Awesome update!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for the update! I thought you had forgotten about this story! Short & sweet nice chapter! Screw Erin, she's such a low life!! Maks knows Brandy is the only one that can make him feel gooooood. :D

Everyday since I first read your story I been checking to see if you post anything, and just my luck you did.I love where you are going with this story,Brandy and Maks have so much chemisty it just seem right that they can't seem to get enough of each other. But I would love to see if those two have more in common than just sex, dont get me wrong I love the sex scenes but their conncetion go deep then that.I dont want you to think I'm complaining because I'm not, like I said before I love your story,I would just like see that conncetion we all witness while they was on dwts.

Thank you so much writing this beautiful story I really do enjoy reading it. :)

Finally I was able to read your story on Brandy and Maks. First I would like to said you out did yourself the story line was nice I only have one question why are Brandy and Maks fighting alot? You see in my mind I see them beening so close nothing can separate them,like in the beginning I can understand all the fighting because there was so much of sexually tension going on between them,but once they in up in bed together the fighting would stop to an degree.And I hate seeing Brandy so work up all the times she really need to take chill pill and relax herself.But your story really have me wanting more. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to write this story for all us Brandy and Maks fans we really appreciate it. :)

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When is there going to be an update on this fic?

Yes, an update would def. be appreciated.

This whole story is amazing! When are you going to update? I just keep reading it over and over and cannot get enough.

Great chapter..

You may want to go back and check the middle of this chapter.. When Val enters Kelly room she was laying in bed with a camisole top and boy short bottoms. But when he has her up against the wall he's pushing up her sweater and pulling down her panties. When he had ripped them off a few sentences before..

Other than that confusing bit I loved this chapter.. Kelly has not challenged Val and he will definitely take that challenge and her and that P@&&! his..

Looking forward to the next update.

I will say a prayer for your grandmother.. I experienced the same thing with my grandmother a few years ago.. She fell and broke her hip while shampooing her rug.. She pulled through it and your grandmother will too..  I'm so sorry to hear about your son's classmate..As you said can't imagine anything so horrible that would make an 11 year old take is life.. He will be in my prayers as well..

As for the story.. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.. Kelly needs love too.. Go it Val..

Well the plan worked! But I would hate if someone did that to me, even if I deserved it. I would be mad as hell. What would really be funny is if Brandy found out some kind of way and knew that Maks was in on it. I don't know, Kelly could be talking to Ray J and Maks and Brandy could over here Kelly describing her melt down to them and how she almost felt bad for doing it but it was for her own good. That would be hilarious, not for them but if Brandy all of a sudden moved on just like Maks and started to act normal as ever and if someone was to hit on her, she does not have to give in to it but she could flirt just a little. That would serve them right for trying to make her get on the straight and narrow.

Like I said, what they did, did help Brandy to stop being so wishy washy but that's not the annswer to solving a challenge or fear a person has. Yes, in thus instance it may work but Brandy is not going to have people their to intervine for her all the time. It is something she has to do and before she talked to Kelly it seemed as though she had made up her mind and that she wanted to go all the way with Maks. But his insecure *ss called Ray J and he called Kelly and cooked up a plan that was not needed. All Brandy did was talk to Kelly and that's all she needed. The plan, I beleive will work but it might work too much. Maks went off, I understand he was upset and Brandy was moving too slow but he has to look at it from her perspective.

Brandy had been thru a lot and even though Maks is sincere in his feelings for her, she wanted to be sure and she still has a career and a child to raise. People can moan and groan about why a person does this or that but until the person running their mouth walks a mile in the other person's shoes --they need to shut it. Brandy had finally come to the conclusion with the help of venting to Kelly, that Maks is the one and they go and implement the plan. I really do hope it blows up in their face. not in a mean way but in the way that says you cannot play with people's lives and then the next day say, "I was just playing. I only did that to make you realize that you really can't live without me and that you want to be with me fully." WHAT! Especially when Brandy was ready to be with Maks. She was about to tell him on the phone.

Anyway, sorry for talking so long. This story is really good and I can't wait for more. I want Maks and Brandy to be together more than the next person, I just hate when people try to help a relationship along the way. Great writing!

Brandy does seem a little immature. But Maks is moving a little to fast...Now he is sexy but not sexy enough to break a 6 year self imposed exile from sex! I like these two together but we need to slow down the pace of the relationship.

Author's Response:

I think Maks is used to more aggresive women. in alot a ways Brandy has been sheltered and she is more reserved. Sometimes it takes the right man to come along and make you forget somethings, (lol).  I wanted to show just how relationships can tank quickly when sex becomes the reason two people get together.