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Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

definitely Team Val...

Kelly needed to show her vulnerability.  Men like Val eat it up with a ladle.   

 

 Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 07:15 am
Title: Chapter 22 Backstabbers

Loved the update but I think Serena too far and she may have gone to hook up with Jamar! Hopefully this is the break the Val needs to get close to Kelly!! Serena was really not nice and she hurt someone who was supposed to be her friend.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/11 07:14 am
Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

Damn I love this story when are you going to put more up?

Author's Response: Ty, for r&r I will update this evening.

 Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 02:21 pm
Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

I hope they all find happiness.  Serena with Jamar.  Kelly and Val, and of course Brandy and Maks

Author's Response: I do too. Ty's for r&R.

 Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 04:08 am
Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

oops already read this one

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:59 am
Title: Chapter 21 New Revelations

i love drama when its not my life

Author's Response: Me too, that's why I love to write about it. Ty's for r&r.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:57 am
Title: Chapter 20 This Woman's Work

things are getting interesting.  i'm ready for the drama.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 19 Going Out of My Mind

new story lines are awesome

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 18: Ohh LaLa

oye...love the side stories unfolding.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:30 am
Title: Chapter 17: Say AHH

this could be interesting....

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:14 am
Title: Chapter 16: Surprise! Surprise!

Aaaaaaaaaahhhh

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 12:05 am
Title: Chapter 15

Poor Maks!  lol

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

i forgot the plan.  Brandy's reaction was so gut wrenching it brought tears to my eyes.  Awesome job.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:49 pm
Title: Chapter 13 Can You Say Brand NU

great chapter.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:38 pm
Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

nice, refreshing reaction.  unexpected.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

so sad....

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:29 pm
Title: Authors note

confuseth

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:26 pm
Title: Almost Doesn't Count

girl need 2 type of protection!  she should be using birth control as well as condom for diseases!  Smarten up girl!

good job!

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:25 pm
Title: The Cast

???????

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:17 pm
Title: 9. Shattered Hopes

glad she came clean about hearing the conversation.  Not good to let things festor.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:14 pm
Title: Chapter 8 Where Do We Go From Here?

loved all the twists and turns of this chapter.  Very realistic.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:07 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Wow!  MMMMM  Well written! lol

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 11:01 pm
Title: Chapter 6

this stopping after each chapter is torture.  I'm suffering through because this is good.

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Nice twist

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 4

that was unexpected! Nice!

 Reviewer: elaine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 10:41 pm
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