Good concept, I do however feel like like you could have combined those chapters to make it one whole steady chapter all together. I know you say you'd rather post short chapters that feel right etc. but please also think of the reader. I like this story, so far so good. I'd just like longer chapters. All the best with it.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 03:47 am
Next chapter soon please!!! GREAT START
next chapters are upp - enjoy the read! thansk for reviewing!Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 09:19 am
Peaked my interest but I will need a little more.
I understand that :) for me, when i'm writing, I go with a "feeling" and sometimes chapters end up on the shorter side. however i will try to add more but fair warning, short chapters will probably pop up every now and then so i hope you will keep reading though XDReviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2017 04:31 am
Too short, but great start. More more more, please!
some chapter are or will probably be short. for me when i try to add more, it messes with the flow of the story so i rather post something short then a story which feel "off" if that makes sense :) but i will keep in my mind what you said and see if there a ways to lengthen a story - thanks for reading and leaving a review!Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 05:12 pm
Excellent build up. Very descriptive. Can't wait for more. My stomach is in knots.
thank you intheroar! more is coming - i hope the story will keep you on your toes ;)
Date: January 08 2017 04:38 am
There are some minor editing needed and I could have done without the typical "unruly curls" (ugh!!!), but other than that, interesting start.
sorry for the editing faults - more will probably come (lol) but I will do my best to keep it to the minimum :) thanks for reading!Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 12:05 am