Girl I loved this story!! I hate it is over but there are so many more stories to be told with these folks.  I love the babies so much, I can't wait for them to grow up and hear more about them!! Brian and Nicole are teh sweetest cutuest young couple out there..just sweet!

I think I want Peyton story next that will be awesomeness!! Think about..:)

You did an outstanding job sweetie and kudos to you for getting done early and still putting out exceptional work! I loved it!!

Excellen excellent excellent!! I wish their story had turned out this way...I felt the anguish and desperation from both of them..but I also felt the need and lonliness as well....they love each other but pain and feear of pain was keeping them apart...it tore at my heart but I felt relieved and happy when she ageed to stay!!

I loved this..beautiful told by exceptional writer!!

Oh BM that was hystericallll!! Do you know how badly I needed to laugh!! It was sharp, clever, smart, exciting and darn funny!! I loved the characters and their occupations. I loved how the husband was so pre-occupied with his wife's body that he was not paying attention to anyone else in the room...I loved the wife was so bitchy then turned soft probably knowing it would get next to him...but how they both got together to off the bad guy...the conversation (you are the mater of natural, easy flowing, real conversation) was just perfect! I just loved everything about..even the length was not too long but not too short! Perfect!! Loved it sweetie..thank you for making me smile today!!

Author's Response: Hey neneburge! I'm glad it made you laugh. :)  I love these two and could probably write them doing just aobut anything. I'm glad liked it :)

OK I want to know the back story cause thsi was so interesting and good! It was more the smut..it was suspenseful and ubber sexy!! I never watched the soap but I recognize a hawt sexy couple..I really enjoyed this one sweetie..,..I just want more cause I am just greedy like that..great job!

Author's Response: Hey neneburge. Thanks for reading! Todd and Van are the couple that got me started so I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Ok I have to admit  I don't read enough family fiction ..shame on me!! But I am so glad I read this..it was sweet and ubber cute and reminded so much of my two nieces..one older and more serious ..the ounger very playful and creative...this was so sweet ...I really enjoyed it..I hope you write more!!great job!

Author's Response: thanks so much i really appreciate it! and the story's about my nieces. i love their whole sister dynamic so i just had to write about it.

Ok I LOVED it..I am such a sap for happy ending but this one did not come easy!! I relationship concieved in friendship and marriage of convenience but some how love found a way into their hearts!! Not easily though, it had to over suspicion and accusation but it did find it's way..I love this story sweetie  lot!!

I love your style of writing as well..so visual and emotional..I was so happy he said I love you too..it was as if I had read a whole series on them and had developedd feeling for them already..wow..fantastic job!!

More more more!! Taylor is going to make it hard on Matt and he deserves I have to say but it is painful to watch..lol!!

I think he is handling it well though he has a lot more apologizing and begging to do before he can break through all the hurt he caused her.

I am enjoying this sweet story ...I cannot wait for more!!

Matt Matt Matt...that is no way to behave to teh girl you don't because of your career!!

I think Matt deserves to be a little jealous and Taylor is doing him just right!!

She is too smart to fall for likes of Donovan, plus she really does still llove Matt but he needs to regain her trust and love..he gets no free pass after his behavior.

I hope he understands jealousy is only so cute..he needs to step up and prove to her he is truley sorry and ready to love and treat her the way he failed to do before!!

Love this little story sweetie..good job!

OK after reading the way he told her he was not going to marry her six weeks before the wedding I a not sure he deserves her, really!! Right I really dislike Matt...so we will see how the story progresses the good thing is I don't like Donovan either so...unless a wonderful man comes in the picture ..Matt might have a chance at winning me over rotfl!! But really that was pissy the way he hurt her with no explanation..really wrong..I don't know how you come back from that...he could not if it were me!

Author's Response: See that's the thing, can he come back from it?  I don't know... I'm so conflicted and I'm the one writing the story!

Humm that was a sorry A* excuse,,and sh ei sright..he knew her her whole life and let career and a racist agent tell him she was not good enough..she should be furious!!

There are a few pluses..he never dated or married anyone else..he pined away for her and he sent her flowers and cards but DAMN..he let his career ruin their life together..sad sad sad !!

Now Donovan all up in the grip...he is moving in on her while she is vulnerable..I really dont like him..I know it may not be fair but I just don't like him!!

We will see what happens from here.... 

Humm pretty much still don't like Donovan ..AT ALL!!

Angela should have slapped Matt I would hav efelt a lot better..lol!

I still think they need to be together...Matt and Taylor!! He made a huge mistake but it is not unforgivable!!

Well alrighty then...growm man came to play..leave the kids at home!! I liked that Mr. Matt..very much!! That was on point and Mat brought it home..he earned a lot of points with me ..I hope it helped him out some with Taylor!!Fingers crossed!!

Loving this sweetie...you are on a roll!!!