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Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

There is more involved than just breaching an agreement.  He's gone back to his home country and he is someone who succeeded that many people there look up too.  Like an idol.  So, if he breached the contract not only could he be sued for everything he has but he would let down a nation of people.  In a sense, he'd be turning his back on his country.  Now, to ask a man to do that for you even when you can is wrong and Brandy should know that.  It's narcissitic because if you know he signed the contract before he even knew you and that he's just fullfilling an obligation, it really is not a biggie.  But,I wouldn't go around calling Maks my boyfriend and risk looking like a silly ho.  So, it would mean keeping their relationship secret until the big reveal and that could take months.  But, the important thing would be to let Maks do the honorable thing and to trust him and your love.

Reviewer: Marlab Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/03/11 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1

im sorry i meant to gve you more stars so i just submitt this again love how the story is unfolding and waiting on the next installment

Reviewer: stacyj Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/11 05:08 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Thanks so much for this story i love the way its unfolding between our main characters,i love the fact that we have finally gotten to the dating show part and cant wait to see how it turns out..thanks again,i love your work..pretty,pretty please can we have another installment soon like today..

Reviewer: stacyj Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/03/11 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Please update soon! Thanks in advance!

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/03/11 08:07 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yes, an update would def. be appreciated.

Reviewer: Montoya Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/11 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Nakia, TY much for this update.  I do hope that you update Friday or even tomorrow.  I love love love this story and all the pairings. 

Reviewer: qsmommy05 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/11 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

are you sure Brandy and Maks were seen after this season rehearsals or was it after their own rehearsals?

Author's Response: TMZ reported it on last Friday. I don't think they would bring up a past sighting. The report was not saying they were romantically linked, just that the good friends were together after Maks's rehearsals with now DWTS partner Kristie Alley.

Reviewer: Marissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Girl, this chapter is hot! Nothing like some steamy sex to get over being angry. Very good read!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Aw, he came back to apologize..too bad the chapter ended there.  I love Val and Kelly...Val fell in love quickly.  Short but okay chapter.

Also where did your hear/read that they've been spotted together after his dance rehearsals?  I haven't heard that at all.



Author's Response:

I don't know if you have ever written a story before? However, there are times when you want to build up the story and not give everything all at once. This is not a book, where as you can read continously until you find out the ending.

Val has always had a crush on Kelly, and sometimes the affairs of the heart differ for each person. Love is something that happens to you, and you can't help it when it does happen.

I do realize that everyone will not like my version of my story, therefore I will remain true to myself and my vision of creativity.

Sorry if you felt it was just okay and that you only gave me three 3 stars for the chapter, but in life we can't always get what we want.

I saw it on TMZ that they were spotted together, and that they also attended a charity event together. Also on both of there twitter accounts they have pics of two seperate times where they were together. One when they hung out with Cheryl Burke (who was not in the pic with them) and another time when they posed together, because they had on different clothing.

I will never post anything that I did not see personally for myself or heard for myself. I simpilly reported the info, because so many of us saw a strong chemistry btw the two and we are hopeful that there could be something deeper for the both of them.

I Sorry to disappoint you, but I do hope you will continue to R&R.

 

 

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Wow...Kelly and Val are scorching...hmmm, those Chermkovskiy men...makes me want one...yum, yum...lol...Val has already dropped the L-bomb...I hope Kel gives herself a chance to return the feeling...

Loved how Kelly handled Serena...glad she differientiated between not liking her ACTIONS...though she still has much love in her heart for her girl...but Serena needed to be checked and just grow the heck up...sometimes...one's actions have consequences and there are no easy fixes with a simple "I'm sorry"...I hope Serena honors Kelly's request of giving her space because if she doesn't...she stands a good chance of losing that friendship and rightly so...she needs to back off for now...absolving one's guilt at the expense of your friend's feelings is never a good idea...

I'm still nervous about Brandy and Maks...seems they are at an impasse...Maks has made the first overture to repair the damage...I hope Ms. Brandy doesn't fly off the handle and actually talks to him this time and see if they can resolve this situation maturely...like adults...

Good news of the RL front...though I prefer to stay out the lives of celebs...but they were smoking on DWTS so I hope they see where this 'thing' takes them...

Love this story Nakia...can't wait for the next update...

 

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 1

all i have to say is damn damn i thought marks was a the champion in the bedroom but val is quickly showing he is the man  i do hope marks and brandy get their act together and i hope in real life their together update quickly marks and brandy need to kiss and make up stat damn

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

loved the way kelly handled serena ass like a woman ; damn val and kelly are fruicking hott together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

I am so in love with your story ! I just wish that the chapters could be alittle longer.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Absolutely loved this chapter.  Glad Serena is given some time to grow up.  Thank you for sharing with us about Maks and Bran seeing each other after hours.  I've always believed that these two will find a way to be happy together.  But, in the meantime you given me hope

Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 09:38 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Wow, Kelly and Val still going hard at it!! Glad she had a conversation with Serena. Hmmm, now let's see if Maks and Brandy can get it together.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Great update. Could you post a picture of Val?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 07:41 am

Title: Almost Doesn't Count

Please update soon! I am a fan of this story!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/11 09:47 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

i think maks and brandy needs to go off and cool off and sit down as adults and work it out i thinks maks genuinely forget. kelly and serena should sit down  and work things out and kelly should give val a chance age dosenot matter as long as the people invovled genuinely love each other

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

Hey where r u?  Please update

Reviewer: qsmommy05 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/11 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

It was a great chapter.  Will you write in what Serena is going through with her health?  The doctors found a blood clot in her lungs and she had emergency treatment. 

Reviewer: Trev23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/03/11 10:41 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

Wow! I can't believe you actually went there with the whole "Bachelor" situation. Maks is kind of scary at times and Brandy is just too impulsive, but I love it. You have them down pat. They really seem to be this way. I wonder what will become of Kelly and Serena. Anyway, this chapter was great. Very well written. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: Montoya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

Forgot to add my rating :)

Reviewer: Meg Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

Oh Boy...If Maks signed the contract already then I guess he is obligated to go...Their love is strong enough to survive, I'm sure of it. Maks did go to a dark place and it scared me a little just reading it lol but I don't think he would ever take it further than pinning her on the bed. I'm sure they can find time to be with each other while he is away...it just sucks that he is gonna leave after things were getting good and their love was intensifying. They are smart, they should def. work it out-for real.

 I think Kelly should at least talk to Serena. I mean they both were kinda in the wrong for their actions and what was said, but it's nothing compared to losing a friend. Even if it means being totally honest. 

I always love reading this story! Thanks! xo

Reviewer: Meg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

hey nakia. Ty for the update.  More angst for Bran DMC? I do like that fact that you have incorporated what is going on in reality as well.  As always I love this story and I look forward to reading your next update.

Danielle aka QsMommy05

Reviewer: QsMommy05 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/02/11 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 25 Bittersweet Moments

Oh my...gah...um...first of all I want to say thanks for sharing this story. I especially enjoyed reading the tender moment between the two...but golly it turned crazy in the next second. It's like two steps forward and three steps back. I'm rooting for these two...I really am and while I understand Brandy's anger I felt that calling him a "stupid bastard" was a bit harsh.  Learning that your man is going to do a dating show with 25 other women IS a HARD pill to swallow.  Not sure if I would "wait" either...and I probably wouldn't wait...but that's me and this is fiction.

Maks?  Well...for a moment I was afraid that it was going to get violent. I understand his passionate anger.  How did he forget though?  I just don't get how his contractual obligations to do the show was forgotten  I would prefer that he not do the show...

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/02/11 02:49 am

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