Ok Ms. Pearl had me laughing and the comment about her falling back on the bed had me laughing with Sally!

OK this whole updt was packed full of action and  quite a bit of funny....I yelled I laughed and I yelled again..I loved it!

I cannot wait to see what happens when she gets to the Indians home....what is her abductor looking for and why didn't he kill her like they killed the others...this is getting so good.

I cannot hardly wait for more...good job sweetie...!!!

Hawtness sweetie. I watch the show on and offf. Is Bonnie really a witch. I knew she coud sense things. What is her relationship with the brothers.

I hope you do more fics around the series cause this wa soff the chain good!!

Ok that made me very sad..how sad for Michelle and Cam that her father is such a cad that he could not stay faithful to the woman he married and who loved him and his chikd like her own. People never know the affect these type of things have ona a child and sadly a child that had already loss one mother.

Excellent story sweetie..very sad though..but excellent! 

This story really makes my day!!

The beginning with Nikki and Sunshine, in bed just enjoying being together without the complications of their lives was so sweet and beautiful, I want that for them always. When Nikki was telling her the folk song and ended it with his wish just to be with her..was so incredibly sensitive and sweet..I almost cried. Please please please don't leave Nikki or Sunny devasted at the end of this wonderful story..they have such a beautiful special love for each other...I think Sunny may survive, wounded badly but Nikki would not be able to live w/o Sunny.

We all say, what a transformation Nikki has taken since meeting Sunny and he has but I think it is just the getting rid of the Nikki he had to be to make it in the business and prison to the real true Nikki he always was but could never allow anyone to see. Sunny just allows Nikki to be his true self, the self he would have become if there had been no prison or business in his life. The real Nikki that was hidden under the darkness. The darkness that had to give way because Sunshine (light) is always greater than darkness.

These two are so good for each other. Sunny is the ultimate nurturer and Nikki has never been nurtured or cared about like this before. Nikki is the ultimate protector, I know w/o a doubt he would die for Sunny and she has never had that before. They are just so good together!!

I love them when they are having fun together, they make me laugh and smile so much because I know they both need some happiness in their lives and these times they seem so normal. And I know thy both just want to be normal.

I want to hug Nikki when she ask him about things that are painful and would ultimately lead them down that very scarey area of his life that he is so fearful to share. Sunny is so careful with him to, not wanting him to experience any pain but knowing that eventually it will all have to be told if they really want a real relatiosnhip. Nikki knows it will have to be told also and I am happy he is not going to lie to her about anything but I have to admit I have as much fear about him telling her as he does. I am praying that he tells her before anyone else gets a chance to tell her. It will not be easy no matter who tells her the truth but it is much better coming from him.

However, if Sunny is light , she will not be afraid of the darkness that has trapped Nikki. She cannot live with it because light cannot exist with darkness but she can and I believe will, help him rid his life of it. It may not be easy at first but I think Sunny's love and light can get past and demolish the dark part of Nikki's life, if he allows it to be demolished and if they let him out!!

I am praying that Stanis witnessing his sons great pain and anguish over his fear of losing his Sunny an dthe remembrance of his own loving wife's reaction to the darker part of his own life, will enable him to be sensitive to the man he calls son. I am praying that Stanis is making the trip to give Nikki his freedom and allow him to run the legite businesses only so that he can live a real life with Sunny. I am optimistic because he said he is going to take care of both families and he considers Nikki in both families. Please let him bring good news and please don't let it be too late.

I don't know what else to tell you about how much I love this story..I do ...and with each update I love it even more. I can only think of one or two instances when I have been this heavily invested in a relationship. :)

I want so much for them both to be alright!! and together..if at all possible..together!!

Bravo sweetie...excellent as always!!

OK both men who know Sunny well say she loves Nikki. That makes me happy because Sunny is hard to read. I think she does love Nikki but will she stay I am really hoping she will.

I really want her and Nikki to make it. She is so good for him. She makes him a better man. He seems so vry nervous and apprehensive, unsure of himself without her reassurance.

Sunny is the boss, she is the life force of this family of sorts. Everyone else looks to her for guidance and support. They all need her and draw for her life force. Though she does get much more from Niki tham he has ever given any other human.

She taught her brother as well as her mom taught her excellent life lessons. She is teaching Nikki too..how to be a man and loving man..how to find the joy within and how to trust others..

I love Sunny. I want her Nikki and for them both to be happy. I hope Darla is gone for good. It was very interesting to hear tell Nikki how hard Sunny loves and how protective she is of those she loves. It even more telling is how a person has to make her fall out of love with them I am sure Nikki was taking notes he is not a stupid man!

Always my bottom line is happiness for Sunny and if that can be with Nikki all the better!!

It is exciting that this will span three different stories..I cannot wait for it all to unfold, Right now I am looking forward to see what will happen between the two of them.

Excellent excellent excellemt sweetie..I love this story!!

Well how can this end well..really...they are painted in a horrible corner. Either she stays with him with regrets and fear of the monster that lives beneath her man or she leaves him and he chooses to no longer live with the misery of life without her... What horrible choices ..what a very sad ending for these two that neither deserves.

Is Nikki a dangerous man..yes he is..would he ever hurt or put Sunny in danager...he would die first. Would this have turned out so severely bad had Sercei not butted into a situation that was absolutely none of his business..NO!!!

I even think if the gun was never pointed on Sunny..Nikki may have let Sergei walk away...and what if Sergei had killed Nikki...would she still be as distraught..I am just very sad about the way this is turning out.

So looks like no happily ever after for my kids and it really breaks my heart..though I never expected a fairytale ending...not after their beginning....and his lifestyle...I just did not want them to end up hurting...not after all the misery they both have had in their lives..it is very sad.

You can take your time with the ending and I will get my tissue cause I am feeling the tears already.

Excellent updt sweetie..sad but excellent!!

BTW..I do not feel sorry for Sergei in any instance at all..he is lucky to still be living!!!IMO!! He maks me sick..

Somehow I knew somthing was going to happen. It was just going to well. Peanut is a sneaky SOB, I think he was going to kill Jacob or set im up to be killed in Bed Stuy. If Jacob dies and Sunshine finds that package from Nikki in his apartment I am afraid od what may happen. For the first time I actually feel sorry for Jacob. He was about to try and actually clean up his life. Maybe he will make it.

I actually have come to really like the idea of Nikki and Sunny together. I know he loves her and she has really hlped chang him but I think sh reaally has fallen in love with him. I don't have a problem with that if it helps him be a bettr man and he allows her freedom.

I was all going to well, Sergei has a gril, Sunshine in love with Nikki and Jacob finally going to rehab, then this..I want to see where this goes but I have to admit I am a bit afraid.

I don't want to see the ugly side of Nikki..I know Sunny could not deal with it. Great writing sweetie.thank you for taking time from your vacation to give us an updt!!

Bravo Bravo Bravo!!

I am so happy she asked him to marry her and that they ended on a wonderful last note!!

I am also happy there will be more stories about these two and some of the people in their lives!!!Married and pregnant Sunny makes me smile so much...long as it is drama free I am happy..I can see Nikki as an expectant Dad now too funny!!

I loved this story so much..so glad the drought is over and hope it never comes back yours is a talent that needs to be shared!!Bravo!!

This story reads like one of the best movies I have ever seen. It is so full of wisdom, goodness and richness. You never want it end. The more I read the more I am drawn in to these people's lives. You want every good thing for them because they actually deserve it.

This chapter revealed so much. Now we know why Sunny is holding back her I love you. Based on what some silly woman said a long time ago..but Achan gave her some very good advice...not everything older people say is wisdom. You do have to trust , your heart and what you see. That fits them so well. Sunny has to trust her connection with Nikki to know how much he has changed and how much he loves her. She knows he does, in her heart she knows he has changed and is changing to be a better man because she has been the spark that ignited that change. She is the one person that has Nikki want to be a better man and he is really trying.

It is also amazing how much she needs him. How much she depends on him for her comfort,safety, peace and reassurance.  She knows he would never let anything happen to her or anyone she loved because he loves her that much. She knows he could not be her father, he would never allow her to give herself to annyone for his debt, I think he would die first.

Their relationship has come almost full circle. It is amazing how you have molded this relationship from something I found disgusting at first to something I find absolutely beautiful now. You are an artist. it just feels so natural..not forced or rushed or artificial but real. love relationship

It is so sweet to look back at Sunny as a child , how much she loved her brother and was his mom from the day he came home from the hospital. Her mother was right she is so full of love...how could you not root for Sunny!!

Segei I almost don't even want to mention. I just wish he would go away and never come back. He is a sick twisted person. I am always afraid of what he may do to our Nikki or try to do to Sunny;s image of Nikki. I want Nikki to tell Sunny everything so no one can use it against him to her.

I love Sunny and Nikki...just don't let them end up hurt..it would break my heart!!You are doing an incredible job with this story just incredible.!!

Nik

Ok I am loving this story..already!! I hate Nic but he is sexy as heck!!...Is he really a beast or will he give Sunshine the life she deserves...will he let her go to school as promised and will he let her go when the debt is paid...I know her family will be safe but what about her life!!

I have a feeling Sergei might find Sunshine a little too appealing and there in will lay another conflict...so many things to come..this is just the beginning but it is so very good!! and as much as it makes me cringe for a 30+ year old man to be sexual with a child of 18..Sunshine is much more mature than most 18yr old and she said herself ..she was not virgin.

I cannot wait for more sweetie..great job !!!!!

Ms. Sunshine is no push over weakling..I like that very much. She may be 18 but she is more mature than may 30yr olds. She knows he wil take her and it will either be on her terms or his..I like that she is making it on her terms.

I think Nik is so going to fall in love with our Sunshine but I also think Segei will also..it will be interesting to see who will win her heart and what they will be willing to do to capture it!

I love how you are weaving this story sweetie...it is excellent!!I can barely wait for more!!

There is something about the sacrifice Sunsgine is amking for her family that is very mature, brave but extremely sad. Even if she does develop feeling for Nikki and he gives her all the things she wants, it is by force not choice that this child is giving up her youth for the man almost twice her age. Nikki would be a lot sexier to me if Sunshine was 25 years old and this was her choice. That being said I do not see Nikki as the Beast as much as I see her self centered pitiful father as the Beast..that would allow his beautiful young daughter to sacrifice so much because he us not man enough to a real parent. I hope he redeems himself or mets the end he deserves.

I hope Benji grows up to appreciate all his sister is doing for him. He loves her so much and he apparently adores him and shes herself as his only provider and parent. She is giving up so much for him and her dad,

I do not see this thing ending well with Nikki and Sunshine because it is not starting off on equal standing. She is his captive with only limited feedom. I know even if she does not at some point he will be jealous and she may have to run,,I only wonder what will happen to make that a reality.

I just want Sunshine and Benji to end ths in good shape..I know there will be angst and fear but plz don't let this wonderful mature little girl end up on the bad end of all this..she deserves it least!!

I love this story sweetie...and you are doing an awesome job writing it!!