Awww....first date jitters....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:53 am
Loved that first date!!
Wait...Miriam?!?!? As in Kendra's mom???
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:50 am
Well, Reese and Elisha were going to end up having this fight eventually anyway. Cant keep making the guy pay for things he hasn't even done. He's fed up.
Brian...that's disappointing. Hope her sister doesn't get caught up in that.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2024 02:47 am
Ok, how he asked her out; too cute and sexy. I approve!!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks, I'm glad you thought so. Hopefully they both continue making progress and not let the shyness get in their way.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2024 08:35 pm
So, Larissa had her words with Reese about the situation. Leave it there. Reese was right; the rest is on them. Stay out of folks love lives because of that. Things can turn and suddenly you're the enemy!
And Gabby....David told her as simply as he could...not interested. I hope she doesn't make a situation ugly with a guy she doesn't even know that well. She would be making a fool out of herself. And no guy is worth all that.
Author's Response:
I agree, you do have to let people do what their hearts desire and hope for the best. Larissa just wants the best for her sister but has to also respect her boundaries and decisions.
I hope Gabby takes the hint and moves on and lets this couple be lol
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2024 08:24 pm
Hmm..well, as far as Danielle goes, she was warned. If Brian proves her wrong, great! If not, she was told Nothing else Larissa can do about it.
That mess with Gloria, stuff like that happens, too. Not much Larissa can do about that either. Nor that crap with Gabby. She told David how she felt and now her job is to keep trusting and believing him... and THEM. To keep her wits about herself and don't run her man into that heffa's arms with stupidity. Don't do the work for her! Wow, Larissa does seem to be getting the lion's share of problems at the moment.
David seems to have his mind and heart right concerning Larissa and her place in his life. He also needs to keep his wits abourt himself. That will go a very long way because he might have a battle in his own home with that. Being centered and clear within himself and Larissa is key.
They're teens, but they really are doing and saying adult stuff, so the sooner they mature with this, the better.
Kenya and Jason; coming along. I like his approach. A foundation for anything being built is needed.
Liked the updates!
Author's Response:
thank you for comment <3
yes poor Larissa has been bearing alot of burdens to be so young. I do hope Brian does right by her sister, we'll just have to wait and see.
You are so right about Larissa and David needing to stay focused on what matters most, their relationship. We will see where life takes these two.
Stay tuned for more! I promise it gets better and better.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 21 2024 09:15 pm
Ok! All caught up. Man...did these two take the long way around or what? I hope that study session does the trick. I need a first date to happen here real soon.
Author's Response:
lol, dont worry its coming. I just want to portray the hesistancy and fear that people of two different races may have in expressing their interest in each other. But trust me its coming sis
thanks for reading <3
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2024 03:45 am
Supreb!!
Author's Response:
thank you for reading <3
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2024 03:17 am
Good beginning introduction for this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2024 03:16 am
I'm just loving Jason and Kendra more and more,they are just too cute for words. They are both just so shy and a bit insecure, hopefully one of them will take the plunge and just be go for it.
I see red flags with Reese, he's an undecover player, and he hides it well. Lisha IMHO is going to be hurt big time, she should not be OK with a man that can't express his emotions and has to "play" hard all the time. And Lisha is the girl that will take him back no matter how many times he direspects her.. I'm going to be watching those two.
Author's Response:
Aww im glad you're liking Jason and Kendra. I was cracking up on yoir comment about Reese lol. Only time will tell with those two. I am excited to give you all more, stay tuned!!
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 13 2024 01:12 pm
This story is cute so far, has a 90210 kinda vibe, it flows very well.
I'm already looking forward to Jason and Kendra's story; its so cute how they're both shy around one another, and Jason should find Eric and teach this guy a lesson (LOL)
Already dont like Larrisa's mom, that girl is crying out for attention and not what money can buy, David seems like a nice guy, but mom is just color struck, and dad is a wimp, he seems like he needs to put his foot down.
Awaiting more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I have lot more to give you all and it's gonna get deep!
Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2024 11:18 pm