Well Damn!!😲 Sugar say YES!!😆
Author's Response:
Lmao!
Reviewer: Tre Signed
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 01:05 am
Great update ! Can't wait for Chef and Sugar's date - Loving these two ! More please. :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Another update is coming.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 10:42 pm
Mama's was all, "What you're NOT going to do is ruin our favourite drinking spot, you hear?!" I die. XD
Chef doesn't do anything by halves, huh?
Author's Response:
LMAO, Mama Hartwell don't play when it comes to free alcohol drinks.
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 04:51 pm
Mrs. Georgette is ole school😆 love that! 😆 Sugar give the "Chef" the proper ingredients and watch him work😆 Sugar wouldn't know what hit her after she takes a bite of Chef treats😉 because this man puts in work😉So he says😆
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 25 2017 04:22 pm
OMG, Chef, Chef, Chef is all kinds of grown, fine, and Sexy. I hope Sugar is ready for him because I sure am. I know I may be ahead of myself but I seriously can't wait for the first time the ex sees them together...yeah I'm ready. Lol
Author's Response:
Oh, that Lance/Sugar/Chef/Mariah scene is going to be very fun to write, LOL!
Reviewer: SassyKia Signed
[Report This]Date: July 25 2017 03:14 pm
I love this story! I'm constantly refreshing the page for updates lol. Sugar needs to give Chef a chance or I'll snatch him up 😉
Author's Response:
LMAO! More updates coming!
Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 02:52 pm
So cute I can't handle it, give me more..... your amazing
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 25 2017 09:50 am
Another great chapter! Things are heating up and I'm loving it! Sugar needs to let loose and take chances. Chef is obviously a patient man and that's shaking Sugar. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! The temperature only goes upward from here! ;)
Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 07:30 am
“The one thing you need to know about me, Sugar, is that I love to work. Being a hard worker is a part of who I am. I keep going and going until the job gets done, but maybe my words don’t do me any justice in this instance. Say yes for tonight and I’ll gladly let you see my work ethic firsthand.”
Is it me or did the temperature go up a few notches? LMAO
Shug's mom is a pistol. I can see where the girls get it from. I'm loving all of the Hartwell clan.
Regarding chapter 4, I forgot to comment on the fact that it looks as if Lance might've hit Shug during their marriage or did I read too much into the sister's conversation?
MJ, another great update.
Author's Response:
You read into it perfectly, chica. I am so happy you caught that considering Rochelle was cut off mid-sentence by Odette. But that is what definitely happened. More details to come.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 05:39 am
LOL! Chef is a charmer (put a mile wide grin on my face) 😁! Hopefully Sugar will loosen up some and give him a chance to state his peace. I would imagine after being in a bitter marriage for 18 years, the bitterness would 'have' to get old. Her business is thriving, and she seems to be on the come up. It's been a year since the divorce. Juay breathe and let go a little. Everyone, (specifically her loved ones, who only want the best for her) ain't singing the same tune for norhin'. Great update!😁
Author's Response:
Sugar is definitely going to let go, but are her wants the same as Chef's? ;)
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 04:02 am
Sugar give Chef a chance, your family is right. Have some fun let your hair down for once get you some you lovin'!
Author's Response:
Sugar will give Chef a chance, but it's not what he expected, LOL. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 03:36 am
Side Note: I will ding Sugar on one thing; as a fellow restaurant owner, her attitude was kinda funky about Chef's place. Don't think she would appreciate if folks made assumptions about her place and the location of it before sampling anything from it. Some of the best food comes from "dives" you know. I consider her a down chick, a hurt chick, but a down chick nonetheless. So she needs to check herself a bit on that.
Author's Response:
LOL, I am glad you caught that that characte quirk. She was wrong for that, but it fits well with her uptight nature.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 02:42 am
Why can't I find a guy like Chef? He will keep you on your toes. My favorite kind. Loving this story. Can't wait to see how this will enfold.
Author's Response:
LOL, wait until you see what Chef has up his sleeve.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 02:30 am
Grown and Sexy...that's how I like it. I am loving this story so far so please keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
More updates to come!
Reviewer: SassyKia Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 02:25 am
I love this story. The chemistry between Chef and Sugar is so exciting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Their chemistry is very intense. I love writing them together. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: maine956 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:59 am
Maybe it's just me but I found the last part of this chapter totally hot. That was one hell of a second meeting. I can't wait for the date. The description of the food is making me hungry.
Author's Response:
It was a lot of fun to write the last part of the chapter. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:30 am
Well.....DAYUM!!!
And can I say that I LOVE the sort of musical accompaniment you have going on with the chapters :) It really does help with the mood of the chapters and characters....lol!
This seems like its going to be a slow sexy burn for Sugar. I'm thinking she needs that as a woman because she probably NEVER had that with that prick she wasted her youth on! I guess challenge accepted on Chef's part.
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you like the chapter music selection! I try hard to find songs that match what I write about in that chapter. As for Chef, he is a hard worker that loves a challenge!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:28 am
Sugar has alot of anger but I love Chef!!
Author's Response:
Sugar is angry that she's attracted to Chef!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:20 am
Ugh!
Author's Response:
*giggles*
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 12:34 am
Why? She didn't accept the date!
Author's Response:
Stay tune for the next update! ;)
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 12:26 am
MJ, every interaction between "C" and Shug, no matter how mundane, all I can think of is FOREPLAY. HEE Is it because they are grown and sexay? :)
"I don’t want one. I don’t need one and if I did, it wouldn’t be you."
Shug, we're getting ahead of ourselves, aren't we? Shug is about to learn what it is to deal with a MAN. She's been with Lance since she was 19, right? He wasn't and isn't a man. This will be new territory for her.
Her sisters are a trip. Who knew that babygirl would be the peacemaker.
This is a delight to read, Chica.
Author's Response:
Their conversations are very much like foreplay. I love writing intense love/hate banter. "His Mercy" is filled with it. But you're absolutely right. Sugar is about to come face-to-face with a real man, who is nothing like Lance, LOL. As for Odette, she hates fighting. So she'll spill tea to end a war.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 07:51 pm
Sorry for the back to back comments, but I forgot to mention Mallory, he needs to GROW UP, just b/c Sugar is his sister doesn't mean that heugat can take advantage b/c you want some BOOTY... If I were Sugar, he would get ONE warning and then the next time he would be FIRED.
Author's Response:
Mallory is on his way to straightening up, but Sugar will no doubt get with him if he continues on.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 05:11 pm
I love this story so far, the characters are great... I can see Sugar being a bit apprehensive about Trust afiter being married to Lance, but don't judge a book by its cover... I have a feeling that Chef kinda figured out Sugar from the moment he met her... its going to be Fun watching the push and pull between the two...
As for Lance and his THOT(That Ho Over There) they're two peas in a pod... Lance is a child in an adult body... he's the type that needs his Ego stroked all the time, and can't sharing the success with anyone, not even his wife... he never wanted Sugar to succseed b/c it wpould make him less of a man in his mind.. Sugar needs to let him and his THOT GO/
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I like your thoughts about Lance. You're right. Lance didn't want Sugar to succeed because that would've made him feel less than a man. That's why he kept shooting her down when she came to him about the Sugar Mama idea. He wanted a submissive perfect housewife that looked up to him and stroked his ego. He wanted a wife who dedicated their life to him and solely him.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 05:07 pm
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see where Chef and Sugars relationship goes and how they'll meet again in the future!
Author's Response:
They will meet again in the next update!
Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 07:36 am
I really like this story...it's well written and fun...it's awesome to see the protagonist is a professional woman learning to stand on her own...such a strong presence is often lacking in stories with black women...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It is different but fun writing Sugar because she is such a determined businesswoman. She wants to do right for herself by making sure her restaurant is successful. It's like a product of her hard work.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 07:33 am