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Title: Chapter 2

Aww how sweet  was that him telling her that he loves her and care for her. I like they build a friendship first before they went to the next level. I always be friend first  then lovers second.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/05/11 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, I didn't expect him to wait that long for her, though they did date other people. The kiss was sweet, and she does seem pretty innocent in the flashbacks. Makes me wonder if she still is, or if they're relationship changed her.

Oh, and I liked this.

 I could tell by the way she and most of the women in the party looked at me that my appearance got the Campbell's "umm umm good" seal of approval.

That was such a great line.

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/08 12:56 am

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