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Title: The Decision

great start!!! i hope you continue.

 Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/08/11 08:47 am
Title: The Decision

...just waiting for part two. Although just leaving it here would be good too :P Me likes.

 Reviewer: MyNameisJack Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/10 09:03 pm
Title: The Decision

I likes! I definitely think you should expand the story.

 Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 09:50 pm
Title: The Decision

Nice :) I feel bad that she feels her life so awful that she must commit to a courtesan service. But there is such a thing as "stepping out of your comfort zone" and maybe this is what she needs to shake things up! Great job!

 Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:12 pm
Title: The Decision

Well extend away. This sounds like a story that could go a whole lot of places. I'm up for the ride.

 Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 04:03 pm
Title: The Decision

Interesting short but why did she go that path??? Definitely would read if story is extended.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 07:56 am
Title: The Decision

I think you should continue this story. I want to see what happens when she starts working as an escort. Great start1

 Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 02:32 am
Title: The Decision

She's ready to step outside of her box. Enjoyed it!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 11:24 pm
Title: The Decision

I'd love to know what made her decide to do this. I've heard of girls working as escorts to pay for college, but still.

 

Mad curious.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 09:44 pm
Title: The Decision

Interesting beginning.  Looking forward to seeing where this story is going.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 04:32 pm
Title: The Decision

Well at least it something to fall back on .Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 04:18 pm
Title: The Decision

Great start. Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 04:13 pm
Title: The Decision

What I want to know is...what would make a young lady who has everything ahead of her (smart, beautiful and accomplished) want to become employed by an escort service. Definitely not expecting that one at all. Maybe you should extend this one. I'd like to know why she's crying and why she'd suddenly think an escort service would be the key to her happiness.

The writing was nicely done! :)

 Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 03:28 pm
Title: The Decision

Why is a 22 year old that desperate that she sill join a courtesan service?  She just graduated college.  Shouldn't she be looking for a job?  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 12:36 pm
Title: The Decision

Great beginning so far.  I would say, definitely continue!  It would be great if some of her experiences were less is more, just like this.

 Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 11:48 am
Title: The Decision

I really liked it. Seriously, I think you should continue. I am so curious to knlow what happens next. Great job!

 Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 11:31 am
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