i really liked the last chapter but am also very worried, why would she stay if she's upset with him and not confront him also he should have told her about what happened with erin but he said it best when he called her a child grown women confront a man not run away. keep it coming
Author's Response: I believe Brandy has alot of growing up to do, and who best to teach her; well Maks of course! Love your feedback, keep it coming.
Date: 05/12/10 10:17 pm
I'm not a dwts fan but I do like Brandy and I saw Maks on Celebrity Ghost Stories and he was saying how he was hurt and they thought he would never dance again and he had to through therapy.. To make a long story short the therapist that help to heal his leg was he deceased grandmother who he never met.. Maybe that could be incorporated into why he feels so strongly for Brandy..
Just a thought.
Enjoying the story so far looking forward to this next chapter..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/12/10 05:43 pm
I have a few things to say about this story but I will start by saying that I am happy that you are writing it. I am a big fan of these two and reading this makes me excited. There are a few minor errors but those errors do not take anything away from my reading experience. I like the realistic aspect of reading this...their personalities even their mannerisms seem to be right on with these two just like in real life.
Now on to the story...you can tell that Brandy really cares about Maks on a deeper level than friendship...otherwise I don't think she would have broken her 6-year celibacy vow. However, she is really guarding her heart and I can definitely feel her on that. They said I love you to each other but I wonder if Brandy does not quite believe his feelings just yet. She knows that he loves her as a close friend but was she really hearing him when he said it in the bathtub? Maybe if he told her over breakfast in bed it would have sunk in a little more. I'm surprised but not surprised that Maks is pushing her for a relationship...I think he needs to wait until she is ready but at the same time Brandy should just let go and let flow, lol--they have already been intimate. Did either of them realize that they just had sex without protection? For some reason, I feel that they were caught up in the moment. What will this mean in the future? I guess time will tell as this story continues. I would like to see where their relationship will go...how will it affect their careers? Maks has overzealous fans (though some of his fans in real life wants him with her)...if the relationship gets serious how will his family in the states and back in the Ukraine feel? Her family? Ray J seems to know what's up as he and Brandy are close so I don't think that would be an issue. Then there is Erin….she is obviously in love with Maks. How far will she go to get him back? I would love to see how this all unfolds with your writing of this story.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 07:55 pm
damn damn that was hot am not even going to say what am feeling
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 01:05 am
Miss Nakia, I'd be happy to beta for you if you need it dear. Just drop me an email at sylvie.maye@gmail.com.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Miss Renee. I greatly appreciate you. I will send you ch. 8 by Thursday evening.
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 06:54 am
Ok I have read it and LOVED IT. Just one thing you need to beef it up with some padding (details). We feel like we know these people, now show us something MORE! Answer those ??? we all have. I know I have question add those ? to the story. Come on Gurlie :0). Need help? Let me know! If not still reading and LOVING
Author's Response: I feel you so much, and I'm trying to be careful, because they are 'real'. I have done so much research on them, watching all the interviews, reading both their blogs, that it can be a bit undaunting. Help a sis. girl help, I love all feedback. Send me an e-mail@ nakia_ray@yahoo.com. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 06:31 am
thank thank you it was well worth the wait please continue not be greedy but can we have another love making session keep it coming
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 09:33 pm
OK I have not read the story, but i saw the post for it and got so excited that i had to say something before I went to work. I am so glad someone else saw the potential for these two. I love them togetheron the show. They look good together. Now show us what you got. Expecting MUCH HOTNESS. YOU GO GIRL FOR Taking this BULL by the horns!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love them together! I just had to write a story about them. It has to be something btw them, because I never get this excited about celbs. Thanks for the support!
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 12:53 pm
can't wait to read more =)
Reviewer: meka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 04:18 am
I enjoyed it. It's time to take their relationship to the next level.
Author's Response: Thank you, I have posted ch. 2-4. Thanks for R&R!
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 02:13 am
I'm so excited. I was wondering if anyone was going to do a story about them. The pics did not come through.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was wondering the same myself, and became fustrated. There is one on another site called Sweetest Taboo, under Television IR. Check it out. Sorry about the pics, not sure what i'm doing wrong.
[Report This]Date: 30/11/10 02:09 am