Penname: Megumi [Contact]

Real name: Audrey

Member Since: 02/07/08

Membership status: Member

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Hi, I'm Megumi and I'm just your regular reader who love reading about Tangeline and other fandoms. And now a writer too. Well, a so-call writer to be exact. :P




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One Life to Live 

 

Evangeline Williamson is a brilliant attorney with a pragmatic approach to life and who always tried to do the right thing when it came to her clients and her job.  But it all come crashing down after her most notorious client, Todd Manning, is found guilty and later exonerated of a crime he didn’t commit. Her career and reputation gasping at death’s door, Evangeline accepts Todd’s offer to become chief counsel for Buchanan Enterprises, a company he’s recently acquired through a hostile takeover.  

The pay is substantial and the perks keep coming.  But there’s no client more demanding than Todd Manning and two years later Evangeline has had enough of living his chaotic life instead of her own. She tells him as much and gives him two weeks notice to find a replacement, forcing Todd to realize just how desperate he is to keep her in his life—not only as his attorney but as the woman who’s stolen his heart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Movies, All My Children, One Life to Live, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Kerri Reynolds, Lily Winters
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15412
Read Count: 15939
Published: 23/12/08
Updated: 14/05/09


Title: Chapter 2: One

Great first chapter Black. Poor Evangline, just wanting to get some and Todd just keep on blowing up her phone. Funny scene too. Aww, Evangeline decides to quit working for Todd when her date bail on her. But we all know that isn't going to be the last of Todd and Evangeline. I loved your flashback Black with setting-up the events of how Todd and Evangeline became employer and employee. I can't wait to see how Todd keeps his lady lawyer besides him. Thanks for writing this Black. :)

Author's Response: Hey Megumi. So glad you liked it. :-)  Will update soon.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/08

Title: Chapter 3: Two

LOL!, this chapter had me rolling!!! Okay first of all, I love how you are writing Neil and Kerri in this story. They are so perfect for being the support system and good friends to Todd and Evangeline during their 'dilemma'.  The banter between Todd and Evangeline is just going to heat up as this story goes along. Todd had me cracking up with his comments about Ryan and there goes Todd being very sneaky about getting someone to replace Evangeline. I can't wait to see the next update Black.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi. So glad you liked the chapter. I'm really enjoying adding Neil and Keri to the mix. They'll be very helpful in the longrun.  And yes, Todd is sneaky.  What else is new. LOL

Thanks for reading. So glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/01/09

Title: Chapter 5: Four

Black! this chapter was just so so good and hot. Goodness, Todd is a trip and just so naughty. But I believe he just release another side of Evangeline with these games. Oh dear and let the games begin. 

Todd and David scene just rock and we finally see why Todd is doing this to Evangeline. He wants Evangeline for himself. Aww, but he sure is making things hard isn't he? But we are talking about Todd Manning. LOL 

Ladies night was fun and Kerri is so funny. I love her as a friend for Evangeline. Oh! I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing Black and great writng again

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/09

Title: Chapter 6: Five

Yay! we got an update and it was well worth the wait too. I thought it was so funny and evil of Evangeline to get Todd back with her hot suit, but it did do the trick and then some. ;) Oh, I'm so glad to see Todd was feeling bad at what he did to Evangeline the night before. You can clearly see that they are so in love, but neither have been open enough to say so. Todd looking at Evangeline over her business meeting was classic Todd and the ending was so sweet and hot. Todd saying he's sorry and then kissing Evangeline. *sighs happily* Yet, we need more! I look forward to the next chapter.

 Btw, Todd treating Lily as dead weight to so great to read. :LOL:

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/09

Title: Chapter 7: Six

I knew all that built-up tension was going to lead to an explosive love making between Todd and Evangeline. Now that was so hot and lovely too. Yeah, Todd was right. it sure was X-rated in what he had planned for Evangeline. I'm so glad that they finally 'work it out' :lol: Kerri, Neil, and David rock in this chapter so much. I need friends like them. I kind of figure that this lovely story was coming to a close, but a great close I must say. I can't wait to see how it ends. Great as always Black.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

When the time comes and you find yourself at a crossroad... who will you be... what will you do?



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live, Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6804
Read Count: 16553
Published: 21/01/09
Updated: 30/03/10


Title: Chapter 2: A CELL CONFESSION

Okay I didn't see that coming. You must continue. You can't leave things hanging like that!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/02/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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Boy Meets World Story featuring Angela Moore and Shawn Hunter.  The story follows the events of 'The First Girlfriends' Club' episode. The night of Valentine's Day after being kidnapped by three of his exes, Shawn explains to Angela that he thinks they should change their relationship and be friends. Realizing that he was tricked, Shawn has a change of heart. But is it too late?  Will Angela give love another try, or does one of the ex-girlfriends succeed in her plans to keep them apart?



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17816
Read Count: 9910
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 05/02/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

First of all, I'm so glad to see you posted this story here Reese. Of course it was great. Shawn and Angela was so sweet. I love how they work out their problem. You know what, Shawn and Angela show so much maturity than kids their ages. I should know because I went thur those ages. :lol: It was so nice to read about them when they were cheated on the show. Thanks for writing this piece Reese and I can't wait to read more of your works here in the Chamber. 

Author's Response: Shangela love all the way!  lol  Thanks Stormy. 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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A Boy Meets World, Shawn and Angela sequel which takes place two months after “I Do Love You”.  Upon discovering that his daughter is in love with her new white boy friend, Angela’s father, Master Sergeant Alvin Moore, meets Shawn for the first time.  However, the good impression Shawn makes doesn't last long. Consequently, Angela and Shawn learn that while breaking up may be hard, staying together is even harder to do.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Angela Moore
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Made For Each Other
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60536
Read Count: 105924
Published: 08/02/09
Updated: 17/02/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh Reese, this chapter was so good! Shawn and Angela are so cute together. :wub: I feel for Cory and Topanga though. Maybe they can work it out later. I love Shawn and Cory talks. It so refreshing to see friend being real with one another about life lessons. Man, my time at high school wasn't that interesting as this story ir. :lol: Great job Reese and I look forward to the next chapter

Author's Response:

Aren't Angela and Shawn adorable?  As for Cory and Topanga, they're communicating at all because of Topanga's hurt feelings.  Let's hope they can work it out.  lol 

I loved Shawn and Cory's friendship on the show.  They were fairly even-handed with dispensing good advice to each other.  

Oh dear, I don't even want to think of my high school years.  I was so shy and introverted. Thank goodness some things do change in the course of time.  lol

Glad you're enjoying the story.  Thanks for reviewing. 

 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Reese, I love these two updates. Shawn and Angela was smoking in both chapters. I really want to thank-you for telling Shawn/Angela story in such a beautiful and sexy way. Gawd, I love Cory but he's messing with Shawn love life too much. :lol: Man, though St. Moore is being too overprotected, that a real daddy for you when he loves his baby girl so much. I loved both updates and I can't wait to see the next chapter too.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the Shangela hotness!  Poor Cory just can't catch a break, can he, but then again, neither can reformed bad boy Shawn.  Sergeant Moore really lit into them, and given the circumstances, his reaction is understandable...for the moment. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/02/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, Reese that was so good. Oh poor Shawn. First he had to stop his desire to be with Angela in order for them to not have sex too early, then he had to do the right thing in calling her father so in order for Angela and him to be together. Yet the way he did it cause Angela to be mad at him. Angela's and St. Moore relationship is one of the most interesting father/daughter duw I have every seen. Part of me is very angry at Angela's mother because she could as least stay intouch with her own daughter. Ugh. Plus most of Angela and St. Moore problems some from what happen with Angela's mother too. Angela is a brave girl, that is all I can say when she snuck into Shawn's room. Hot action right there. I'm looking foward to the next part soon Reese.

Author's Response:

Shawn is really evolving. 

Angela and her father have a lot of layers underpinning their relationship. We only touched on it here and it was still deep. 

I think being raised without her mother during her formulative years made Angela more independant.  So going to Shawn was not out of character for her although she doesn't seem like the rebeillious type on the surface.  lol

The expurgated love scene was a little warming, wasn't it?   :-) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/02/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay, the update is here. Reese, you had me scared at what Shawn was going to do after what Angela said about Ted. I know Angela was mad at Shawn, but that was hitting below the belt. Good thing that Shawn has so much in love with Angela that he couldn't even cheat on her even if he wanted too. I love Angela and Topanga talked. Topanga made Angela see how wrong she was about Shawn and her relationship and Angela made Topanga see how she was hurtin Cory too much now. Shawn and Angele making-up at the end was so sweet. They needed this blow-up to show them how much they are in loved with each other. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Great job

Author's Response:

I was scared too about what Shawn was going to do.  You can plot a story out but these characters don't always do what's planned for them.  I'm just relieved that he was able to stop where he did. 

Poor Angela.  She's clearly not thinking right now but acting on hormones and emotion.  Except the emotion is one of anger and revenge directed toward her father and love of Shawn that's making her want to take that next step.  Shawn called her on it and was right to do so. 

Love the friendship between Angela and Topanga.  Even in the show, I liked how Topanga finally had a friend in Angela like Cory had in Shawn and vice versa. 

Love when Shangela make up.  I had lots of fun writing that.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/02/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ohh! great updated Reese. I really emjoyed this chapter. I loved the fact that Shawn was trying to play in the games of Alvin in order for Angela and him make it for the future. After a live that Shawn has lived and for him to want the best for Angela and not let her lose her relationship with her father is something special I :heart: Shawn.

Damn, I know Ted wasn't no good. I'm glad my thoughts didn't lead me wrong. Slimeball for sure.

Hmm, I sense that Alvin has something important to talked to Angela about, but holding off to tell her now. I wondering what could that be? Great update as always Reese and I looked forward to the next updated.

Author's Response:

Shawn has been maturing nicely during this whole saga.  I'm proud of him too.  For a guy with little or no real parental direction during the course of his life, he's making some pretty awesome decisions with the help of his older brother, Jack, who's had much more guidance than Shawn and examples to follow like how Jack's successful businessman step dad conducts his business.

Ted was a slimy slimeball Ted turned.  He really cared nothing for Angela as was it seemed in the beginning. 

Alvin and Angela definitely need to talk.  I just hope what he says is worth hearing. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.   

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/02/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww, what a perfect ending. I know I missed some BMW stories, but I didn't even know that Shawn had a drinking problem. I'm so glad that Shawn seek Cory out for helped, yet Shawn knew that he had to get over his problem by himself in the end. Cory and Topanga got back together. I so enjoyed them in this story. St. Moore is okay with me. He knew he maded a mistake about Shawn and that loser Ted.  I'm so glad that he set-up for him to go on the prom together. In all this was a great story Reese and thanks for writing it. d

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the ending.  I wanted to do something that I hope came off as a little unpredictable.  If you liked it, then I succeeded. 

Yes, Shawn has a problem with drink.  It's inherited from his father.  If I continue to write for them, which I probably will, 'cause I love this couple, you'll see reference to this frailty of his. 

Cory and Topanga.  I always thought that Topanga really thought that she was better than Cory.  Nothing overt, but there is one episode when she was breaking up with him where she alluded to how many guys wanted her like Cory had no one wanting him.  I understood what she was saying but I wanted to use my take on that in this story.  It, to me, made them more interesting.  As I've mentioned, if I do a sequal, and I probably will, this too will be a reoccuring theme with Cory and Topanga.

Sgt. Moore finally woke up.  It took him being hit over the head with indisputable evidence, but I give him credit for not being a complete bonehead and ignoring that too for the sake of pride.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.   

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/02/09

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

A one shot conversation between Todd and Evangeline if she ever wakes up from her coma. Repost with paragraph breaks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2890
Read Count: 2646
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 09/02/09


Title: Chapter 1: One Shot/REPOSTED with paragraph breaks

Though I hate everything that has happen to the show since Evangeline was put in a coma, I got to say that this one-shot was really good. Great take on all the mess that has happen since Evangeline was in the coma. Thanks for writing it.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/02/09

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Their love affair was never destined to go on for a lifetime - his father made sure of that outcome. Pregnant and alone Celia found comfort in the arms of Joseph who became a husband to her and a father to Joshua...the only man she could place her faith and trust.

Circumstances change and she had to seek out the one man that still had a part of her soul. How would things play out and how would it affect those around them?

Dedicated to: Megumi, Brown_Mocha, Sweet Pea and Robin



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 59634
Read Count: 76933
Published: 09/02/09
Updated: 04/06/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh Goody!! this is so gret Chocolate!! Finally we get to read Celia and Jonathan story. Wow, so many emotions going on in this story. I really can't root againstt Joseph because he was there for Celia and Joshua, but we all know the Celia's true love is for Jonathan. Oh, Jonathan wife is a trip. I believe she is not in love with Jonathan, I believe she is al about making a name for herself. Joanthan and Celia in the same house together and Celia's husband is out to sea..... Oh this is going to be very interesting. :D Thanks for writing this Chocolate and great cast too.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

I intentionally made Joseph's character in this manner because it would have been easy casting him as a mahogany camp worker...those men were only fathers in name since - because they were away for so many months they never really got the opportunity to connect to their wives or children.

Come on M...Amy must have been in love with Jonathan at some point in their marriage...why wouldn't you think so...;)

You have quoted some scenarios but there are others to think about...stay tuned to my updates...LOL!!!

I'm glad you liked the cast. Of course Kimberly Elise, Johnny Depp and Christina Ricci were perfect because they did period pieces but my concept of Celia's family was hard to put together...probably using the wrong search engines...LOL

Thanks for the great review!!!

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/02/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Oh great chapter Chocolate. I see that Jonathan and Celia are fighting their attraction for each other, but for how long? I can see were this is heading, I just hope nobody get too heartbroken to the out come. Keep it coming Chocolate. :)

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

Well you see better than the author does...LOL!!! This story can lead down so many roads and I'm playing sort of a game with myself when it comes to the outcome. They are attracted to each other but Celia's world is safe for her right now. There is nothing wrong with her marriage because Joseph is a supportive husband and was there for her in a critical time. Jonathan isn't happy with much of anything in his life but does that mean that attempting to be with the love of his life is the answer...what will this do to her life? Questions...questions but we shall see...;)

By the way thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Reflections

Oh wow, this was such a deep and heartbreaking chapter. I see that bitch Sara was not only a bitch to Drake, she was one to Jonathan as well. Oh, I see that Jonathan is losing his desire to be stay married to Amy more and more, while Celia is set in her feelings that she need this job in order to make it in the world, though her feelings for Jonathan continue to be a present in her senses. Great updated Chocolate and thanks for the birthday wishes!! :)

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

Sara is my favorite sister...LOL! The Bay is such a small settlement that these socialites keep bumping into one another. If you were Jonathan would you want to stay married to that shrew when the love of your life is around you everyday...think about it carefully...;) Amy is such a female tyrant on her own. Of course Celia has her own complications.

My older brother's birthday is March 2 and he is way cool. He can make you laugh so hard even when he is being ultra serious. I believe you have that same type of personality. I hope you had a great birthday and thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great update Chocolate. I love that Jonathan when out and spend time with he friends. He needed that. I'm also glad to hear from Joseph. I see he is making grounds from the captian. I hope it will be good for Joseph. Jonathan father is coming back and I know that will not set well with everybody involed in his meaniness. I have to laugh at Jonathan and Amy and then I wanted to hit Amy for calling Sara name out. Jonathan had the right to go off on her and defend Celia. Aww, Celia and Jonathan are reconnection. I can just see that things are going to be the same for them anytime soon. Great as always Chocolate.

Author's Response:

Hiyah Megumi,

Yeah Jonathan usually retreats to his friends when he and his wife have 'issues'. It sure won't sit well with everybody when Mr. Mean returns especially Celia. For some ladies the best defense against a man in a war of words is to stick him with something that sends an immediate chill up his spine...;) Clearly she doesn't know anything about Celia and could care less if it did. Reconnection is that a good or bad thing? hmmm...LOL!!!

As always M..thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/03/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Sorry it tooke me so love to review. Amy gets on my nerves. I knew she was going to try something,  You could just tell about her. What is it going to take for Jonathan and Celia to break from their outer selves and give into their love for each other. YEt, I'm loving this slow build-up Chocolate. It just wonderful. Great updated Chocolate.

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

No problemo Megumi...Got to love Amy and her plans...LOL!!! A birdie told me that slow pace is good..;) Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/03/09

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Bravo Chocolate, Bravo!! Oh it's the end? But it was such a great ending too. I had thought that the storm of Joseph and Andrew was going to be longer, but I'm glad it wasn't. Now for Joseph to give all his love away for Joshua because he couldn't have Celia tells me that he only love the boy as long as he had Celia. I'm sad to read that, but it was best for them to end things and I'm sure he is with lady love at the sea anyway. As for the old fool Andrew. Good riddance. LOL @ Sara not getting Jonathan and her husband setting her straight. Oh I'm so happy for Jonathan and Celia. This was a great story Chocolate. Thanks for writing it. :)

Author's Response:

Hey Megumi,

You must see all the loose ends involved. Sara and her husband. Andrew walking away maybe recruiting..hmmm...Don't you get that it has sequel written all over it. Hope I have the guts to write it...:) The scope of the story is in my brain but I haven't put pen to paper therefore it won't be written as yet. Working more on that Tangie ;) I'm always grateful for all your support M!

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/09

Rated: 17 and older
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Evangeline Wiiliamson lays in a coma after an attack by a white supremacy group.  Todd Manning wants to take her for an unorthodox treatment that may possibly increase the chances of awakening the sleeping beauty.   However, her family has barred him from her side and refused his offer of help.  As Evangeline runs out of time, Todd decides that drastic times call for drastic measures and audaciously takes matters into his own hands, believing in his heart that there are just some risks that are worth taking.  


Meanwhile, a mysterious Asian, who unwittingly stumbles onto the latest and possibly the most outrageous of Manning's schemes, intervenes, but the fiesty younger Williamson sister, Layla, isn't exactly grateful for his "assistance".  Stalwartly fighting her fear of the stranger, she eventually manages to turn the tables on him.  Yet when freed from his clutches, she can't help but wonder who this mystery man is, what his role is in the "scheme" of things and why she can't seem to get him out of her mind.


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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 316741
Read Count: 34355
Published: 18/02/09
Updated: 08/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Principle Cast

Oh yes! This story is finally here. Now I get the chance to commnet on that cast. Great choices all around Reese. And the banner kick so much ass. TBG has done it again. Thanks for finally posting this great story here Reese. Now on to the chapters :D

Author's Response:

Well, hey there, Stormy.  Although I'm doing some spot editing to the story, yes, it's finally here.   I adore TBG's banner.  It totally sets the mood I was going for and which, of course, is intergral to the story.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/02/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Wonderful first chapter Reese. You can just feel the pain that Todd has been through since Evangeline's accident. I never seen Todd in such a bad place. Finally Vicki got a clue to her brother's pain and who really has his heart, Evangeline. I loved the idea of Todd rescuing Evangeline and trying to fight for her life instead of letting her just waste away in her 'prison'. Something tells me that Todd is going to be very successful in getting Evangeline and saving her. Great job as always Reese.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that Todd's pain came through.  He's been through a lot which we never got to see on the show. 

Vikki in this story is going to be a revelation.  Yes, now she actually has a clue to where her brother's heart lies. 

Can anyone not love alpha Todd "The Freakin' Man" Manning?  <3

Thanks for reviewing.

 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/02/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Oh, this chapter was so heart-pounding and great. I love how Todd got Evangeline out of the clince and to Switzerland. I so enjoyed how you described Todd first glance of Evangeline when he and his crew was moving Evangeline. It was so sweet and heart felt. Todd and Dr. linder scenes were great. This was my favorite thoughts that Dr. Linder had.

Obviously, Evangeline Williamson was a very special woman to engender that kind of love and devotion in a man who wasn’t yet her husband. 

He has no freaking idea of how much that statement is true to Todd 'freaking' Manning.

Oh Todd standing by Evangeline while she is going through her treatment was just wonderful. Todd's memories of needed Evangeline was right on point especially when he thought about their kiss at LTM. The second kiss that rock Llanview to it's core. You know that their kiss was so hot if Todd still gets exicited about  thinking about it after so much time has past when it happen. Beautiful chapter Reese. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Stormy.  I hardly know what to say.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

Yay!! Evangeline is awaked! I loved how you brought Evangeline back to the conscience world. She thought that Todd was in trouble. That is so Evangeline like. You really captured all of Todd emotionals in this chapter. From being doubtful, to getting back hopeful again, to unbelieveable happiness and gratefulness that Evangeline woke up. This was my favorite parts of chapter 3,

For the next several minutes, Todd talked her, caressing her cheek as he spoke. He felt her hand moving on his side. 

“Todd—“

“No, don’t talk.  Just try to—”

“I can...see,” she said indistinctly.   Her voice was weak but stronger than before.  “But...too close.”

Instinctively understanding what she was trying to say, Todd moved his head away and quickly opened his eyes.  He stared with unabashed awe at the sight of the most beautiful brown eyes staring back at him.  Uncontrollable tears of joy sprang into them. He released an audibly shaky breath and pulled her to him.  He buried his head in the curve of her neck. 

“Evangeline. Thank God.”

“Never thought...I’d...hear you...thanking...God,” she quipped hesitantly.  She felt hot tears on her neck and his body shaking against hers.  She raised her hand to his head, softly stroking his hair.  “Don’t...cry, Todd.”

That was just so beautiful and sweet. Great updated Reese. :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Van waking up is possibly my favorite chapter.  And that scene my favorite in that chapter. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/02/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Another great chapter Reese. So Evangeline does not remember the boy. Excellent. As you can see, that Evangeline's relationship to the clown was so bad that Evangeline memory block it out. *grins evily* Aww, don't you just love Todd in this chapter. You can so tell that he just wants the best for Evangeline and fighting his desire to be with Evangeline before she gets well. I'm glad the Vicki gave Jessica some clue to Todd's heart. One thing that bug me about Todd's family was that they would always push Todd to the faithless trick, yet they never tried to seek out what was really best for Todd. Thank-god he did that on his own. Okay I'm worried about Todd getting in trouble about taking Evangeline away, but I have faith that things will work out fine in the end. Thanks for posting this chapter Reese. :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought it would be realistic if she had some memory loss, not total.  She's been out a long time, and it was due to chemical poisoning.  So I think having partial amnesia was plausible and not to trite.

Todd is really trying to be a good boy.  This is what we saw in his evoluation after the execution and duriing his friendship and growing romantic relationship with Van.  So it's just the logical continuation of that maturation process.  To put it simply, someone else is more important than he is or even what he wants. 

Yeah, Viki and Jess/Tess are being written thus far being true to how they were on the show in those days.  However, Viki, I think, has less stake in the Todd and Blair relationship then Jess does concerning Van and the Vegas as I mention in  a response to Pashmina. 

Yes, Todd's in a world of trouble, but he took a risk. We'll see how it pays off for him thus far. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/02/09