No, it's not over. She asked if they were together like...together together and he said no...they only had sex once. People hook up all the time for sex doesn't mean they are in it like that. Erin just got attached. He obviously decided not to pursue anything further with her and Erin knows it. Should he have told Brandy that he and Erin had sex? If I was Max, I'm not sure if I would have or not because of her possible reaction. I will say that I can see how Brandy feels...she's probably wondering if he's really honest with her or not...his feelings or if she just another fling.
Author's Response: I love how you think. Only time will tell.
[Report This]Date: 05/12/10 04:34 pm
Brandy did ask Maks about his relationship with Erin and he should have told her that he hit that. Now this is Brand's excuse not to give Maks a chance. Brandy you are stupid!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/12/10 07:48 am
I like the way this story is moving along. I believe that Maks just needs more patience with Brandy. I'm hoping the both get what they want and soon!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/10 07:49 pm
I'm not a dwts fan but I do like Brandy and I saw Maks on Celebrity Ghost Stories and he was saying how he was hurt and they thought he would never dance again and he had to through therapy.. To make a long story short the therapist that help to heal his leg was he deceased grandmother who he never met.. Maybe that could be incorporated into why he feels so strongly for Brandy..
Just a thought.
Enjoying the story so far looking forward to this next chapter..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/12/10 05:43 pm
That was wonderful, I love when there is hot, butt naked sex in story. Maks is so hot, I would so be a cougar for him. Thank you for chapter 8, looking for the next.
Author's Response: Thank you, I do as well. I love him, I even follow him on Twitter! Thank you for R&R.
Date: 04/12/10 02:53 am
Now this is what I'm talking about...you're going beyond the physical and exposing their inner hearts...it is much appreciated by this reader...I love the complexities of relationships...especially new ones...and try as we might...it's hard to not bring baggage from a previous relationship into it...I'm glad that Maks and Brandy had 'the talk'...and now they both can see just how serious the other is about their growing relationship...can Brandy let go of her fears...is she willing to go out on that proverbial limb with Maks...I think Maks just needs to keep opening his heart to her and she will finally see just how serious he is about her and them...Maks has always struck me as a man of such traditional values...and I like how you describe Brandy as being almost 'innocent' when it comes to relationships...but I was a little put off by Maks calling her a 'little girl'...but I do realize it is probably because he's so in love with her that he can't see how she still so afraid to see him in the same light...she knows she loves him...but because of his career and the closeness of his relationships with his partners and him being in the public eye...she's afraid that giving him her heart completely could backfire on her...glad he went back upstairs and tried to apologize...Brandy is so fragile now and Maks needs to handle her feelings with kid gloves until she works through some of her issues...
Girl, I love this story and can't wait to see where you take them next...I've got my fingers and toes crossed that they can make a go of it...and don't worry about being totatlly 'accurate' in your depiction of these characters...this is a work of fiction that I'm definitely enjoying so much...please update soon...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your feedback has been so helpful for me. Please continue to r&r. By the way do you know how add pics and banners? Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/12/10 12:59 am
I liked this chapter because it shows that each character has flaws. They are not just beautiful people who make love and then profess love to each other with hopes of happily ever after. There's real work in relationships and it will take work to get to get to happily ever after. We got an inkling of Brandy's "hangups" as mentioned in this chapter and the last but Maks has some flaws too...he knows what he wants in a relationship...but does he has a temper? Or is just passionate anger? There was also insight into Maks thoughts/feelings for Brandy and why he just felt that their chemistry could not be denied. This is a fictional story and that's what's so great about it...because fans get what they want even if it doesn't happen in real life, lol.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/10 08:16 pm
Okay, I know I'm late to the party, but I have been reading along as each chapter has gone up...and I love it...I loved Team BranDMC and was devastated for them when they were so unfairly eliminated off of DWTS...this willl be the last year I watch that mess...it's become too political for me...and has forever tarnished the "entertainment" value of the show...but I digress, off my soapbox...
Love this story...I love your imagery...feels like I'm almost there with them as they experience this tale...but even though I absolutely heart the hot, hot lovemaking...I'm ready for the romancing and the courtship to begin...they love each other...so give us more of why they feel this way about each other...yes, we know they are incredibly attractive...but what makes each of them IT for each other...that's what I want more of...this isn't meant as a criticism of your writing...just a way to hopefully help you flesh out your story...because believe me...I couldn't have come up with a better story...you are a fantastic writer...just need the characters to be more fleshed out...I know it's difficult when dealing with real people...but I have faith in you...
I hope Brandy doesn't let her fears consume her and really just let go...let flow and allows Maksim a chance to be truly a part of her life....can't wait until Maks meets Seraii....
Great story...keep it coming...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 03/12/10 12:09 am
I have a few things to say about this story but I will start by saying that I am happy that you are writing it. I am a big fan of these two and reading this makes me excited. There are a few minor errors but those errors do not take anything away from my reading experience. I like the realistic aspect of reading this...their personalities even their mannerisms seem to be right on with these two just like in real life.
Now on to the story...you can tell that Brandy really cares about Maks on a deeper level than friendship...otherwise I don't think she would have broken her 6-year celibacy vow. However, she is really guarding her heart and I can definitely feel her on that. They said I love you to each other but I wonder if Brandy does not quite believe his feelings just yet. She knows that he loves her as a close friend but was she really hearing him when he said it in the bathtub? Maybe if he told her over breakfast in bed it would have sunk in a little more. I'm surprised but not surprised that Maks is pushing her for a relationship...I think he needs to wait until she is ready but at the same time Brandy should just let go and let flow, lol--they have already been intimate. Did either of them realize that they just had sex without protection? For some reason, I feel that they were caught up in the moment. What will this mean in the future? I guess time will tell as this story continues. I would like to see where their relationship will go...how will it affect their careers? Maks has overzealous fans (though some of his fans in real life wants him with her)...if the relationship gets serious how will his family in the states and back in the Ukraine feel? Her family? Ray J seems to know what's up as he and Brandy are close so I don't think that would be an issue. Then there is Erin….she is obviously in love with Maks. How far will she go to get him back? I would love to see how this all unfolds with your writing of this story.
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 07:55 pm
AWESOME!!! Loving this story. Hope Brandy doesn't jerk him around too long. Hmmm, wonder if all this sexing is gonna lead to a lil Maks???!!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 03:23 am
damn damn that was hot am not even going to say what am feeling
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/12/10 01:05 am
I loved chapters 6 and 7. Cant wait for the rest.......
Reviewer: Kareia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 07:36 pm
Great story. Can't wait until the next update.
Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 05:48 pm
damn this story is fantastic whho as soon as my bandwidth usage goes down on my internet service i will be back to leave my response to all the chapters !!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 04:43 pm
Funny, I don't normally think of Brandy as being sexy but you changed my mind. Of course who wouldn't be sexy with Maks in the picture. Love your story so far!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 04:14 pm
can't wait for more =)
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 12:43 pm
I just know that Maks does throw down like that and I want me some. Damn that was hot!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/12/10 09:03 am
Miss Nakia, I'd be happy to beta for you if you need it dear. Just drop me an email at sylvie.maye@gmail.com.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Miss Renee. I greatly appreciate you. I will send you ch. 8 by Thursday evening.
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 06:54 am
Ok I have read it and LOVED IT. Just one thing you need to beef it up with some padding (details). We feel like we know these people, now show us something MORE! Answer those ??? we all have. I know I have question add those ? to the story. Come on Gurlie :0). Need help? Let me know! If not still reading and LOVING
Author's Response: I feel you so much, and I'm trying to be careful, because they are 'real'. I have done so much research on them, watching all the interviews, reading both their blogs, that it can be a bit undaunting. Help a sis. girl help, I love all feedback. Send me an e-mail@ nakia_ray@yahoo.com. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 06:31 am
No need to fantasize now, she has the real thing in front of her.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 11:41 pm
can't wait to read more =)
Reviewer: meka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 09:51 pm
thank thank you it was well worth the wait please continue not be greedy but can we have another love making session keep it coming
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 09:33 pm
I thought that this was really good. Everything that the author wrote was so detailed and could picture every bit of it. I thought for a moment i was Brandy, (Lol). Im excited to read the next chapters! Kudos to the author.....
Reviewer: Kareia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 08:02 pm
I loved it, Brandy has Maks' heart. Great story, I love me some Maks!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/10 04:57 pm