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Title: Chapter 30

mmm me think that tavin is having his baby. i'm glad the sister talked about everything and it brought them closer together.

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Date: 21/09/09 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 29

well glad he told her how thing going down lol and that she sticking by her side no matter what that what you call a good man love it. i hope the mom burns in hell.

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Date: 21/09/09 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 28

i had a feeling that something was going on thank god she didn't get raped by that sick fuck . that what you call a very very sick mother to chose  a man over her husband he should pay for what he did.

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Date: 21/09/09 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 27

well how embarssing is that about to get your freak on and bam her comes mommey dearst and baby sis lol. that nice suprise taking her to see her faviorte singer nice.

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Date: 21/09/09 07:48 pm

Title: Chapter 26

ok love how he went over and kiss tavin let dude know she got a man that can get her any drink because he owns the place lol. what wrong with her sister? and why she wanted to come home early?

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Date: 21/09/09 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 25

yeah she said yes but of couse she would the man gives her great ograsams lol i would said yes to that only lol.  now that what you call a happy birthday.

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Date: 21/09/09 07:31 pm

Title: Chapter 24

ok lol classe tavin she going to move in with him but lay down the law first lol to funny. glad he deicde to marry her and like the ring he pick out. what the other suprise she has for birthday boy?

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Date: 21/09/09 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 23

ok love how they handle that ass hole man i wish i was connected to some family lol . it good he going to rot in jail and that she going to move in with him love the boss at her job nice  guy.

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Date: 21/09/09 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 22

so glad she had those shoes on and they should had let him killed the sick fuck but i bet he has better plan for his ass. love the story girl i have to read the rest of your work you got me hook now like a fin lol.

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Date: 21/09/09 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 21

omg that sick fuck is there please let C come find her and save her. love how tey ask his girl to marry him that so sweet.

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Date: 21/09/09 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 20

ok love the guys going to handle that sick sneaky basterd jard and glad they made up. lol i can't belvie the mom was going to send the sis to kick her ass to funny love the story girl you area great writer.

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Date: 21/09/09 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 19

im glad that she helping her friend out with tavin. ooo i hated jared i wish someone rip off his balls and shread them up or his family because poor. so sad what she went thu no one should go thu that.

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Date: 21/09/09 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 18

ok i get he upset but she didnt' ask the ass hole to pick her for his accouted. i hate people who started at some one race people are people and glad he told his boss offf they going to regeted letting him go. i hope the make up.

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Date: 21/09/09 04:22 am

Title: Chapter 17

i guess jared doens't understand when you mess with his woman you going to be in hospital or boby bag oh well nice knowing you jared lol. love how she told him off that was good.

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Date: 21/09/09 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 16

ok i so hated that guy i was hoping C man kick his ass in that club but he going to get that guy one day and it goinv to be over. Glad no one got hurt.

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Date: 21/09/09 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 15

ok that family to dam funny lol i love the all the sister brothers mom dad lol  she pick a great guy. i like the talked she had with his mother it was real not faked very nice.

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Date: 21/09/09 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 14

holy shit she black lol dam girl  i almost feel out my chair laughing so dam hard lol. but that family for you. i knew he was going to give her those shoes some way lol

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Date: 21/09/09 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 13

ok that guy lucky that tavin talked cameron of beating the hell out of him that ass hole. lol love the jokes i hated going to boirng partys it more fun going to the dentis lol. like the dress she was wearing. and his boys are right nick better do something big to when fee fee back.

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Date: 21/09/09 03:18 am

Title: Chapter 12

ok tavin and carmon are so cute together lol. i like how he holds her make her feel safe and make her feel like the most impotanted person in the world that is very nice. i think they still going to argu when they grow old together too lol.

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Date: 21/09/09 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 11

ok that sister had my ass laughing out loud lol wow but she has to procted her big sis that was sister do. i love the bond they have with each other most sister don't . love the story girl it funny as hell lol.

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Date: 20/09/09 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

well that was some hot hot sexy phone sex lol. he show know how to treat his woman lol. the friends are a trip lol but a good kind love the story girl. it make me laugh.

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Date: 20/09/09 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 9

well glad they got their act together and wanted to be with each other. they so cute togehter with the smart ass marks and the looks all of it . love the story girl and hope cameron meet the step dad and kick his ass.

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Date: 20/09/09 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 8

wow no wonder she couldn't trust mean that bastard i hope his dick rip off for what he did to her. glad cameron was there for  his lady love and dam the sex was off the charts lol that what you call some good loving.

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Date: 20/09/09 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 7

awww ok i just love camenon now he so sexy giving her a flower holding her kissing her making her feel like a queen i steal that man away from her lol her friend is right he needs to know all of her . love the story and thanks for the updated.

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Date: 20/09/09 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 6

ok i thought cameron was going to get a gun and shoot those guys dancing with his woman lol but glad he played it cool nice. it was to funny how trey told his boys to get out for his botty call lol that men for you to funny . love the story girl and the charcters too.

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Date: 20/09/09 01:31 am

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