I think this was the right decision. They have a lot to work on but somehow they are just still scratching the surface. Brandy needs to work on herself...most celebrities have therapists and I'm not suggesting she needs to see one but she needs some self-reflection. Why is she so insecure? Why doesn't she believe she deserves love? She needs to get the core of her issues and then overcomeSelf-help can be a good thing...even if she chooses not to get professional help.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/12/10 05:07 pm
I'm disappointed she decided to leave and I'm with Maks ....it seems like its over. Hmmm, are they really meant to be??? Maks seem to be the more serious of the two. Maybe Brandy was just scratching an itch and decided to run when things got tough. She can take all the time in the world but she needs to figure out what she wants. She's too high strung!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 08:26 am
That was amazing, I love how Maks and Brandy deal with each other. Maks, I lvoe you if Brandy don't want you I do!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 07:31 am
Awww.... Well I understand. Distance makes the heart grow finer. Definetly for Maks (yumm, lol) I can't wait for more, have a great night and PLEASE post soon :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 06:59 am
Wow i loved the update i hope the seperation wont be too long!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 06:54 am
Read the rest of Chpt 9 and loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you, i got a little ahead of myself, lol. thanks for rereading chp. 9.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/10 06:15 am
A little late to turn tail and run now...I can understand being caught up in the moment...but shouldn't she have thought some things through before she hooked up with Maks again...like, if I'm going to get my freak on...then by all means...bring and USE protection...her first experience with Seraii should have taught her this lesson...but I suppose you're right...she still has a lot of growing up to do...freaking out and turning on Maks still isn't going to solve the problem if she is in fact pregnant...and if she was so miffed with him about what she overheard about the situation with Erin...WHY IS SHE STILL SLEEPING WITH HIM...and I believe she is deliberately setting out to sabotage this new relationship anyway...she's so very insecure...wondering why someone like Maks wants to have something serious with someone like her when he can any woman in the world he wants...this all stems IMHO on her lack of confidence...not only in her professional life...but most decidedly in her personal life as well...
I believe Maks is being so nonchalant about this whole situation because he KNOWS that she is 'the one' for him...he's already picturing a life with her...family, marriage, kids...the whole nine yards...that's why he tried to reassure her that he'd do the honable thing by her...but I really do think it's a bit early in the game of love to be bringing another child into the mix...unfortunately, life is unpredictable...and 'accidents' happen...Maks is much more emotionally secure at this point in his life than Brandy is...don't know about time to be playing 'meet the parents' as of yet...they still have a lot of work to do on this relationship...there are some serious trust issues involved...and they still haven't even had the Erin conversation...
Can't wait to see what is in store for these two next...still loving this story...looking forward to another update soon...
Author's Response:
I can understand where you are coming from, but Brandy and Maks had 3 months to get to know one another. In fact during that time thay shared alot of their dreams and personal experinces, but as friends. what Brandy didn't realize was that Maks had fallen in love with her before they had sex. I know it feels that they are moving fast, but for them they feel as if they have been knowing eachother for a long time.
If Brandy could just get past all of her insecurities, Maks better watch out! Thanks for your feedback it is greatly appreciated.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 01:10 am
I'm not speechless....but I'm..well let me just say this: They really need to talk about everything....put ALL their issues on the table. I felt that Brandy was caught up that night when protection wasn't being used and wondered what repercussions it would have...Did Maks not use protection on purpose? Or was he caught up too? Did Brandy know they were not using protection and just decided to let it slide? Did she have this reaction only after she finds out about Erin and then when he tells her he wants to go half on another baby...and her rational mind took over and reminded her to not get caught up again? I totally feel her on the marriage before babies thing but she really needs to be aware that a dude is blasting off inside of her and perhaps bring her own condoms next time instead of waiting for him to use his...just saying. I can't believe it didn't register until he told her. *Shakes head.* About her attitude, I understand that she is angry right now but I thought saying "are you fucking crazy?!" was a teensy bit harsh. His attitude....he is just too damn nonchalant about the whole thing. They really need to talk....and she should probably go back to L. A. Maybe he could visit next time but it is WAY TOO EARLY for her to meet his parents. The relationship is still new and the issues aren't even being discussed....they've only discussed things above the surface not below the surface. She needs to tell him about her feelings of hearing him mentioning the encounter with Erin. She needs to let go of her insecurities....he in turn needs to realize that this relationship isn't going to be a piece of cake. It is America after all :-0 and I will just leave it at that. Perhaps the no protection thing is just a scare...because bringing a baby into the situation right now is just well....they need to overcome all of the other ish right now before that even happens.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/12/10 12:41 am
Wish Brandy would just calm down, damn! Hope she does meet his parents =) Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I wish she would calm down too, but that's our Brandy. Can't wait to see how she handles this ish. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 07/12/10 10:20 pm
I think brandy should stay in nyc and meet maks parents..she just needs to calm down right now, i love maks attiitude he tells it like it is.
Author's Response: I believe Brandy thinks she doesn't deserve to be loved, especially with someone like Maksim. So in her mind she trying to destroy their realtionship, but her tender heart wants to let go and give it a chance. Thanks for your feedback. Now onto Chapter 11/12.
Date: 07/12/10 08:01 pm
Love it, please continue.... boy oh boy that maks :) and brandy oh so lucky.
Author's Response: Thank you, so much for reading and reviewing. I wish I could have some Maks, lol.
Date: 07/12/10 07:49 pm
Maks is a little too matter of fact about the situation and I don't like that. Brandy I understand where she is coming from. Running back to LA is going to change anything. Meet the parents! Wonderful chapter! You really captured Brandy's emotions well.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I agree; however Maksim is a pure alpha male (it's that Russian passion!) and he wants Brandy and he will do anything to get her!
I have studied every video of Brandy, watched her show FB, and listened to her music. I'm saying I know her, but I have tried to write her as I know her from observation. Thank you for R&R.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 07:07 pm
I think she should stay in NYC and send someone to bring her a Plan B. Then maybe have a real conversation with him regarding the phone call she overheard.
Maks loves her and needs to do more than sex her good to get that clear. But I do believe they need to have a crucial conversation before they are able to move forward.
Reviewer: Nmarie404 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/12/10 05:07 pm
I was a bit skeptic when I first starting reading this story but I didn't watch DWTS so I went on youtube and watched every dance and there is chemistry between the 2 and if only they did get together for real, that would be great.
I think Brandy should calm down and meet the parents. I luv Mak and his attitude the man is a Dom to the end
Reviewer: JJ Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 09:12 am
I want brandy & maks to be together. She should stay in NYC and meet his parents and they should get married.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback. Now let's see what is going to happen. Thanks!
Date: 07/12/10 06:28 am
I think she should go back to LA things are moving to fast just in case she is pregant and brandy needs to chill out the man wants her give him a chance off to bed now to dream about max
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 06:06 am
Loved the update. I think Maks is in love and feels Brandy is his soulmate and is willing to do anything to accomodate her but Brandy has trust issues and doesn't really seem willing to give Maks a chance. She's taking a walk on the wild side but it makes me wonder if she's using him and not serious about a relationship.
I think she should stay and work/wait it out with him. Meet his parents as friends. She shouldn't be running away from the situation/problems or Maks. She needs to communicate better with him. Hey, she should know that pregnancy is a risk when having sex. At least Maks is willing to make an honest woman out of her but she seems determined to destroy this relationship.
Author's Response: I believe Brandy thinks she doesn't deserve to be loved, especially with someone like Maksim. So in her mind she trying to destroy their realtionship, but her tender heart wants to let go and give it a chance. Thanks for your feedback. Now onto Chapter 11/12. Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/12/10 06:04 am
Love it!!! Well, I understand her panic on the issue, but she loves Maks and he loves her just as much. So if they are going to be parents or not, she needs to be full commit (heart, mind and soul).
Brandy and Mak need to meet each others people, so they can learn more about who they are and what they are about. It's good for her to see his life and for Mak to know what his people think of their relationship. I REALLY want Brandy to let Mak meet her daughter, to me, that's the biggest trust and committed act she can do.
GREAT JOB!!! Please post soon :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 05:44 am
I think Brandy should stay in NYC and meet the parents.
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 05:32 am
OMG brandy needs to just meet mak family i mean they are in love with each other and have already told each other why not let the family in on the love sooo please let brandy calm her ass down and stop thinking about past relationships and past hurt look to the now matter a fact look to the man you love which is mak i truly adore this wonderful story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/12/10 04:58 am
love the pics!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I finally figured out how to do it.
[Report This]Date: 07/12/10 04:13 am
Oh oh, hope she talks to him instead of making assumptions from an over heard conversation and running for the hills. I'm really liking this couple and hope they can make it work but it seems Brandy is intent on leaving him. She definitely has trust issues.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/10 07:14 am
i really liked the last chapter but am also very worried, why would she stay if she's upset with him and not confront him also he should have told her about what happened with erin but he said it best when he called her a child grown women confront a man not run away. keep it coming
Author's Response: I believe Brandy has alot of growing up to do, and who best to teach her; well Maks of course! Love your feedback, keep it coming.
Date: 05/12/10 10:17 pm
He should have told her, about being with erin !shm
Hope its not over between them
Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Only time will tell. Thanks for R&R. Reviewer: mekaky Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/12/10 05:44 pm
No, I don't think it over over for them...but this new bit of information that Brandy has discovered has certainly made things much more complicated for them...I really don't like the fact that Maks wasn't wholely honest with her about his relationship with Erin...even if it was only a fling for him...she did ask...and he wasn't completely truthful about what went down between him and Erin...I'm thinking that he probably didn't want to make her any more skiddish than she already is about trying a relationship with him...possibly confirming in her mind at least his 'playboy' image...now, Maks's little 'lie' of omission might have possibly cost him his one true chance of a life with her...
And I'm really not understanding Brandy's rationale for continuing her trip in New York with Maks if she really doesn't want to have anything more to do with Maks after it is over...I'm assuming that she still plans to go on sexing him and getting her freak on...all the while as she plotting to get him completely out of her life...that's kinda cruel...why not just confront him with what she knows...and letting him explain his side...and for her sake...I hope she's using and making him use protection...because if not...well....time will tell...
You've amped up the volume in this tale...oh, what a tangled web you're weaving...can't wait to read more...thanks for the unexpected update...short, but oh so good...
Author's Response: I love how you think. Only time will tell. Thanks for R&R. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/12/10 05:29 pm