It's a great start. I so want the husband to suffer a LOT. LOL
Author's Response:
Karma is coming his way, but there is much to be done first, LOL!
Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 20 2017 01:09 am
I'm like a slave hanging on your every word and story. You really are a great author and I love the Pinterest board, I can see the story come to life as I read every chapter.
Author's Response:
I am so happy you like the Pinterest board. I will be adding to it when I can, so keep an eye out for updates. I hope you enjoy what I have in store for the story.
Reviewer: jlly16 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 07:49 pm
Excellent beginning. I can't wait for Sugar's dream to become a reality.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 12:11 pm
Why would Sugar walk away from a marriage where she is responsible for her husbands sucess by PUTTING HIM through college with basically nothing? It's not pride; its stupidity. All that I don't need his money, I have my PRIDE only lets a man get away with treating us like shit. OK, so she "only" needed 88K thousand...so what? All that pride is what keeps the first wife economically surpressed while hubby is off with the next "wives"living la vida loca". You are a good writer and I'm waiting with baited breath to see how you are going to give Sugar her happy ever after. Please make the baby not his and he is actually sterile, Please let the SEC take all his money, Please, Please let her sister kick that sack of shit in the nuts...and get TWO signature drinks,well maybe three; The BETTER BITCH, The MAURY (you are NOT the daddy) and The WLLLB (pronounced WillyBee, WhoLaughLastLaughBest) LMAO, Can't wait to read the rest. I'm tracking this.
Author's Response:
LMAO, you are too much! More to come.
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 07:26 am
Loving this! She's a better person than me because I would've cuss him out.
Author's Response:
Sugar is a very patient woman, but some things are about to happen that will change her.
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 07:22 am
Omg I totally love this story already. You are a mistress of your craft and I am looking forward to a great story. I love that the character is in her late thirties cause there are many of us out there looking for love too lol ! Love the pics on pinterest they were a fantastic addition. Now am definitley gonna be checking for updates. Great Job MJ.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, klarybelle, for your compliment! As a writer, it really means a lot. I am my own worst critic, so sometimes I think myself to be a poor writer, but I am so happy that you enjoy my stories! :)
Reviewer: klarybelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 03:21 am
As someone who is closer to 40 than 20 (Okay, I'm 31), I truly appreciated lead characters that are older. That being said, Chef is hoooooooot. I need him, or someone like him, in my life. An older man with silver hair AND tattoos is my weakness. I want to jump through my computer and let him have his wicked way with me. Maybe I can find someone like him when I go on vacation in a few weeks.
Anyway, good for Sugar for going after what she wants. That ex of hers is going to get his. It was like the situation my friend was telling me about her ex husband today. I already love her siter. I cannot wait for the next update. I know it's almost back to school time for you, unfortunately me too, so pleeeeeeeeease update before then. I can/need to be able to reread this story and your others over and over again during my "lunch" break. Great job!!
Author's Response:
Isn't he hot?! I knew had to write this story just for the chance to have him as my inspiration. As for school, yeah it's almost time. We go back August 7. I'm not looking forward to it because the drama with my new grade level partner is getting worse. Uuuuhhh. But I'll be able to update a few more times hopefully before we officially go back. I'm actually doing another update tonight. :)
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 02:57 am
YAY for an older heroine, and YAY for the fact that Mrs. Insta Model is going to leave Lance drier than the Sahara.
Mariah's got something up her sleeve, so she'll stick around for a little bit, but you're not far from the truth! Thank you for your review!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 19 2017 02:50 am
I'm so excited for this story. Having a story that involves a slightly older H/h is a welcome change and with your writing, I know it will be great. I love the first chapter already and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I am really excited about writing this story. I've never read or written older characters as main characters, but I am so up for the challenge! :) Another update is coming soon!
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 02:29 am
MJ, I'm all in. This is bound to be a pleasure to read.
I'm with Rochelle, blood needs to be shed.Looking at her papa and her twin, I can't imagine them not being ready to beat that ex-husband's behind.
I really like how Sugar has all of her ducks in a row and is really looking forward to her freedom. That ex-husband really pissed me off, with his smug ass. For someone who doesn't care anything about Sugar, he sure was throwing barbs. Karma is coming for his butt. Was he phsically abusive? It's clear that he was verbally and emotionally. I'm so damn glad that Sugar has gotten rid of that fkr. On to bigger and better things, in more ways than one, if Chef is any indication. hee
Good first chapter, Chica.
Author's Response:
Thanks, chica! Let's just say there's a good reason why he stopped being abusive in one kind of way, so he relies on other kinds.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 01:02 am
Love it already!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you're enjoying it so far! More to come!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 12:15 am
Dude is delusional😕 oh girl, is going to clean that bank account out in 6 months😲 leaving him with nothing but his shattered ego😩 and divorce papers😆👏👏👏👏👏 I like😆
Author's Response:
Mariah is gonna stick around for a bit, but she's not going to stray far from Sugar's prediction. Keep an eye on her though! ;)
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2017 11:35 pm
Loving it already!
Lance would have gotten his throat checked in that courtroom, ol hating ass nucca...
Author's Response:
LMAO! I know you'd go for the jugular and nothing less!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2017 11:33 pm
MJ the cast pic's are Hot!! but the leading man! I give him 5 stars!! that was a excellent choice.
Author's Response:
Isn't he freaking gorgeous?!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2017 11:06 pm
I. AM. GOING. TO. HURT. YOU! I am supposed to be writing and you go and post this! Now I am all distracted and wanting more.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 18 2017 11:04 pm
I absolutely love this story already. I know someone who's finally free from her hell of a marriage. She's extremely happy and doing things her way, for the first time in her life. I'm team Sugar all the way. Great concept and Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Mrs. J! I am happy for your friend who is able to be happy after a bad marriage. I hope you enjoy what I have in store.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2017 10:58 pm
I like it so far. No offense, but I've been looking for a grown folks story forever. I'm in my 40s so ita refreshing for me to read bwwm story with older adults. Thank you!!
Author's Response:
I'm in my mid-twenties and I've been wanting to read a story with older characters, but I can't find them anywhere! So you know what they say, if you can't find the book you want to read then write it. :) I hope you enjoy what I have in store.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: July 18 2017 10:53 pm