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Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

Ooooooo they so naughty cater to your man Brandy

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/11 07:10 am

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

oye...love the side stories unfolding.

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

Hot damnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!maks hmmmmmmmm gooddddd

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

I love this story please update soon

Reviewer: peaches500_51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

hawt!

I love your writing for Maks.  He's hot, spicy, and rips the seal off her reserved proper packaging.  Val is going to make Kelly into a mush mound.  You can tell.  Jamar seems like quite the guy.  But Kelly needs Val's strength to keep her balanced.

I'm loving it.  I can't wait to read what you have next.

 

 

Reviewer: SparkApCider Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 09:24 am

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

Wow,Brandy and Maks are some freaks with all that risky loving in the club. Kelly sure giving Val a hard time.She could at least be nice to him even if she doesn't want a romance with him. Hope Jamar lives up to her expectations.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/10 09:10 am

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

damn damn brandy and maks give 112 we can do it anywhere a whole new meaning want  kelly and val to get their groove on will he be as freaky as hisn brother and show kelly what a youngin can do

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

My word...Brandy and Maks are a couple of freaks...in love...doing the horizontal mambo on a dance floor...in the middle of a crowded club...dang...I'm speechless...

I think Kelly doth protest too much...noticed she noticed the red-head on Val's arm...wonder why, hmmm...and no you didn't use Shemar Moore as the image for Jamar...what's a girl to do...two fionne men...both want her...so far, Jamar seems cool...but I have my reservations since he dated Kelly's friend, Serena...wondering why she broke it off with him after declaring her love for him after only a week of dating...things that make you ponder...can't wait to see where you take us next...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

this update had me LMAO. I can never see Maks and Brandy in the same light again (now they are some freaks lol) I do wish they could be a real life couple

Author's Response: Well a few close sources say it's only a matter of time. They say that Erin is so pissed off at Maks and Brandy and their closeness. I follow all three and it's been over a month since Maks and Erin have tweeted. However, Maks and Brandy are always tweeting one another. Maks is in Paris at the moment, he just finished doing the Ukranian Bachelor, and sources say there was no love match. I do know he blogged on his forum that because of Brandy and her encouragement, he decided to do the show. He is very protective of her, and he blocked several of Erin followers, because they were very cruel to Brandy. I truly do not know personally, but I do know when a man becomes protective with a woman, it's beacuse he feels deeply for her. Only time will tell, and until then I am going to write as if there was a hot, passionate love story btw them. I love those two!!!!

Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

That was hawt, they had hot butt naked sex in the club!!!!  I love me some Maks!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

HOT!! Great Chapter, I can't wait for more! :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/12/10 03:19 pm

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