I'm so excited!  Great start so far I can't wait to see Martha and Dean interact.  LMAO at Dr. Who and Martha's conversation and Dean always like his pie!  Can't wait for the update.

ummm, just so you know by the way, this is the story I will be stalking you for updates on, I just think it's only fair to warn you. . .

Author's Response:

Ahem...right...Okay, I'm working on the next one tonight, and it possibly could get posted sometime tomorrow...I think. Crap, I like this story so much, I dont' want to rush it. But Tuesday is very possible, depending on how much I like the finished product. :)

Thanks for reading this, and for the stalking. It's very motivating...:) Angel

Lilth and the Master oh dear.  Dang can't even get away from Ruby in a fanfic huh?  Great update, Sam and the Doctor are hilarious together.  Favorite lines from this chapter: 

"Fly away home wicked bitch from down under"

"That's kind of rich coming from you Mr. Doctor, no last name, just the Doctor."

Wow awesome update!  Okay first of all Donna wiping the invisible crumb from Sam's mouth when he hadn't eaten anything, hilarious.  I could literally picture the scene actually happening in my mind.  And yea Dartha action, I love the Doctor but he dropped the ball so I don't feel bad one bit.  And the introduction of Harkness makes me very happy!  And I knew the Master was way out of his league playing around with demon child.  Great update TBG!

Author's Response:

I don't know where that Donna scene came from, it just popped up in my head as something she would do. And Sam would let her, cause he's a sweetheart, and out of his element. And I was happy to provide the Dartha action, thought it was about time for a little touch and grab.

And Jack makes me smile even when I'm writing him, so I was happy to have him show up. And the Master...well, he's a bit out of his element as well at the moment.

Thanks for reading Greatodin, will update again soon.

My lord Dean is hot so very make you wanna slap ya mama (okay not really) hot.  Oh yeah forgot to comment on the part about the dad coming back, so it looks like he is a guardian angel, does he have the missing piece of the puzzle?  He called her Adriana I wonder what the significance of that is.  woo hoo, Jack found Martha, I am looking forward to the snarkiness between him and Dean.  And I love Sam coming into his power but eww Ruby when is Lilith going to come get her ass?

Author's Response:

Dean is hotnes and now he's buffed up a bit more....which god lord.  I'm praying for a shirtless scene, I need a shirtless Dean desperately. And Sam. Can't forget old Sammy. :)

Much more snark to come and Ruby will get hers in the end. I honestly just need a punching bag at the moment. And she's it.

Thanks for reading greatodin!

I'm sorry I would have written this review sooner except had to pick my jaw up off the floor and wipe the steam off my computer monitor hahaha.  That was so ridiculously hot.  The fact that Phillip gets turned on by Lexie's stethoscope was a little weird hahaha but even that was hot.  Nice nice update.

You know what I love this story, Lexie and Philip are hotness but I love how there is some backstory going on with them as well.  Lexie really needs to liberate herself, sleeping at the hospital, come on girl!  And how many times did her husband keep kicking her out, I wonder if she has self esteem issues to let someone bully her around like that.  Philip he seems to have some anger issues that maybe he needs to deal with, maybe it's just the age though, it's like he's rebelling just for the sake of rebelling.

Author's Response:

Hey GreatO,

I did want to have some backstory with the charactes, I feel like the show always uses them as soundboards for Bradys. Lexie's always betraying Abe in some way, and he gets to yell at her for a few months before he forgives her (cause he's such a good man) and lets her move back into her house. And then it starts over again.

Philip is pretty angry, he's had some bad stuff done to him, and he's done bad things to other people. I do plan on going into backstory a lot more in upcoming chapters, so a lot of that will be much more clear I think.

Thanks so much for reveiwing and for the stars!

Hmm, I'm not getting my update emails any more I guess cause I skipped right over this one.  I love this story did I mention that. Okay this Abe guy seems like a grade A jerk.  Phillip seems so secure in himself so it added an interesting layer to get a glimpse into some of his self doubt.  And I love the moment with the leg, very tender.  I think he's officially sprung if he wasn't before.  I like seeing Lexie get more aggressive but I wonder if she'll be back to square one in the morning?  Gread update TBG!

Author's Response:

Let us know if that keeps up, we want everyone to get those. It would suck if it stopped working.

Abe is a bit righteous on the show, though not necessarily a bad person. He's very right and wrong, black and white, and whenever Lexie messed up (and by mess up I mean sleep with other men) he was very nasty to her, and sometimes kept her son away. But since this is from Lexie's persepective, he is coming off as a tyrant, though I do plan on writing about what happened in their marriage a bit more.

Glad you liked the leg moment, I didn't want to not go there, and I wanted it to be kind of a bonding moment between them. And he is pretty much all about her right now. Lexie's changing a bit, slowly though.

Thanks so much for reviewing, glad you liked this!

Abe is a jackass, granted I don't know the full history but in this story, he's a jackass.  I love Lexie finally embracing her attraction to Philip instead of fighting it, and he got to live out his little doctor stethoscope fantasy which was DAMN hot by the way.  but I still sense there's something just underneath the surface that isn't so good.  And where is Lucas I miss him.

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a bit of a jerk isn't he? They pretty much had conversations like this on the show all of the time, bugged the hell out me. Glad you like the doctor smut, that was fun to write. And Lucas will probably pop up one more time before the end, just because I like him too. :)

Thanks so much for reading Greatodin!

Hahaha.  That was cute.  I haven't yet gotten into Any Given Thursday but that was a great taster.  I think the lady doth protest to much hahaha, Celine might as well give it up because it looks like Jake has already laid claim.

I'm glad Michael is there to calm her down because Juliana seems to operate a lot off of emotions and she doesn't stop to think before she acts.  I know that she loves her mom and she's protective of her but babygirl should really make an effort to get the full story before she flies off the handle.  And why isn't she eating, that's troublesome to me.  good update pinkrose!

Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for the review and the stars!! :-)  Yes, Julianna is a bundle of emotions right now, but she'll calm down.  Eventually!  I hope!  LOL!

She's okay with her eating.  When I was writing the story, it sort of became a joke between her and Michael.  Poor guy never gets to eat when he's around her. *grin*

Yes thank you this is what I've been waiting for.  I love how sweet and sensual that was all at the same time.  I love my AJ and my Keesha together though I can't help but wonder how hurricane Julianna is going to respond hahaha.

Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for your review and the stars!! :-)  I'm glad you enjoyed their kiss.  I love my AJ and my Keesha together, too! :-)  LOL at Hurricane Julianna. *grin*  I think she's gonna be okay with this.