Woo those Chmerkovskiy men are off the hook with their passion, possesiveness and their alphaness. Just what a girl needs in her life.
Great update was a bit confused in some places but remembered this is un-beta
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 08:21 am
new story lines are awesome
Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/01/11 12:44 am
I love this chapter. more don't stop.
Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 06:19 am
its vgreat keep it up bring on kelly and val looks like they are going to out do max AND BRANDY
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/11 06:01 am
I love love love ur story line. and im loving where youve taken these characters. keep up the good work! :D
Reviewer: KamilahW Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/11 07:39 am
Kelly sure is giving a lot of lip service...but one touch from Val and she's like a puddle in his hands...why does she insist on calling him a "boy" when he is anything but...arrogant as heck...but definitely not a boy...this is getting gooood...can't wait to see what happens next...
And Brandy is right...Maks better handle Erin before a sista has to take off her earrings and grab the Vaseline!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/11 03:42 am
I love Val in this chapter. I am a little confused...at the club Kelly said that her and Val kissed and she felt fireworks. Did I miss something? I thought they almost kissed in the hotel room..
Author's Response:
You are absoutely correct. I should have went back to check, especially since I was half asleep when I wrote chapter 18 (lol). Good looking out, because I sure did forget that they almost kissed.
Thank you, very being a Reader and a Reviewer.
I greatly appreciate you. Thank you again, Nakia.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/11 12:52 am
I likey a lot! More please
Author's Response: thank you, Apple, I am so happy that you like my story, and I will be updating real soon. Reviewer: Apple Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/01/11 09:29 pm
Kelly...Kelly! Val could have stole the p*ssy with two suitcases while Jamar watched in awe! SMH! She is without a doubt into him. But Kelly lives inside her head. And I agree with pmgayles that she's muscled up over his presence because she feels they threw him on her. It's all good. Val is a complex guy. And I find him, f-a-s-c-i-n-a-t-i-n-g!
Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/11 12:14 pm
I had to stop several times while reading this story because I was laughing so hard especially when Val decided to dance on Kelly; we’ve either been there or seen this happened in the club before. Those darn Chmerkovskiy brothers are so sure of themselves (luv it). (the only thing I wish is that it would have been a faceless friend of Brandy because I now will have vision of Kelley and Val whenever I see either lol). You’re doing a great job with the story so whatever direction you want to take I’m going to enjoy it.A question what did Erin say in her blog and on GMA ref to Brandy. I wasn’t in the states when all this happened and only recently did I check out the dances between Mak and Brandy on youtube.
Author's Response: In her blog, she said that Brandy was too emotional and she needed to calm down; she also said she wanted to win too badly. Erin made the comment that she only wanted Maks to win the Mirroe Ball with her, but of course we all know it was much too late for that. This caused her followers to accuse Brandy of interfering with Maks and Erin love life. People are just crazy, but Brandy was classy and never went off on anyone. On GMA Erin, made the statement that Bristol deserve to be in the finals, because obviously the people wanted her there, however it has beem proven that many people used fake e-mail accounts to vote at least 100 times for Bristol, which is illegal according to the rules of voting on DWTS. As you can see have been very consumed with all things of Brandy & Maks.
[Report This]Date: 07/01/11 10:38 am
Oh oh, Val seems to be the man up for the challenge with Kelly! He's taking no prisoners.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/11 07:59 am
Kelly is being like that becasue that forced Val on her, but she is so attracted to him. Val is not as fine as Maks, no even close in my opinion. So love this story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/01/11 05:42 am