Goddess I wish that really did happen. I loved him and her together!
Reviewer: theonlinestalker Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/04/10 12:52 am
I hope you eventually finish this one.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/02/10 06:26 am
i wished it happened like that
Reviewer: jadadominique Signed [Report This]Date: 03/01/10 02:01 pm
So now we see things from Keesha's perspective. Jason fell into a coma and woke up someone else. I can understand how hurt she would be, even though I guess it isn't his fault. But he does remember everything now, which is great! I don't know if she should forgive him so easily and quickly and he comes across as a bit...domineering, perhaps? I think I do have a right to be here. And you don't have to say anything. I came her to tell you I'm leaving in a few days and you're coming with me. I'm taking you home were you belong. You're going to marry me Keesha Ward and I'm going make you smile everyday for the rest of your life. Excuse me? He can't just go and reclaim his rights, he should beg for Keesha's forgiveness at least! Arrogant men...grr.
Great spinoff story from the original soap and has great potential to develop into something deeper. The ending is ambiguous which I think is great cause it allows the readers to draw up their own conclusion. Good job!
Author's Response:
THanks so much for your review!!!!
Jason always did have that arrogance that I hated...but I had to play it in there somewhere.
GH truly missed the ball on this couple. I'm so glad they still have so many fans.
I know I need to post an update or two. Hoping to do so very soon!
Thanks again.
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/09 06:13 am
Interesting start! I wonder what Jason needs to see Keesha for? It must be important by the sound of it by the way he's just turned up unannounced. Keesha doesn't seem too happy to see him for some reason, which is also intriguing but she's being very kind and gracious. Look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks again for you review!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
It's about time that Jason was the one that went looking for Her :)
I'm sure Keesha is happy to see him. She just can't let him know that. ;)
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/09 06:12 am
I just want to say love it! Do you plan on finishing the rest of the story?
Author's Response:
Hey There,
Thanks so much for the review.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
I do plan on finishing the story. It's been an extremely busy time these past two months, but I'm going to start writing again at the beginning of the new year:)
Reviewer: Rockie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/08 08:02 am
I happy he remembers, but that doesn't mean she should drop everything in her life and take him back. I think he should have to put in some work to really get her back.
Author's Response:
Hey There You,
Welcome Back!!!
Thanks so much for the review:)
I think the mixed of Jason Q and Jason M has made him even more arrogant. LOL
I don't this she should make it that easy for him either.:)
Hoping to update soon.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/08 03:03 am
And then she faints. :)
No seriously, this was really good, I love how he just stepped up like that, put everything on the table. More like Jason Q, less like the Morgan version.
Great chapter, thanks for updating this story.
Author's Response:
LOL:)
I'm really glad you like it. I wanted to write him as Jason Q with a few J Morgan Qualities. This story is really old so I'm changing a lot as I go along but I will def try to update asap.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/08 05:42 pm
I must say that Jason's feeling pretty cocky! He's so sure she'll just drop everything and go back to PC. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!!!! He is pretty cocky isn't he. I think it's the mix of Morgan & Q.LOL I will definitely try to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 14/08/08 07:41 pm
Ha! Ha! I love it! I like that he could just walk back in like no prob. This is gonna be a good one. I love jeshia!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. He honestly feels like there is no problem after three years...lol. will try to update soon!
[Report This]Date: 14/08/08 02:43 am
Wow so he remember everything about their life together and then tells her you are going to marry me like she had no choice and loving it. Something tells me she going to give jason a piece of her mind lol. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Jason is quite bold isn't he...lol Hope to update soon:)
[Report This]Date: 14/08/08 01:55 am
Good start. I like that Jason went to her. This is not a phone conversation, but a face to face one. I can tell it's going to be good.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!!!! This conversation is definitely a face to face must!!! :)
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 06/07/08 03:09 am
I hope you continue. I'm intrigued.
Author's Response: I will try to update soon:)
Date: 04/07/08 07:43 am
oooooooooooo so jason trying to win his woman back? Intersting I wonder what kessha has to say? thanks for the updated
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews. I wonder what Keesha has to say too:D
[Report This]Date: 04/07/08 05:08 am
Okay, you are killing me with these little Jason and Keesha snippets. You cannot stop there. What is he going to say? How is she gonna react? You said Keesha was seeing someone else. Is she just going to drop him for Jason?
Pleeeeease write more.
Author's Response: Lol:) I will definitely try to update soon. Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/07/08 02:45 am