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Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

things are getting interesting.  i'm ready for the drama.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

BRANDMC are just smoking hawt!  But I love it.  OH SHIIIIIT!  Serena is on the island.  

 Reviewer: SparkApCider Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/11 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

I loved the chapter. I'm writing a story, too. It's based on the Double Platinum: Starring Brandy and I decided to add Makism Chmerkovskiy as her love interest. I could use ideas you, if you help. I've writers block, too.

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sure no problem, tell me where are you trying to go, where are you going to end up at? My email address is nakia_ray@yahoo.com. we can communicate that way. 

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 06:22 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

Yes, I love those two freaks!  Hot update.  I was blown away when they had sex in the club (I couldn't believe it) but I love the balcony scene and him slapping her a**.

Um, I think Serena will have a lot to say when she finds out about Kelly's new friend...it's hard to say what her reaction might be though...

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 11:45 pm
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

Love that Brandy and Maks bonding.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 09:40 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

you were right too short :-)

 Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 07:13 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

Brandy and Maks are just so sexy together.  I am loving this story.  I just imagine that it's me instead of Brandy when the loving gets good.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 05:49 am
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