Reviews For Trouble Sleeping
Title: Chapter 1

Sweet indeed! Loved the pairing!



Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/21/10 09:11 am

Title: Chapter 1

All right, I'm going to be completely honest. I have no idea what Heroes is, but I enjoyed the read. I was actually listening to Billie Holiday's I'm a fool to want you while the content is different between the two, it was nice mood that carried all the way through to the end. This was very nicely written.

Author's Response: Many thanks, Treble Clef. Also, sorry for the very late responce. I don't know why I didn't recieve an alert for your review. ^^;

Reviewer: Treble Clef Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/09 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I really like this. So long since I watched Heroes and I love anything that has to do with the good old days. I hope you post  more Monica for me :D

Author's Response:

Would you believe me when I say that I'm working on that? :)

Thanks for commenting, BM!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/30/09 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

I read this again, just because it always makes me smile when I do. This reminds me of the Heroes that made me excited for mondays a while back. Love Monica to death and Mohinder is so sweet with her. Lovely work LP. Just lovely. I so hope you write more of these. :D 



Author's Response:

It makes you smile?  Wow, if that isn't a great compliment then I don't know what is. *blush* The brief interaction between Monica and Mohinder in Season 2 was just brimming with possibilities that I suspected TPTB would never even broach.  More fool them.

I hope I can write more too.  Maybe another Mo/Mon fic but I'd like to take a crack at original fiction as well.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 10:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great story.  Thanks

Author's Response: You're welcome.  Thank you for commenting as well.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 09:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 09:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Aw very sweet. I love how you write Mohinder; I can definitely hear his voice. And love that you touch on how much he works. I swear they've plugged a battery into his character on the show; always in the lab, working, trying to find the formula, trying to find a cure, etc. This was lovely. Thanks for posting it :) 



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Writing Mohinder's voice was surprisingly easier than I thought it would be.  Especially since I typed all this in between a conversation and a school assignment. XD Also, it wouldn't be Mohinder if he wasn't his workaholic self.

Thanks for commenting.  I hope my future works will be just as good, if not better. 

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 12:08 am



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