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Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Ok now I am mad at you for leaving me hanging like that twice!!!

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Yea I'm so happy Maks is coming home to claim his girl!! Please don't let Brandy be too much of mood killer, I know their  have to be some drama but not much please. And I glad Brandy have a doctor who care enough to let her know she's wrong for not letting Maks know about the pregnancy.And I love the fact that Maks is having all these dreams about Brandy being pregnant that go to show how strong their connection are. You are reeally are doing a great job with this story, I can't wait for the next chapther. 

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

I agree with you that you can write your own dream. I am bad about rewiewing sorry :-(

Please continue with the story. It is so worth the read. We all saw the chemistry on DWTS, so fly with the what if!

The fact that Maks called her baby, should be a sure sign that he is still into her.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

I am so excited that Maks and Brandy will be in each others presence again and in Maks heart and dreams he already knows that Brandy is pregnant it just needs to be confirmed by Brandy now and I hope she does keep him waiting.

He needs to know and she needs to know that he loves her and only her and only wants what's best for her and Sy'ral and the new baby.

Please update soon.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Oh my, Brandy girl you need to tell him asap. Maks is going to be thrill.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Thanks for the update.. I do hope that Brandy tell Maks about the baby, but it seems that Fate is already telling him.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Wow Nakia I really appreciate the update. This is great and Val and his big mouth is right.  I cannot wait until Maks sees B in her current state..HEHEHEHE.  I do hope that she arrives to the airport safely and that you do not hit us with the angst of an accident or something.  It does not matter because whatever you write abotu the lovely couple will be fine with me.  I will read it.  Take care and I look forward to the next update this weekend.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 04:51 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Nice chapter. I can't wait till Maks finds out. He is going to be thrilled. Brandy is over thinking the situation. Why is she assuming the worst. Hurry and post the next chapter.! =-)

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Nice short chapter! Can't wait for Maks to see Brandy again! He is definitely gonna know something is up, I hope she tells him the truth. He is gonna love this surprise. Can't wait for more :)

Dr. Winters was right for getting in Brandy's business. I can understand not telling the father right away, but three months is along time. She probably had good intentions/reasons for not telling him, but enough is enough! Go get your man B and make him the happiest man on this planet! Maks can do the same by proposing LOL :D

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 10:05 am

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

your killing me update soon please pretty please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 07:39 am

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