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Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Sniff...Sniff, Oh my I feel a bit tear up. That was so touching when Maks notice the baby bump and got to his knee, that was quite moving. And now I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Ok now I am mad at you for leaving me hanging like that twice!!!

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

Omg I was not expacting that at all and I love where you are going with this please continue to write!

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Yea I'm so happy Maks is coming home to claim his girl!! Please don't let Brandy be too much of mood killer, I know their  have to be some drama but not much please. And I glad Brandy have a doctor who care enough to let her know she's wrong for not letting Maks know about the pregnancy.And I love the fact that Maks is having all these dreams about Brandy being pregnant that go to show how strong their connection are. You are reeally are doing a great job with this story, I can't wait for the next chapther. 

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/11 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome update!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

I agree with you that you can write your own dream. I am bad about rewiewing sorry :-(

Please continue with the story. It is so worth the read. We all saw the chemistry on DWTS, so fly with the what if!

The fact that Maks called her baby, should be a sure sign that he is still into her.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 10:40 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

I am so excited that Maks and Brandy will be in each others presence again and in Maks heart and dreams he already knows that Brandy is pregnant it just needs to be confirmed by Brandy now and I hope she does keep him waiting.

He needs to know and she needs to know that he loves her and only her and only wants what's best for her and Sy'ral and the new baby.

Please update soon.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 08:24 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

Well baby girl is having another baby I can't say I am disappointed in this news :D

I wonder will she tell Maks now or wait til he comes back to the states

Great update can't wait for more.

Thank  you for sharing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Oh my, Brandy girl you need to tell him asap. Maks is going to be thrill.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Thanks for the update.. I do hope that Brandy tell Maks about the baby, but it seems that Fate is already telling him.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Wow Nakia I really appreciate the update. This is great and Val and his big mouth is right.  I cannot wait until Maks sees B in her current state..HEHEHEHE.  I do hope that she arrives to the airport safely and that you do not hit us with the angst of an accident or something.  It does not matter because whatever you write abotu the lovely couple will be fine with me.  I will read it.  Take care and I look forward to the next update this weekend.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 04:51 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Nice chapter. I can't wait till Maks finds out. He is going to be thrilled. Brandy is over thinking the situation. Why is she assuming the worst. Hurry and post the next chapter.! =-)

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

Nice short chapter! Can't wait for Maks to see Brandy again! He is definitely gonna know something is up, I hope she tells him the truth. He is gonna love this surprise. Can't wait for more :)

Dr. Winters was right for getting in Brandy's business. I can understand not telling the father right away, but three months is along time. She probably had good intentions/reasons for not telling him, but enough is enough! Go get your man B and make him the happiest man on this planet! Maks can do the same by proposing LOL :D

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 10:05 am

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

Uh oh she's pregnant!! what is she gonna do?? nice edition!

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 09:57 am

Title: Chapter 33 Family Ties

your killing me update soon please pretty please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/11 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

I have been reading this fanfic for awhile, but shamely had never review, because I'm not good with saying how I feel.  But I'm going to try now, so please don't laugh if I get it wrong.  I love reading this story. I have always been a fan of Brandy, her music just grab me.  As for Maks I don't really don't know much about him, but for what I have seen and heard, I'm quite taken to him also.  I do look forward to reading this story, but you take so long to update, I sometime forget to check it out. I just want to say also that you are doing fine in your writing style I like it.  It's fun reading.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

Thank you for the update. I have been missing this story.  So Brandy is preggers again.  Well in your world she will be doing a lot better this time.  Missed you al ot and I do hope that you post again before Monday. 

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 05:28 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

keep going just let them have a happy ending soon just my opinion not to much drama

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/11 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great job once again I'm loving the fact that Brandy is pregnant..I just hope you hurry up and bring Maks back to the U.S. I'm looking forward to your next chapter can't wait to find out what Maks will do when find out he is about to become a daddy.Yeah Brandy finally get her prince charming.

Reviewer: Tamiko Simmons Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/11 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

I like your story and have been following it fro the begnning. I think you should tidy up some of the format issues. 

Also, thougt I love reviews on my stories. for me personally the fact that so many people even read it makes me happy. 

Please continue because we totally need to know what Brandy is gonna do. As soon as she tells Maks, I know his sexy butt will be on that plane to LA contract obligations be damned. 

LOL



Author's Response:

I appreciate your comments. I'm not sure as to why all that jibberh is at the beginning of the store I am going to look into it.

Don't get me wrong I love that so many people have read my story; however if people don't respond (like yourself) than i wouldn't know what i needed to improve on. I love feedback whether positive or negative.

Thank you again and I will check out your stories, and I will be sure to review.

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 09:15 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for the update! I thought you had forgotten about this story! Short & sweet nice chapter! Screw Erin, she's such a low life!! Maks knows Brandy is the only one that can make him feel gooooood. :D

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/08/11 08:47 am

Title: Chapter 31 #GirlBye#

Ahhhh! Poor Maks is missing his baby Brandi and I am pround of Brandi she seems to be growing up and did not get pissed at Maks for Erin calling her with that foolishness.

I am like Maks I was hoping Brandi was pregnant too but it will happen I will be glad when this Russia Bachalor thing is over too so he can be with the woman he love.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 30 One Last Goodbye part II

Oh, my! I need a drink.

Reviewer: kiMoni99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 31 #GirlBye#

Short and sweet, can't wait to read what you have in store for those two. Thank you for keeping Brandy and Maks alive. 

Reviewer: Tamiko Simmons Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/11 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 31 #GirlBye#

Nakia

TY for the update.  I was missing this story something terrible.  I hope it does not take too long for the next update but I do understand the muse comes and goes.  Take care and I cannot wait to read the next update.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/07/11 05:10 pm

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