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Title: Chapter 2

Why is she all lovey dovey with him now? Thanks

Author's Response: Very desperate moment on her part, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Where was Taye?  Not using a condom, their realatonship can't handle a baby right now.  When Dena is sober she will regret making whoopee without a jimmy hat.  I hope that their marriage without either of them cheating.  Great update.



Author's Response: More stuff will be explained in the next chapter! Im going to update now! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/10 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a good start to the story.  Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I will update more soon!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 11:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am a capricorn and I like this story.  Dena needs to chill out or she will push Taye away.  Although that is still not excuse for either of them to cheat!!    A good beginning.

Author's Response: Yay! Im glad a Capricorn likes this story. Another chick thought that I was attacking you all or something. Whatever! And theres no excuse for cheating, just bad judgement and hormones!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 03:30 am

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