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Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

Please continue with this story! I love where you are going with it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, and I will continue to update until the story is finished.

Reviewer: Alice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

I really like where you are going with this story! Keep up the good work:)

Reviewer: Nicole Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/01/11 07:46 am

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

exactly this isthe event that brings kelly and val together please post another chapter soon did i say please lol

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

That was so bogus of Serena and Jamar.  How could Serena treat her girl like that?  Ya girl is deeper and closer than just a friend.  Val now is the time to slide your way in.  So loved the newest chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

I'm guessing Val will "take care" of Ms Kelly ;-)

Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 02:18 pm

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

I am absolutely hooked.  Brandy needed a push and now it appears her friend Kelly does as well.  I can hardly wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 12:40 pm

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

I could, like, picture that whole argument playing out in my head. Nice work! I love reading your chapters, so as long as you want to keep writing them, I will keep reading! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 08:49 am

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

definitely Team Val...

Kelly needed to show her vulnerability.  Men like Val eat it up with a ladle.   

 

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

Loved the update but I think Serena too far and she may have gone to hook up with Jamar! Hopefully this is the break the Val needs to get close to Kelly!! Serena was really not nice and she hurt someone who was supposed to be her friend.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 07:14 am

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