I liked this story! It was really sweet! Thanks for writing it!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/03/09 09:13 pm
this was a riveting and well written story. Thanks for making the characters come alive. I truly enjoyed it.
Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/09 06:56 am
this was a riveting and well written story. Thanks for making the characters come alive. I truly enjoyed it.
Reviewer: rosie rolle Signed [Report This]Date: 02/03/09 06:56 am
This story was amazing!! I read the whole thing in one setting, and just like all your other stories this one is brilliant!!
Reviewer: Redbird Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/10/08 11:08 pm
Great story
Reviewer: Erica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/09/08 08:04 am
I'm liking this so far.. (I read one of your other stories TROL on TST and I loved it.) so I know I'll love reading Bas and Ki.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/08/08 07:11 pm
Very interesting start. So I knew he was a player off the bat but damn---how big is this dude's head. Kayia was only 16 huh? I'm with Jordan, dude needs to back off till she's legal. But I did see a hint of something in there. She was throwing him off his game. That's good, he seriously needed it. Really liking this so far.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/08 05:38 am
Chayne, I'm only going to get 4 hours sleep 'cause my butt had to finish this story. And it was worth it! I love how you can write from a guy's point of view. The camaraderie between the characters, men and women, is wonderful. I'm so glad Bianca's crazy ass didn't do any more damage than she did to Bas and Kai. I just love Shopzilla! She was a hoot!
Great job. Look forward to more.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/08 08:28 am
OMFG!!! The peach talk got to me! I thought that was so sexy!
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/08 12:53 am
It's good they worked things out, at least for now anyway. Though I can't say I agree with laying most of the blame on Kaiya for the breakup, he knew how she felt about marriage, and blew up at her anyway. And finding the other girl...well, it takes two, that's all I'm saying. .
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 05:38 pm
I sat and read this tonite in one sitting ms chayne! Excellent. I got up one to change jakes diaper b 4 he went to bed and read it while i did it . I have been laughing and cryin all the way through. And shuddered at news bout bianca's crazy behind. Wow ten stars! Great read.
Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 07:25 am
So on one hand Sebastian's kind of an ass, way too full of himself. On the other, he's such an interesting narrator, I love reading this story from his perspective. The love scene was very hot by the way, I know why Kai's a bit sprung. He's definately a bad boy though. Wondering what happened to break them up.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 04:25 am
Wow, I didn't expect him to wait that long for her, though they did date other people. The kiss was sweet, and she does seem pretty innocent in the flashbacks. Makes me wonder if she still is, or if they're relationship changed her.
Oh, and I liked this.
I could tell by the way she and most of the women in the party looked at me that my appearance got the Campbell's "umm umm good" seal of approval.
That was such a great line.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/08/08 12:56 am
Okay, so Sebastian is kind of a player, got that right off the bat. And apparently he likes to live dangerously, he wasn't even phased by Kaiya's age.
This was a great start, excellent first chapter.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 12:48 am