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Title: Chapter 3

I like Heaven. She's appears smart, gutsy and levelheaded. However, this is an interesting dilemma for her. Choose wisely...

As for that bunch; I'm just wondering for the guys is it a who can get to her first type of thing? Ghost thought he was slick slipping her his number like that. These are all alpha males with all that testosterone, so I honestly don't see them sharing a woman if one of them actually wanted to get serious enough in the long run.

Also, I'm not sure I appreciate them just showing up at her home...her sanctuary, as she puts it, with this type of trouble. I like when she told them not to make that a habit.  

Looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2023 05:13 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I like a lot.  Of course my dirty, gluttonous mind went to her having all 4.  Why da hell not.  Who could choose between all that lusciousness.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 13 2023 01:53 am
Title: Chapter 3

More please!

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2023 09:20 am
Title: Chapter 3

Something about this story is compelling. So much so that I'm looking forward to your next installment. This has the makings of a really good story. Well done, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2023 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh this story has my interest so far, I have a feeling that Heaven is going to be with Rampage, but we'll see.

 Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 26 2023 01:39 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love what I have read so far.  Can't wait to see how this plays out.

 Reviewer: Cece147 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love a good MC story 😌 more please! Great job!

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 01:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

Nice!

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 01:51 am


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